FF:Jo Hua Usey Bhool Ja:Ch13(Epilogue)Pg:78,Question Pg83

Aazeen02

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Posted: 12 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: shreyalvashni
First on to like cmt ASAP

Thanx shreya...😃 Waise, what is your real name? Shreya or Yashvi?

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 12 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: niniborn2rule
a straight away no from db...well tht was expected..liked the chapter aazeen do continue soon...

Thanx Sayani di...😃 Yeah Db ne manaa kar diya...😆... Small separation coming up...😉

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 12 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: turags
Read chap on my phone..on vacation...will come back n reply..but its a good chap...liked Jen n ashu convo..

Tc..happy Christmas!!!

Thanx Suja di... Well don't you feel, Jen & Ashu's convo was actually, your n mine convo?😉

Enjoy your vacation... & BTW, finally, aap gayi kahan???😉😆

Will wait for your reply...😳

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: shreyalvashni
That was really nice

Thanx Shreya...😃... But, baby, kuch zyada hi chota comment nahi tha?

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 12 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: tarin292

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nandinibose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#326

beautifully written. really liked the convo between ashu n the doc.

waiting 2 c how ashu-nidhi convince DB.

thank u n pl update ASAP😊

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Aazeen02

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: nandinibose
beautifully written. really liked the convo between ashu n the doc.
waiting 2 c how ashu-nidhi convince DB.
thank u n pl update ASAP😊

Thanx nandani...😃... Convincing DB is a very nice process... Just wait n read...

Will try n update soon...😃

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ssktlk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#328

ITs a superb chap Aazeen. Loved the convo between ashu and DJ, so thoughtful, practical and touching. Hats off to you for writing such a sensitive issue at such a young age. That shows maturity in your thinking. Very well written.👏. Can't wait for the next update.

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VIDYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#329

interesting progress in the story.developing trust btn Ashni can be seen nicely in this chap.

next chap kab milega?

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sshirley

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Posted: 12 years ago

#330

Aazeen really too good - frankly, i feel that every update is better and has more depth than the previous one.

The best part is the convo. between Ashu & DJ. so, now even if DB does not agree, Ashu will marry NIdhi at any cost - warna N ka dil toot jayega ek baar phir se and as per DJ, thats simply too dangerous for her?

And ye kya bola DJ ne Ashu ko - door nahi jaani paas nahi aana - hehehe (okay okay just kidding)

But seriously, i appreaciate the way DJ makes Ashu uunderstand everything...beautiful, although I know ki Ashu did not this, i.e. agar DJ ne nahi bola hota to bhi he would have been understanding and would have waited till Nidhi was ready...

This is the best part of Ashu DJ convo:

AND!!! Don't forget to mail me your KIDS-TO-BE 's pics... That would be the ultimate result of my hard work...!!!

Ashutosh gave a timid laugh & with a final hand shake, went off...

So, when is the next part coming up?

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