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Bhanu

@Cherishh

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Emotions have been really nicely put out.

Dr. Yadav's suggestion was nice...but I think Ashu should fall in love with her again and would love to read that journey...and of course he recollecting his washed out memory too...as that will make their bond much more stronger.

The best part was Ashu starting to feel, which is still unknown to him, like, not to hurt, comfort or...for Nidhi..

All in all nicely balanced part with all things

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hilarious44

@hilarious44

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Hey...

Sai this OS is so so well written...👏

So emotinal n very touching.😭.

Brilliant job..👏.

Plzzz ashu ko jaldi theek kar do..😭..

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menaka

@ariyadasa

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

for the quick update

Superb chap sai

So sensible and emotional chap
please don't make them separate . Like to see how Nidi struggle to get the memory of Ashu back in more chapters with romance and emotions

Awaiting for the next up date

Edited by ariyadasa - 12 years ago

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saibanu

@saibanu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Cherishh
Emotions have been really nicely put out.

Dr. Yadav's suggestion was nice...but I think Ashu should fall in love with her again and would love to read that journey...and of course he recollecting his washed out memory too...as that will make their bond much more stronger.

The best part was Ashu starting to feel, which is still unknown to him, like, not to hurt, comfort or...for Nidhi..

All in all nicely balanced part with all things

Thank you so much , yes- even I want ashu to fall in love with nidhi again...same time his recollcetion of lost memory should start ... I dont want to drag too much here and put them in misery ...!

Thank you once again , I am glad you enjoyed it 😊

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saibanu

@saibanu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: hilarious44
Hey...
Sai this OS is so so well written...👏

So emotinal n very touching.😭.

Brilliant job..👏.

Plzzz ashu ko jaldi theek kar do..😭..

Thank you so much , yes ashuji will get better with each passing chapters 😊

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saibanu

@saibanu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: ariyadasa

for the quick update

Superb chap sai

So sensible and emotional chap
please don't make them separate . Like to see how Nidi struggle to get the memory of Ashu back in more chapters with romance and emotions

Awaiting for the next up date

Thank you dear ...It really means a lot to me , dont worry I will not seperate them ...you can trust me on that 😊

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saibanu

@saibanu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: niniborn2rule
update?

Already Started writing , By today evening I will post next chapter 😊

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shah1485

@shah1485

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Wow Saibanu just fantastic u r a superb writer

As said before wich the KTLK team read some of the FF and try to put some happiness in our real KTLK show

Anyway hats off to u again enjoyed them all

😃😃👏😃😃👏👏👏😃😃😃😃😃

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saibanu

@saibanu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: ssktlk
Touching story. Written beautifully

Thank you so much 😃

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saibanu

@saibanu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: shah1485
Wow Saibanu just fantastic u r a superb writer
As said before wich the KTLK team read some of the FF and try to put some happiness in our real KTLK show
Anyway hats off to u again enjoyed them all
😃

Thank you so much Shah 😃

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