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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kurup

Oh Saiii...wat a wonderful update...dil karta haiii tumharaaa haath chooomlooon...nahiii actuallly dil aur dimaaag and haath tooo coz without these 3 parts u could not have given us this beautiful update...

How beautifully u have written the way a person suffering from partial amensia goes through...fab job...
its turning completely positive now...finally hopes of the bright sun rays are shown in nidhi's life...
The way ashu was smiling in sleep thinking of her and how he toook nidhi's name at the children;s ward were fantastic...could literallly feel the emotions enacted by both nidi and ashu,,,
the wedding pic of course might cause a shock to ashu but i think tats the positive effect...let him digest the fact that he is maried to her and tat she was a part of his life which he does not remember...He has forogt that period itself...
Fab update...thnx for the PM...

First of all Big Thank you Sumeeth , I really appreciate your comments , Means lot to me 😳
first i let nidhi deal with this truth now its just ashu's turn ..even he will accept it eventually ! but I am still wondering how can i make Ashu recollect his memories ...Now , he remembered her name ...I hope same way I mange to write it ...😉
Realisation that he is married ..yes its going to be positive affect ..still working on it , how to put it and how to make him understand...I
Once again BIG BIG BIG Thank you 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: deepali.rock

It was fabulous sai. While reading it was praying dat ashu shud not resent nidhi and den sighed wid relief wen he saw d wedding pic. I m nt worried now bcoz u already said dat loads of luv cuming in d nxt chap. Waiting for nxt chap. When will u b updating?

No , He will not resent nidhi...he will find it difficulty to accept the truth ...But he will be fine , Nidhi hai na 😉
Thank you Deepali , I am glad you liked this chapter ...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjani9

It is perfect...how come they left one photo?

The files he was asking were his cases or RN has misplaced other files?
Trying to understand whether he forgot the cases also...please update soon...

@Bold hahaha ...I am glad that they left one photo , atleast he came to know that he is married 😆😆
He forgot a phase of his life where he met nidhi , fell in love and got married ...so everything related to that phase ,right now he is finding difficulty to relate to his case file ...But he will be fine as he has not forgotten how to treat his patients ...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME...👍🏼 Both, the chapters so far and your plan to start writing abt. ASHNI romance from the next one...thanks...!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sai, very well written. Finding the wedding picture - excellent touch. Waiting for the next chapter.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Nice update.


Ashu being restless without Nidhi and than being happy and finding solace in her presence was lovable...and the way he was dreaming and have a smile in sleep was beautifully written.

I was wondering whether u will put out...he forgetting about patient cases too or not...but u have..it just kind of completes the story..adding charm to it including these reality things too..glad u have added them...guess he needs to do extra homework for studying their records and adding to it...the thing which he found..which was more than a shock...that he is married😳...i guess raja-tithli story helped and played a big role in bring out this biggest thing of his life and the fact that he has forgotten some part of his life too

Need to see how u put out..the way he is cope with these new revelations of his life.

Great going...me enjoying it...do bring the next soon

Yes ,he is being restless without her ...her memories are not gone , its there supressed in his subconcince mind but its juts that his brain not able to filter thosememories ..."Smiling in sleep" yes ...I liked it when i finished writing ...it came out nicely ..Glad you liked it Embarrassed
I was marking things which will affect a person when lose memory , mostly for me you peoples comments helped me to dig deeper ..Thanks for that 😊
Raja-titli story helped him to remember her name ..Atleast he took first step , that means he is healing ..isnt it ?
I am still struggling how to make him accept nidhi in his life , hope I manage ...Wish me luck , i need it 😉😆
Thank you so much for such wonderful comment ...A BIG thank you 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swati62

Good chapter . Future romance sounds good.

Thank you swati ...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aarundhati

AWESOME...👍🏼 Both, the chapters so far and your plan to start writing abt. ASHNI romance from the next one...thanks...!

Thank you Aarundhati , I am really you liked it , yes romance slowly start from next chapter ...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SSA777

Sai, very well written. Finding the wedding picture - excellent touch. Waiting for the next chapter.


Thank you so much , I am really glad you liked it 😳

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