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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjani9


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My response is NO. Just for asking 2 years for career, the way people are commenting on Nidhi is making us depressing and now do not comeup with sad FFs.

I still do not understand why she has to bear Mallika and Khushi home, leave her career, leave her house and be happy and have kids also...

Infact we should hate Ashu for making her guilty for asking for 2 years...


dear, i'hv already posted it! Nd nw it's upon u wheather u read or nt! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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At first when i started reading this ..your story reminded me of movie Eega(telugu movie)...great chapter Ena dear ...please continue 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3
...ashutosh ap mujhse itna pyaar karte hain?
Ashu smiled at her!
...nidhi! Ye to bahot purana tha! Mein tumhare liye aur bhi bahot kuch kar sakta hoon! Jaise ki chand mein apne liye ghar...
..,. Main majak nehi kar rahi thi, ashutosh! Par ab nehi samjenge.. Kuki shayad ap mujhse itna pyaar karte hi nahin!
Saying that nidhi started to walk away frm him! Ashu ran after her quickly to catch her!
... Nidhi! Nidhi..suno to baba! He grabbed her hand nd pulled her towards him to look at his eyes!
...nidhi! Main tumse kitna pyaar karta hoon ye waqt anepar tumhe khud hi pata chal jayega! At that nidhi smiled at last which also spreads in ashu's lips. They left d place in ashu's honda!
... Abhi bhi naraz ho?
...nehi to?
,... To fir kaho i love u! ... I hate u!!
...accha! To ye lo..
Ashu speed up d honda which scared nidhi!
... Pls speed kam karo, ashutosh!
... To kaho i love u!
... Ok baba,ok! I love u! Ab to speed kam karo?
Ashu turn around nd gave her a small kiss on her cheek- I love u too!''
days were passing like these! Both were happy nd truly love wid each other. Simple nok-jhok made their relationship more adorable to others!
Oneday ashu called nidhi to meet over d flyover. She reached there in time bt as always ashu was late...she waited there almost 4 hours fr him bt he didn't came! So she decided to have a look in his office!She went there bt what she saw was enough to get fuel in already arising anger.. Ashu was sitting in d sofa nd one of her model was giving him a massage over head. Ashu's eyes were closed!
...wah! Wah!to yaha par ye sab chalta hain! Ashu opened his eyes hearing her voice!
...nidhi! Tum kab aye? ... Ku main yaha agayi to apko koi prblm hogaya hain kya? 4 ghante se mujhe waha akale intezar karwake ap yaha iss ladki k saath
...nidhi! Tum galat saamaj rahi ho! Wo mujhe bahot sar dard tha to
... Aur apne mujhe ak phn karna bhi jarurat nehi samjha!
...nidhi main vul gaya tha! Aur itna sar dard hain ki..! Par tum bhi to call karke puch sakte the na!?
...accha hua nehi kia! Warna ye nazara kaise dekhta?
... Nidhi tum mujh pe galat ilzam laga rahi ho!
...oh! Please..mujhe koi safai nehi cahiye! Aur ayinda mujhse milne ki aur bat karne ki koshish bhi maat karna!
...ok! Fine..nehi karunga!
Nidhi looked at him in disbelieve! She just left d place...her tears were betraying herself.

On d other hand ashu was also in same condition. He tried to call her thousands time bt every time she disconected it. He even didn't realize that he wasn't able to live without talking to her one single day.
He took his honda keys nd reached nidhi's house. To get a glimpse of her bt she didn't. He clutches his cell towards his heart as it contains a photo of nidhi!
'' pls..nidhi! Don't punish me like that! I wouldn't able to live either! I love u..i love u very much!''

d next day nidhi got a cd outside of her door! She took that one nd plyed it. Nd she saw there ashutosh holding his ear wid his hand!

'' sorry! I'm sorry! Main promise karta ho k kabhi tumhe intezar nehi karwaunga! Par pls mujhe aise punish maat karo! Main tumse bina baat kiye ab aur nehi reh sakta! Pls...cahe jo chaho saja dedo...par pls baat karo!''
nidhi couldn't held her anger anymore. She took her phn nd called him nd he received it immidietly!
...main tumhare ghar k samne hoon! Jaldi se niche aajao!
Nidhi smiled bt ran quickly downstairs. She also missed him a lot.She saw him on his honda nd so she also ride it! They started towards d highway!
...abhi bhi naraz ho? Nidhi didn't answer!So ashu again used his old tecnic. He sped up his honda!
.,..ashutosh, pls! Speed kam karo!
,...to fir kaho i love u!
... I hate u!
...thik hain fir main sped aur bara deta hoon!
...no! No..pls! Ok.. I love u! Nw slow karo!
...mujhe jorse hug karo pahle!
... Ashutosh! Ok thik hain..jorse pakad liya! Ab to slow karo!
...nidhi! Jara mere helmate to utarna!Nidhi took of his helmate!
...ab use haat mein leke baithi ku ho? Pahenlo!Nidhi helmate pahen liya!... Nidhi! I love u! Main tumse duniya mein sabse jyada pyaar karta hoon!
Nd this was his last word which could remember nidhi. Bcs after that she found her in d hospital all over bandaged. She took several months to recover. Nd suddenly one day arman came to meet him!
She couldn't hold her tears seeina him!
... Arman! Maine usse kaha tha slow karne k liye! Par usne nahi suna! Kaha ki i love u bolo..maine kaha..phir bola hug karo...kia..aur ajanak!!Aisa ku hogaya arman!? Wo ku chale gaye? Aur main..main ku zinda hoon??
... Shayad ashu yehi cahta ho ki tum zinda raho!
... Kya matlad arman? Mujhe pls saaf saaf batao!
...nidhi! Honda ka bahot pehle hi break fail hogaya tha! Aur ashu ko ye pata tha...isiliye wo tumhe apna helmate dediya tha...he loves u a lot..shayad apne jaan se bhi pyare thein tum!
Issiko shayad pyaar kahte hain!
Edited by Ena292 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: saibanu

At first when i started reading this ..your story reminded me of movie Eega(telugu movie)...great chapter Ena dear ...please continue😊


i hvn't seen that even didn't hear d name!:-)
bt thank u dear! P3 bhi post kar dia!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Ena292


i hvn't seen that even didn't hear d name!:-)
bt thank u dear! P3 bhi post kar dia!


part 3 is just so so so so great 👏. loved it ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26

thank u! Tomato se bach gaya!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: saibanu



part 3 is just so so so so great👏. loved it ...

thank u! Anjani k bato se to mein daar hi gaya tha!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

superb sweet heart

part 3 ne toh ekdum se jhatka de diya

suddenly tears started from my eyes such a bravo chap seriously

will wait for your new concept


sonali


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Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: karajekar


superb sweet heart

part 3 ne toh ekdum se jhatka de diya

suddenly tears started from my eyes such a bravo chap seriously

will wait for your new concept


sonali




oh! That's a great compliment, dear! Thank u so much! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Superb chap Ena,just really fab.But the end is too painful.Ek tu na mila sari duniya mili bhi to kya ho?

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