Os: do u love me?? P1 pg1,p2pg3, p3pg4! Completed!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Frnds, i would like to share an os wid u! Bt d fact is d ending is'nt a happy one! R u ok wid that??Pls let me know, should i post it or nt!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ena292

Frnds, i would like to share an os wid u! Bt d fact is d ending is'nt a happy one! R u ok wid that?? Pls let me know, should i post it or nt!

Dont break my heart by seperating Ashni ...I am fine if ending is sad for mallu or rohan 😆. please post I want o read ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'll post it soon nd will b ready to hold ur tomatos!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waitng with my tomatoes.😆😆..
Take all safety precautions n plzzz post soon...😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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...oh! What a beautiful girl she is! Isn't she ashu??
... Armaan tujhe ladkiyo k siwa kuch aur kabhi dikhta hain kya?
...akbar dekh to sahi yaar!
Ashu nd armaan were enjoying their akc in a tea stall when armaan saw that girl. Armaan was flirtious in nature nd every girl he saw was princess in his eyes. Though ashu wasn't interested in such kind of stuff bt d continuous request frm armaan made him look towards that girl. But what he saw infront of him was enough to mesmerize himself. May b that was called heavenly beauty.

The girl was in a white kurta wid all over silver embrodary! Her long silky hair enhance her natuaral beauty! And those beautiful nd dreamy black eyes were a treat to watch. How could someone look so beautiful!?- ashu wondered!
She was standing just d opposite side of d tea stall. Ashu was staring her with unblinking eyes. He just wouldn't able to hold himself frm staring her! Nd his amased look was disturbed with arman's talk!
...arre ashu! Tu to akdam kho gaya! Love at first sight haan!

Ashu gave him a anger look without answering bcs he didn't want to waste time with him fr these nonsence talk. He turned to see d girl again bt this time she was nt there. Ashu looked everywhere bt couldn't see her. Suddenly he noticed d girl in a taxi!
He wasn't in his normal sense then. His polite thought were seemed to b stoped. Didn't know why bt He couldn't see her going just like that!
Without thinking furthur, he just took his honda nd made a u turn avoiding arman's frequient call frm behind!
He followed d taxi fr quite a while..nd then d taxi stoped infront of a banglo! The girl stepped out frm d taxi nd started to walk inside d banglo! Bt in her way she looked back once as if sensed someone's staring at her. And that d moment she saw ashu in his honda looking at her wid wide open eyes.she looked at him fr some time nd then just gave him a tiny smile nd walked away frm there. Bt she couldn't think even realise what d effect of that small smile on ashu!

Bcs frm that day she found him infront of her house atleast twice in a day. Ashu was in madly love wid her. Even he didn't know or felt d urgue to know her name. All he want just to see her everyday.

Nidhi was also in deep thought abt that boy. Everyday he came nd just stared at her when she goes fr her college! Almost 2 years had passed nd these routine visit continues everyday! In those 2 years, he even didn't try to talk wid her once! It was very strange..bt both of them were on a habit to see each other!!!

...yaar ashu! Tera a love wala kissa kabhi age badegi ya nehi? Tune ab tak uske naam tak nehi pucha nd 2 saal bit gaya! Kab tu i love u bolega aur..

...dar lagta hain arman! Usse jakar puchunga aur wo agar mana kar de to?
...yaar! Tu itna bada photographer hain..itni saari ladkiya tujhpe marte hain aur tu hain ki..waise maine uska naam pata kia hain!
...kya? Kab arman? Tune usse mila?
... Nidhi hain uska naam! Aur kab, kaise in sawalo ka jawab mein nehi dunga!
...nidhi!
A smile formed in his lips. He was looking truly happy a man!
... Arman! Chal aj mujhe usse bat karni hain! Usse apni dill ki bat batani hain! Kahin dill ki baat batane derna kardo!
...shuv kam mein deri kaisa! Abhi chal bhabi se milne!

After sometime both of them were find standing infront of nidhi's house! It was her returns time nd ashu knew that! They were waiting eagerly fr her arrival...ashu was feling nervous bcs it was first time he was going to propose someone! Many uncertainity criss crossed his mind! Bt he knew he love her a lot nd he had to confess her asap!

This unwanted thoughts were disturbing him when he saw nidhi coming towards them! A bunch of red roses were at her hand! She was smiling at him making ashu many more astonished! She stand before ashu nd strasses her hand saying-- '' hai! I'm nidhi verma here!!"
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start..😛.
But yeh kia??abhi to shru bhi nai hua n u ended it...not fair...😭
Give the next part quick..plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First part padke koi tomato nehi marega i'm sure! Par agle part k ware main mujhe kuch pata nehi..apne rish mein padna!:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: hilarious44

Nice start..😛.

But yeh kia??abhi to shru bhi nai hua n u ended it...not fair...😭

Give the next part quick..plzzz

long karna cahta tha par socha pehli part mein aplogo ka dill tut jayega! :-(
it's just a fiction..so don't mind abt what i'm going to write!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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when will u give next part??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: hilarious44

when will u give next part??
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iska full update aj hi dunga! Par shayad thodi der hojaye! U can surely read it tomorrow!

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