This Time Forever: Chap10 parts 1&2 updtd 11/14 pg144 - Page 40

Originally posted by: cool_SK

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hey anu g...
amazing part janab...loved it...
Nidhi arguing and not giving in in the start was superb...i love strong nidhi...Go on dear...
OMG!!!! is she really planning to get married to some other man...i hope not...😕
ashu tell her his story...haha...while in the other fic nidhi want to listen about ashu past, while staying in his arms, here she doing completely opposite...dono mazay aik saath...wah wah😳😳
awww...nidhi feeling bad for him...and ashu surly didnt deserve that..
she forgive him but yeah, its surly hard to forget a thing you bear 5 years of your life...
ashu making her realize that he is still imp for her n she willnt bear seeing him with another woman and she cry out
and then it follows the caresses n that amazing KISS...awww...dreamy land...
Nidhi giving in and allow him to take over...that was written beautifully janab...
n ashu dont wna take risks so stopped himself to go further...
Nidhi asked him to not interfere in her life but allowed him to meet khushi...well her anger and insecurities are fair enough
if a man can believe someone over you once, there is no guarantee that he willnt do that again...
well, after seeing last night epi...i was so hating khushi that now i m gonna stop watching this show till she is kicked out...and thats why first i tried to avoid reading khushi containing scenes but they were the real kick here...
but i m glad that i m not able to imagine that monster khushi in this 4 year khushi here...
she was adorable in the morning n loved how she made ashu come with them to the school...
seems like ashu is a BHONDOO that acted instead of Nidhi's WARNING...haha
but the school scene and nidhi and MK & MM scene was written so perfectly...logical comments that can convince everyone...superb...
and the last part...haha...khushi saying that ashu is gona be her father...cherry on the top...
Nishi n khushi being the small versions of Nidhi n anji...haha...but these sweeties are too chalaku than there mothers would have been
Anji asking nidhi to give ashu a chance n she refusing n khushi hearing that...
n now, she is on the run out,...hope everything gonna b well...

great part janab...
i will try to comment on further chaps too from pak but if i cant, just remember that i m loving it and will give my lamba wala comment after coming back...

luv you anu g...you are so sweet...

ana😳😳

Originally posted by: cool_SK

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Originally posted by: cool_SK

phr tau main waqai kid hoon g😉
23 year old🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Ena292

Wow,di! U r really superb! 👏

Originally posted by: cool_SK

ur welcome g...
u know i m a keen observant here😆 to feel that difference bw the two fics...
ohoo...so he is doing that on purpose...hope it will work for him...
i will b back in mid of dec😛
thanku for the wishes janab...

n u r not a grandmother g...
u r our leader🤗 guide n sweetie pie...

will miss interacting with you guys...but will try to come n bug you all...

luv ya
ana❤️