This Time Forever: Chap10 parts 1&2 updtd 11/14 pg144 - Page 41

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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely lovely update Anu. Loved the heartfelt talk between ashni, and their coming close and then Nidhi's realisation makes it all realistic. Nidhi needs time to come to terms with Ashu's deserting her. Love Khushi's huge part in all this, and hope she is alright as she runs out the door. It was so cute how Nishi and her discuss how handsome Ashu is :). He charms girls of all ages isnt it? 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow this is so good ..I hope khushi will not get injured much ..between i really liked nidhi and ashu convo ..hope they both sort out differences soon ...Please continue , cant wait to read next chapter

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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing work Anu,Beautifully written.It is for the first time I am noticing that you have a fantastic command on your Hindi Language also,...great! It is many-a-times fact that a person is seen being superlatively good in many areas,multifaceted personality you see... that's what you are, exactly.

A marathon reading experience for me with so many interruptions,making it difficult for me to give a detailed review,but Loved Ashni convo, their irresistible kissing, today's highlight MK and Nidhi's convo, and a cliffhanger, whooh...! I hope I covered everything...liked all.yes also such a sweet talk between 2 little angels.

How I wished I had a better word-power to compliment you in some exciting way.I hope you understand,God bless you dear.
and Love you,always.
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Posted: 12 years ago
IT IS AWESOME...every bit of it...the pain is so visible...just before going to sleep refreshed the page and found your update...could not resist till morning...you have reduced my beauty sleep...it is worth the wait...
Are you hurting Khushi now and keep in Ashu's care in hospital?
Nidhi should actually hand over the girl to Ashu and ask him to take care...both are craving for it...huh...then they will come to know her value...
We are actually placing us in Nidhi's shoe while reading and then all the emotions ...WOW...Thank you for the update...
Ashu has not answered why he is not in touch with Nidhi in these 5 years...
What will DB do now? If she comes to know that Ashu spoiled Nidhi's life and now meddling with Khushi's life...
I seriously feel Nidhi should hand over Khushi to Ashu for few days and ask him to take care...
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Posted: 12 years ago
What an AWESOME chapter Anu.
Your characters are so real that i can visualise them before my eyes and your command over the languages...English as well as Hindi...wat should i say , no words in my dictionary to describe them.

For me the highlight of this FFis a very strong Nidhi. This is i wanted to see in the show.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

Wow.its so beautifully return. I loved Nidhi's convo in the school. Its interesting.😊

Thanx Rajani, glad u like it.😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: achiever

Nice chapter..

I liked the way Ashu handled Nidhi.. he he he.. bt Nidhi is way too strong a lady for him... 👏 Bt it will not b too long before her defenses will b laid down by her very own daughter.. even after t he woman-to-woman talk!😆 She has made her way into Ashu's heart and vice a versa.. and Nidhi is in no position to challenge or contest tht! Khushi's contender is strong! If Nidhi has to play with Khushi and manipulate her out of Ashu, she has to bring a more worthy contender.. and may b make Ashu jealous welous!😈 and may b tht may compell him to do something concrete and solid abt breaking Nidhi's defenses and proving tht he is all worthy of her by all means by her own sound judgement and not by Khushi's persuasions!😳
I luved how u handled their past... tho i wud've luved to c how mallu tried to seduce him and how he ditched her !😆 Gosh me such sadist!😆😆😆
I luv Nidhi as a mom to core.. she is brilliant👏
the very thing tht made him Ashu has taken him away from Nidhi.. interesting.. very very interesting..👏
bt Nidhi's judgement is definitely hit a blow by his revealation tht he waited for her forgiveness all these years thru.. bt its jst not enuf! Naah!
bt she is confused now as to her feelings for him..she knows tht she shudnt relent by any means and take tht hurt again... bt thers still apparent attraction to him physically.. and thn her daughters obvious affection for him.. amidst all this thrs still her heart tht wants him.. bt her self-respect and tht sting of being dumped is way too strong. and weighs her pity for Ashu's grief and lonliness down!
In the end i hope and pray tht Khushi is allright.. she is gonna ask for Ashu and thy mite get back.. bt i hope its not by way of Khushi.. it wud jst make Nidhi's protrayal of strong woman weak.. i want Ashu to do something really worthy enuf to get Nidhi's trust back..
or may b i m expecting too much from Ashu! he has nothing in his hands tht he can do abt changing NIdhi's viewpoint abt him.. bt is it really? I feel he shud try once again.. this time not by words bt by actions!


Hi Manisha.
Thank you for such a detailed review.
Made my day.
Yes Nidhi is very strong, but abhi Ashutosh ko nahin chance Mila hai to show himself.
Just wait and watch. Saying something is easy, bu will he really give up on his love?
That's the real question. Ashutosh is also very strong, u will see it in
The coming chap. These two are very well matched.😳
And pyar hai toh physical attraction toh hoga hi. Yes?😉

And no Khushi will not be hurt too badly. She will be fine😃

Thanks for liking the chap Manisha
TC
Anu
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

awesome part cont soon


Thanx Jyothi😃
Glad u liked the chap.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aarundhati

Superb Anuji...aapne to hamare jindagi mein, jiska kaafi saara hissa, fihaal ASHNI ne liya hain, bahaar laa di...thanks a tonne...👏



you know what a noble task of writing such wonderful FFs, you have undertaken...?Noble coz you are giving so much of raahat to our dils, which r totally broken coz of this Khushi track, a mini-version of Mallu mata...😭


that u r going to get so many duwas...😆from all KTLK fans...you r awesome...love the emotional aspect of your write-ups...they touch our heart in every possible way...thanks once again...!👏

Luv you...!😉


Thank you Aarundhati😃
Thank you for the wonderful lovely compliment.
I am glad that my FFs can manage to part a part
Of your day. Makes the hard work worth while.
And thank you for the Duas woh toh jitni Mille kam hain.😳
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Anu
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ssktlk

Lovely lovely update Anu. Loved the heartfelt talk between ashni, and their coming close and then Nidhi's realisation makes it all realistic. Nidhi needs time to come to terms with Ashu's deserting her. Love Khushi's huge part in all this, and hope she is alright as she runs out the door. It was so cute how Nishi and her discuss how handsome Ashu is :). He charms girls of all ages isnt it? 😛


hey Sanya
Long time no see.😃
Thanks for the comments.
Yep hamare Ashuji hain hi aise
Manages to make all women of all ages fall in love with him.😃

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