This Time Forever: Chap10 parts 1&2 updtd 11/14 pg144

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#411

Originally posted by: saibanu
Wow this is so good ..I hope khushi will not get injured much ..between i really liked nidhi and ashu convo ..hope they both sort out differences soon ...Please continue , cant wait to read next chapter

Thanks Sai

Happy u enjoyed the chap.

Differences will take time to sort out.

But things will get better, between them.

Khushi will be fine.😃

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: yashvi_ashni
good upt

Thank you.😃

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achiever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#413

Originally posted by: Libra

Hi Manisha.

Thank you for such a detailed review.

Made my day.

Yes Nidhi is very strong, but abhi Ashutosh ko nahin chance Mila hai to show himself.

Just wait and watch. Saying something is easy, bu will he really give up on his love?

That's the real question. Ashutosh is also very strong, u will see it in

The coming chap. These two are very well matched.😳

And pyar hai toh physical attraction toh hoga hi. Yes?😉

And no Khushi will not be hurt too badly. She will be fine😃

Thanks for liking the chap Manisha

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Anu

I seriously want tht.. i m luking forward to this Ashu soo much! I luv strong Ashus!😉😆

well matched? Wow.. i want to c how hand to hand thy combat!😆 Ashu is not gonna give her up and Nidhi v know is not going to relent tht easily!

I wanna c wat made thm click.. as ur story started with thr seperation it wud b nice to c how well thy had matched!!👍🏼

and i wanna c how Nidhi handles this attraction! Of course, not tht thy wudnt have kissed or got intimate while dating... wat if Khushi chips in with her innocent questions abt her obvious attractions..😆 tht wud quite a scene!😆

Happy to learn tht Khushi will b well and fine.. v know she jst needs Ashu!

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#414

Originally posted by: anjalini
Amazing work Anu,Beautifully written.It is for the first time I am noticing that you have a fantastic command on your Hindi Language also,...great! It is many-a-times fact that a person is seen being superlatively good in many areas,multifaceted personality you see... that's what you are, exactly.

A marathon reading experience for me with so many interruptions,making it difficult for me to give a detailed review,but Loved Ashni convo, their irresistible kissing, today's highlight MK and Nidhi's convo, and a cliffhanger, whooh...! I hope I covered everything...liked all.yes also such a sweet talk between 2 little angels.

How I wished I had a better word-power to compliment you in some exciting way.I hope you understand,God bless you dear.
and Love you,always.

Thanx Doc.

I am glad u enjoyed the update.😳

Yes I am totally fluent in Hindi, I can read write as well as speak it.😳

I really appreciate I

The awesome compliments, and the fact that

You have made time to post comments on the forum, means a lot.

Thanks Anju😃

I like the two girls in the story also.

And Khushi will be fine, nothing big. But will definitely be giving both her parents

A run for their money.😆

Love

Anu

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Anu

@Libra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#415

Originally posted by: Anjani9
IT IS AWESOME...every bit of it...the pain is so visible...just before going to sleep refreshed the page and found your update...could not resist till morning...you have reduced my beauty sleep...it is worth the wait...
Are you hurting Khushi now and keep in Ashu's care in hospital?

Nidhi should actually hand over the girl to Ashu and ask him to take care...both are craving for it...huh...then they will come to know her value...

We are actually placing us in Nidhi's shoe while reading and then all the emotions ...WOW...Thank you for the update...

Ashu has not answered why he is not in touch with Nidhi in these 5 years...

What will DB do now? If she comes to know that Ashu spoiled Nidhi's life and now meddling with Khushi's life...

I seriously feel Nidhi should hand over Khushi to Ashu for few days and ask him to take care...

Hi Anjani Ji

Thanks for the comments. So glad u liked the chap.😃

Ashutosh will answer Nidhi question about why he did not keep tabs on her or

Call her ever. But not now. He will though I promise.

And Nidhi will not hand over care of her daughter to him.

She can't do that, she is Khushi's mother.

Dadi Bua already knows that Ashutosh left Nidhi.

He not meddling with Khushi's life. And Dadi Bua might surprise u

Wait for next chap.😆 Sab pataa chal jayega.😃

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: sharma.shivani
What an AWESOME chapter Anu.
Your characters are so real that i can visualise them before my eyes and your command over the languages...English as well as Hindi...wat should i say , no words in my dictionary to describe them.

For me the highlight of this FFis a very strong Nidhi. This is i wanted to see in the show.

Thanx Shivani😃

I am very happy that you have liked

This chap. And thank you so much for the lovely

Compliments.😃

I am glad u are enjoying this strong Nidhi.

It is something I would have liked to see on the show too.😃

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Anu

@Libra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#417

Originally posted by: achiever

I seriously want tht.. i m luking forward to this Ashu soo much! I luv strong Ashus!😉😆

well matched? Wow.. i want to c how hand to hand thy combat!😆 Ashu is not gonna give her up and Nidhi v know is not going to relent tht easily!😳 I wanna c wat made thm click.. as ur story started with thr seperation it wud b nice to c how well thy had matched!!👍🏼

and i wanna c how Nidhi handles this attraction! Of course, not tht thy wudnt have kissed or got intimate while dating... wat if Khushi chips in with her innocent questions abt her obvious attractions..😆 tht wud quite a scene!😆

Happy to learn tht Khushi will b well and fine.. v know she jst needs Ashu!😳

yep I would live to see a strong Ashutosh also

Oar show mein toh he is very week.

Not very admirable.😕

Hand to Hand Combat.😉...LOL. That's priceless Manisha😆

I've heard it called many things, but never that.😆

Back story kuch khaas nahin hai. They met fell in love, age gap tha

Etc etc. nothing very interesting. But I plan to show snippets and smalls

Incidences from the past in between.

And abhi don't worry, Khushi will be chipping in with many things.😉

This little girl is a little rocket😆

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#418

Originally posted by: Libra

Hi Anjani Ji

Thanks for the comments. So glad u liked the chap.😃

Ashutosh will answer Nidhi question about why he did not keep tabs on her or

Call her ever. But not now. He will though I promise.

And Nidhi will not hand over care of her daughter to him.

She can't do that, she is Khushi's mother.

Dadi Bua already knows that Ashutosh left Nidhi.

He not meddling with Khushi's life. And Dadi Bua might surprise u

Wait for next chap.😆 Sab pataa chal jayega.😃

I got angry at Khushi's dialogues 😡

Then your Nidhi also does not get angry??? very patient characters...😕

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Anu

@Libra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#419

@Anjani

I got angry at Khushi's dialogues 😡

Then your Nidhi also does not get angry??? very patient characters...😕

I didn't understand. Anjani ji

Kaunse dialog's

What is Nidhi supposed to get angry over?😕

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Anjani9

@Anjani9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#420

Originally posted by: Libra
@Anjani

I got angry at Khushi's dialogues 😡

Then your Nidhi also does not get angry??? very patient characters...😕

I didn't understand. Anjani ji

Kaunse dialog's

What is Nidhi supposed to get angry over?😕