KTLKMiniFF:Comin Together..Pt-11/Pg-45(Romance) - Page 36

I huvn't read the earlier parts,just read it and it was mind-blowing😉Good job Ana...

Just loved it...please continue! This is the passion that's missing from KTLK. But your tale is descroptive, I can see it being played out by our leads.

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

give us that scene Asap..hoping that it will have oodles of romance😳

thanku so much vidishaa...
it doesn't contain oodles of romance...but a scene that i really wanted to write...😊

Originally posted by: cool_SK

thanku so much vidishaa...
it doesn't contain oodles of romance...but a scene that i really wanted to write...😊

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Oho! Ana baji, tussi toh bade romantic nikle ji... Hmmm... Such a sweet romantic update... N u said '' IT WAS STRICTLY CUTTED FROM THE SHOW'', show? U mean our show, ktlk??? When did this happen? What a disaster...
Anyways, we, specially I, am eveready to read the next chap even, if u feel convinient... So come up dude... We r waiting...

Now ur chap, Ashu n nidhi had discussed what they felt during this separation, was good... It was very well needed... Nidhi applying sindoor n wearing mangalsutra scene is my personal favourite... I dont know why, but have always loved this type of scene involving sindoor n mangalsutra... Whether it was nidhi applying sindoor the next day of her wedding in the show, or Ashu pulling mangalsutra out, hanging to nidhi's neck in Anu di's fic- season of love, or ur sindoor n mangalsutra scene here... I just love it... N awweee! Invitation! Hehehaha... How romantic...!
Ehmmm... The dinner... I could imagine, how complimenting they both must have been looking... As usual, A made for each other couple...
So, nidhi n aahna, have cleared up their mu's... Hehehaha... She finally spoke, jo uske dil mein tha, 'Saali-aadhi ghar waali'... I just love it...
N the final scene... Hmmm...hmmm... Ana baji... Huh-huh! Bohot hi badiya! Aagey isss par koi tippani nahi kar rahi... Bhaawnaon ko samajh jaao...

Will wait 4 the next update...
Loads of love...
Aazeen...

hey aazeen...
first sorry for my grammer mistake there😉
i m glad you liked those sindoor scene dear...i like to add them as they give a reality touch to the story...
hahaa...aahana had to tease them...n so she used that famous line...
bhavnaoon ko samjh gaye janab...

thanku so much aazeen...
luv you dear😳

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

when do we get to read that?😉

I am thinking to write now...if its done then will update...as its a small scene na😳

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

good romantic chapter.pl continue.

thanku so much vidya😳😃

Originally posted by: Libra

wow ana👏

chap was fabulous, worth the wait. i dont know

which part to single out, and mention. and which not.😃

so, Ashutosh teasing Nidhi about the shower part was very

naughty and very cute. i could never imagine our show wala

Ashutosh to do that. and then stealing bites from each others plates

adorable.😳

then the Nidhi and Ahana conversation was very touching. loved

how Nidhi managed to bring her around and made her a

younger sister.😊

the the absolute best was Ashu calling her saaliji.

now that was a masterpiece.👏

the last part with the orange saari, woohoo

really hot hot hot. but

beech mein chod diya😡

i want to read the next scene ana.

update plz.

Love

anu

thanku so much anu g...
i m glad that u liked that part janab...
yup, our show's ashu is not that bold but i will explain the reason of his action😉
stealing bites, i liked to add cause they were not eating in a single plate...so i thought this could make this romantic...
thanku for liking that saali g part...i love when ashu called anji with that
haha...beech main kahan g...poora tau kia...
or agay last part main add karti hoon next scene...

luv ya
ana😳

Originally posted by: aarundhati

Fantastic Ana...thanks a tonne...lovely FF...kaash the show also showed their re-union with little more romance, than was actually shown...!!

thanku so much aarun...
yup, i was too hoping for that...but then, thats our KP ji's mind...n here we have the liability to add anything...so we taking advantage of that😳

Originally posted by: ssktlk

very nice chapter. Its beautiful like a song. Loved Ashu getting naughty and then his gift of a a saree and his desire to see her in it😉

thanku soo much dear...
haha...that was a naughty idea for sure...😳