KTLK- 2nd Ver. Chap 9 Final Chap page 55 - Page 43

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow you updated , thank you so much .i will read and comment in a while😃

Anu di , what happened ? how are you feeling now ...?? hope you are feeling better
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chotipia

Wow you updated , thank you so much .i will read and comment in a while😃

Anu di , what happened ? how are you feeling now ...?? hope you are feeling better


Thanx will wait for ur comments.😊
I still am not feeling to good, but don't worry, I'll be fine.
Thank u for ur concern.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago


luv you too janab🤗...will give my long wala comment in sumtime g...thora bz with household stuff right now...😕...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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luv you too janab🤗...will give my long wala comment in sumtime g...thora bz with household stuff right now...😕...

No problem.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...loved Dadi bua's dialogues a lot...Ashu behaved like a perfect huz...The description of pregnancy scared me a bit coz I am planning to try for a baby next year😉

Take care of your health...and don't forget the other ff ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey!just loved it but for few seconds you made me very emotional.
Nahin Doc, woh sab baad mein, mujhe bas aap pehle yeh batayiye, meri Nidhi kaisi hai. Agar woh theek hai, to sab sahi hai.
This part is very well written🤗
1. Ashu saw that she was looking tired, but very very beautiful, and very very happy. She looked up when he entered, and smiled and like before held out her hand to him. Ashu rushed over and took her hand and leaned in to kiss her.
--How are you?
--aapko kaisi lag rahi hoon.
--Aisi, jaise koi apsara uthri ho zammen pe, sirf mere liye. Jaise sooraj ki pehli kiran, Jaise baarish ki pehli boond.
2.Ashu looked at his daughter with awe. My god she was beautiful, he thought. She looks exactly like her mother. He could not believe that he was holding her at last, in his arms, and that this beautiful little miracle was his, a part of him, his own flesh and blood. some one who would carry his name, and be a testament to his and Nidhi's love for one another.

Why r u ending it. Want more and more.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow... Anudidi... outstanding!!! inimitable!!! Shall PM u later in detail... coz hv missed reading many chapters inbetween.

Grhhh this Mallika... Finally, Ashutosh gave her the treatment she deserved long back... felt really glad to read that!!

Rest everything is too good!! Loved every bit of it!!!👏👏👏

Love this DadiBua... pyari dadi aur ab to nani bhi☺️

Will write to you more but at the moment: A b...i...g thank you for such a beautiful FF!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb anu di... just loved it...👏
what a brilliant ending to a beautiful FF... Amazing...
thanx a lot😃
and hope your feeling much better now😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

superb libra absolutely superb

perfect ending sweet heart 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
anu i felt the chap was pretty fast paced..i mean a lot of things happened at a go..perhaps bcos u wanted to end this ff with this chapter...no probs looking forward to ur other ffs..

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