KTLK- 2nd Ver. Chap 9 Final Chap page 55 - Page 44

Bahut khoob likha aap ne
been through all ur write ups
n i must say all are fantastic..!!

Wow...what an emotional and action packed finish...

And a cute 24 years later epilogue too...

Fabulous...so, they have not one but three kids...lovely...!

Great show, Anu...

Look forward to Season of Love...you see, am partial to that one!


Take care of your health in the meantime!

24 year leap Anu!! must be a first!!! great ending!!! for a while i thought u were going to give Ashu 4 kids...like someone else i know...😉

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

wow...loved Dadi bua's dialogues a lot...Ashu behaved like a perfect huz...The description of pregnancy scared me a bit coz I am planning to try for a baby next year😉

Take care of your health...and don't forget the other ff ...

Originally posted by: myera

Bahut khoob likha aap ne
been through all ur write ups
n i must say all are fantastic..!!

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

Hey!just loved it but for few seconds you made me very emotional.
Nahin Doc, woh sab baad mein, mujhe bas aap pehle yeh batayiye, meri Nidhi kaisi hai. Agar woh theek hai, to sab sahi hai.
This part is very well written🤗

1. Ashu saw that she was looking tired, but very very beautiful, and very very happy. She looked up when he entered, and smiled and like before held out her hand to him. Ashu rushed over and took her hand and leaned in to kiss her.

--How are you?

--aapko kaisi lag rahi hoon.

--Aisi, jaise koi apsara uthri ho zammen pe, sirf mere liye. Jaise sooraj ki pehli kiran, Jaise baarish ki pehli boond.
2.Ashu looked at his daughter with awe. My god she was beautiful, he thought. She looks exactly like her mother. He could not believe that he was holding her at last, in his arms, and that this beautiful little miracle was his, a part of him, his own flesh and blood. some one who would carry his name, and be a testament to his and Nidhi's love for one another.

Why r u ending it. Want more and more.

Originally posted by: ttrocks

Wow... Anudidi... outstanding!!! inimitable!!! Shall PM u later in detail... coz hv missed reading many chapters inbetween.

Grhhh this Mallika... Finally, Ashutosh gave her the treatment she deserved long back... felt really glad to read that!!

Rest everything is too good!! Loved every bit of it!!!👏👏👏

Love this DadiBua... pyari dadi aur ab to nani bhi☺️

Will write to you more but at the moment: A b...i...g thank you for such a beautiful FF!

Originally posted by: ZedZee92

Superb anu di... just loved it...👏

what a brilliant ending to a beautiful FF... Amazing...

thanx a lot😃

and hope your feeling much better now😃

Originally posted by: karajekar

superb libra absolutely superb

perfect ending sweet heart 😊


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