My Kuch To Log Kahenge Version( New Chapter Pg 27)

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Hi Guys as many of us knows our AshNi couple is so beautiful that everybody want to write their own KTLK show as we are very much disappointed by the one telecasting now. So this is my 1st attempt I hope you'll like it and give ur comments if I should continue or not Thanks

Chapter 1 KTLK 2nd July 2012-07-02

" Scalpel! Retractioors!Sutures!" Dr Ashutosh voice called out the perfunctory orders loudly.The breathing machine filled the room with loud,life-giving swishing sounds.The doctor's panicking voice could barely be heard above it." Thrust the jaw forward.Now,insert the tube."Commands kept coming.Finally a gag reflex occurred.Good the doctor said.A sigh of relief passed through his lips.It was still too soon to totally relax.Attach the life support to the machine and set dials for control he odered.

The needle penetrated the IV tubing,just then the noise a big bang was heard someone fainted in the operation theatre."Dr Nidhi ,Dr Nidhi Verma common wake up" Nidhi could hear the voices clear but distant.Nidhi slowly opened her eyes where was she ,was she dead ?she thought at the same time she could hear a rough sound behind all those encircled her.Common inters go back to your work dnt u have anything to do rather than attending another intern.There are more patients here to follow get going.The small group was quickly dispersed.Nidhi suddenly sat.Her mind went blank.Where am I? she asked.In that split second in time her mind raced back and understood that she fainted in the operation theatre.It's Ok Dr Nidhi these things sometimes happen ,Dr Raganath just reassured her.Looking over to see from whom the rough voice was she couldn't see anybody.That time Nidhi cursed herself for chosing to be a doctor it was not her choice but her Baba Col Verma.Baba wanted her to be a doctor as a promise he made to his wife who passed away years back.Nidhi had no choice she had to agree but she always complain about it to her father.

That morning arriving for her first day on duty as intern in Kortnis General Hospital(KGH) she didn't have the time to be introduced to anybody as their was an emergency and all the intern had to attend the surgery done under Dr Ashutosh Mattur head and dean of KGH.Dr ragganath asjed Nidhi to follow him to make the introduction to others.He told Nidhi that she should avoid to faint again while doing surgery under Dr Ashutosh whom they nicknamed Dr Hardstone.No mistakes,no jokes,no laughing,no wandering around when Dr Hardstone is around and everybody working under him should be warned about that.He doesn't tolerate such things in his hospitals.

Nidhi wanted to see how this Dr Hardstone looked like but without any good reasons nobody is allowed to wander about around his cabin.As per Dr Raganath Dr Ashutosh is a very reserved man who will hardly talk only when needed,so she should be aware coz Nidhi thought about the chatter box she is.

Nidhi went in the mess room took out her phone and called Anjie to tell her about her misadventure on the first day at KGH.Anjie and Nidhi grew up together they were the best friend like sister in the world nothing could be done without the other know they were like twins.Anjie couldn't stop laughing." Did u meet ur Dr Hardstone'Anjie asked her.N: no yaar without without any good reason nobody can go in his cabin can u imagine .what kind of person he is!god knows!and hang up the phone.

The day goes by with Dr Raganath giving all the oders of the day to day duties of each interns.And each and evry time telling them to be very careful when Dr Ashutosh was around.Dr Raganath was a very pleasant person always jovial trying to put anyone at ease and ofcourse whenever the opportunity presents he will always try to impress any girl with his poems and nice talk.You never feel bored with this kind of person.It was always late afternoon when finally with a big Ouuf Nidhi finished her 1st day duty and drove back home.Tired as she was she just had a light meal and went directly to bed thinking about another hectic day coming tomorrow.

Ashutosh was sitting in his cabin when Dr Mallika ,Ashutosh long year friend and colleague entered with two cups of coffee."I think you really need it Ashutosh Mallika said .Thank you Mallika you are really a good friend who takes good care of others.Mallika smiled.Mallika had always have a crash on Ashutosh but never told him directly.She waited for him almost 12 years and believed that one day or the other Ashutosh will finally proposed to her."So?what happened to the new intern today?" Ashutosh just nodded and said you know it Mallika new interns first time seeing all these machines and blood it does happen" and continue on sipping his coffee.M: Shall we go for dinner tonight?she abruptly asked Ashutosh.A:"Dinner? why?what for?any celebrations?M common Ashutosh should there be any reasons for us to go for a dinner? T;s been a long time since we went out for dinner I can't even remember when.Ashutosh knew about Mallika's feeling for him and unfortunately considers Mallika only as a very good friend and that's all nothing more and he usually avoid going out dinner with her intentionally just not as to give her a false hope.A: O I'm sorry Mallika not today.It's been a very hectic day with 2 difficult surgeries and I need to complete some personal work also.M: Personal work whats is it.Ashutosh just hate it when people try to know much more than he said."Mallika nothing important,thanks for the coffee it's quite late I think we should leave .He tried to escape the question and Mallika noticed it.They greeted goodnight and left.Ashutosh got in his car and drive far away from the city and finally stopped infront of a bungalow.He feels his heart tighten.Looking around he found the place deserted.Memories came back to him this was his house where he was living with his baba who adopted him when he was still a child.He has so many memories attached to his house all these beautiful moments he had with his baba but now the house was not his anymore.One fine day he lost everything the most precious he had in this world his baba and his house.Baba left him all of a sudden with a letter for him.Baba told him that he had no choice than leaving him and don't try to know the reasons.He told him that he knows how valuable this house is to him but he had to give it to someone else his granddaughter as it is the only thing he has left to give to his natin.Ashurosh couldn't understand why his baba did this to him he had been searching for him but till now couldn't find him.Looking at that place makes him more angry and he murmured "I JUST HATE THAT GIRL! I HATE YOU" and turned on his engine and drove back home lamentedly

To be continued hope u'll enjoy

Shah
Chapter 7 THE CONCERN direct link https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/63955931
Chapter 8 Exchange SMS direct link https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/64221100
Chapter 9 Visit to Bani Village direct link https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/64320041
Chapter 10 Visit to Bani Village II direct link https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/66274085
Chapter10 Visit to Bani Village III direct link https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/66899839
Chapter 10 Visit to Bani last part direct link https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/67437186
Chapter 11 Back Home direct Link https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69216025
Chapter 13 FirstDate direct link https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69273925
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Please continue. Your start off was very good. I know that you had asked turags and I to start from the beginning. But I would love to see what your vision for ktlk is. Only one request, could you make your chapters longer. Will be waiting anxiously for your next update.
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Originally posted by: Libra

Please continue. Your start off was very good. I know that you had asked turags and I to start from the beginning. But I would love to see what your vision for ktlk is. Only one request, could you make your chapters longer. Will be waiting anxiously for your next update.

Thanks Turag and know i cant be a good writer and thinker and composer like you and Libra but it's just that i love this show and honestly my life is quite a bit similar with that one but with no Mallika thank god but with KTLK i hope i'll go up to ur expactation trying to take some part of my life and experience and write it wow got only one reply not bad then
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Originally posted by: shah1485

Thanks Turag and know i cant be a good writer and thinker and composer like you and Libra but it's just that i love this show and honestly my life is quite a bit similar with that one but with no Mallika thank god but with KTLK i hope i'll go up to ur expactation trying to take some part of my life and experience and write it wow got only one reply not bad then

Don't worry, it's early, at 11 pm comes nearer, a lot of members will be active.
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cool Shah...do continue...the words and their compositions will come to you as you go by...don't worry about it...for now pen down your thoughts and let them rearrange themselves...

one suggestion is that first write your story in a word pad document...that way you can read it and save it and make changes as and when you require...and when you are fully satisfied, you can post it...All the Best!! 👍🏼
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👏 nice an excellent attempt. I hope you bring out the process of falling in love that we missed seeing on TV.
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Originally posted by: turags

cool Shah...do continue...the words and their compositions will come to you as you go by...don't worry about it...for now pen down your thoughts and let them rearrange themselves...


one suggestion is that first write your story in a word pad document...that way you can read it and save it and make changes as and when you require...and when you are fully satisfied, you can post it...All the Best!! 👍🏼

I would like to thank u both for ur encouragement AshNi is one show that we cant stop vreating our own vision of it.So what can we do whwn we are not satisfied with the real show atleast we can drown happily in our point of view
God Bless
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hey it was superb start

pls continue soon i m 😍 😍 😍


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Good story. Ashni story is so lovely, never get tired of reading it in ffs, and though the story might not be different, everyone's different approach always gives it a new flavour. Keep writing. Waiting for your next update.
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Chapter 2 this 3rd July 2012

It was a cold and wet morning in Lucknow, and Nidhi wondered why on earth she had left the warmth and comfort of her bed. Some days the wet weather did not bother her, but today there was no shelter from the heavy wind and rain that lashed her face. Nidhi shivered and cursed to the fact that she had to go and grab a taxi to go to KGH as baba took the car for some important work in town.

Getting out of bed earlier that morning had been more difficult than usual. There never seemed to be enough hours of sleep at night. But somehow she had managed to pull herself out of her warm bed, dress, grab a bite to eat, and rush out the door and with Dadi Bua always shouting Nidhi "araam se mere bachi kuch to kao phir jao".She just couldn't, she couldn't allow herself to be late as from what she heard from Dr Rangnath yesterday. The taxi stopped just a few miles before the main door of the hospital and Nidhi had to walk and trying to cover herself so as not to be totally soaked to the skin by this rain.Just when she was about to run at her greatest surprise a car just passed besides her and split water all over her clothes.She was in a state of madness she couldn't held her tongue and started shouting angrily with all the bad word she knows.She waved her hand to the driver without even looking at him started to fuss and yell that if he doesn't know he should be driving properly and do think about people who are walking and not because he is in a car he has to pay no attention at people who are on the road and especially in this kind of weather she was talking like Lucknow Express train not even looking at the driver but instead trying to clean her kurti which was full of mud spot all over." Oooh I'm so sorry came the answer from the driver i really didn't mean to do this but it's just i couldn't see the water down. Nidhi continued on " But what will I do now ?How could I go inside like this ?What will people and my colleagues think about me? And above all what will the dean think of me if he sees me like this? I think he will understand came the reply.N: How can you say this you don't even know him and neither do i she said innocently but i heard that they call him DR HARDSTONE .O so you came to know it too was the first thought that came to Asutosh mind.She was so confused and finally raised her eyes and look at Ashutosh. To his great surprise Nidhi didn't recognise him . But Ashutosh did as he saw her after she fainted yesterday. He was just thinking how would she really recognize me as she didn't see me yesterday because of his overload work he didn't have time to be introduced to the new interns. Ashutosh was feeling so miserable at that point looking at her and seeing her eyes full of tears he knew she will blast in a few seconds. Nidhi just shrugged at him and ran inside. Seeing her clothes in that state Dr Ranganath couldn't restrain from laughing and asked Nidhi if she had a good bath in the rain. " You think it's a joke Dr Ranganath ,can you imagine how i'm feeling right now and how i wanted to strangle this guy in the car who split water on me." " Where is he? Asked Dr Ranganath , just show me i will teach him a good lesson for being a careless driver especially when young and lovely interns of KGH are walking on the road. Nidhi smilled at him and was thinking how sweet he was to try to cheer her up."

Dr Nidhi i think you better go change as in 15 minutes all the new interns will be introduced to the Dean" Dr Hardstone" so be prepared and meet infront of his cabin in 15 mins. As most girls of her age Nidhi had a spare clothes which she brought along with her yesterday , she quickly changed and met the others infront of Dr Ashutosh cabin.Her heart was beating so hard when she reached the door and was reading the name on the door" Dr Ashutosh Mattur. Neurosurgeon".Dr Ranganath knock at the door and ask to enter with the interns they all follow him inside. Dr Ashutosh was sitting his back was facing the interns as he was busy talking about a patient with Dr Mallika .Upon hearing the "Good Morning Sir" from the interns he turned to face them and greeted them back.To her utmost surprise she recognised him as being the careless driver who split water on her." YOU" was the only word which came out of her mouth.Everybody were stunned and just looked at Nidhi with a questioning eyes.How could she they were all thinking.Almost then she retracted on her words and bits her lower lips by thinking what she just said.She suddenly felt so ashamed and looked at him sheepishly. Even Dr Ashutosh felt displeased to the way she said it. Never ever before any intern had talked to him like this and he really hates it. He just turned away in disgust and faced the other intern.Dr Ranganath gave a brief introduction of each and everyone and through all the meeting Nidhi didn't dare to look at Dr Ashutosh she was feeling like a mixture of angriness and scare also.

After the speechof Dr Ranganath , Dr Ashutosh elaborated precisely what he do exoect from each intern who joined his hospital. They have to be hard working seriousness,devoteness , responsible and ofcourse disciplined.The speech was taken over by Dr Mallika .A few times during the meeting Ashutosh gave a quick glance at Nidhi but her head was still down looking at the floor. The meeting ended Dr Ranganath, Dr Mallika followed by the interns were leaving one by one the cabin when Dr Ashutosh said " Dr Nidhi , one minute please." She could feel her heart shrinking and was thinking what will he say to me now after all i was rude in my words but then realised that it's not only her fault he was the one to be blamed as he split water on her. She turned back and said "Yes Sir , but still looking down. Dr Nidhi do you have any problem with your eyes? NOOO why should I .I think i should be the one asking you this question Sir!! Ashutosh was taken aback he was thinking my god this girl i think she doesn't even hear what she says, and she continues because i think you are the one who didn't see water on the road.He glanced at her and with a sarcastic voice said to her Ok I know it was my fault i didn't spot the water this is why i called you just to say that i'm really really sorry .Wow Nidhi was thinking Dr Hardstone knows how to say sorry thats good.:It's ok Sir i have spare clothes here.WHAT Dr Ashutosh said you carry along with you spare clothes. What can i do sir Nidhi answered sarcastically this time the astrologer told me that a careless driver will spoil my clothers so better be careful . said she with a cute smile.Nidhi could see him shrugging off and gave her an angry look.May be i went too far in my words she was thinking.But he was looking cute with this angry look of his even though she thought. Ashutosh couldn't believe he was talking with a girl and listening to her sily comments all way long and being annoyed at all. This didn't happen to him before and anyways besides Mallika he doesn't really have had any conversation with ladies if not only for professional matters .

But Nidhi was different she was that kind of chatter box that you wouldn't mind listening over and over he saying to himself. Just then he came out of his dreams and said you know Dr Nidhi Verma you shouldn't be talking to me like that, But Sir there is no plob... problem i was just telling you the truth, the word PROBLEM was a real PROBLEM for nidhi to say she would rather say PLOBLEM and this makes her nervous some time its more like a lisp issue for her.

Feeling that the conversion is taking some other rounds he said Ok Dr Nidhi I just wanted to tell you how sorry i am for what happned to you and i'll make sure next time to be more careful while driving is that ok with you know.Should i believe that u forgave me? Nidhi chucked at hearing this speech and told him its Ok Dr Ashutosh there was no need for that long confession.His face just flush when hearing this and Nidhi could see it too and realised what she said just turn her back and was about to leave the room when Ashutosh told him Dr Nidhi one more thing you should never forget that the dean is called Dr Hardstone here .Nidhi could feel her face flushing without satying a word she just open the door and leave the room. How could i be so stupid she was cursing herself .He is my boss not my colleagues i should rather measure my words next time i talk to him she was wondering while going in the children's ward where her duty was assigned.

Ashutosh was left speechless on his chair thinking about Nidhi's conversation with him.Never before had he feel so comfortable talking to someone and especially to an intern he thought. I think she is really crazy this girl while smiling to himself.But why am i thinking of her he suddenly realised i've met so many interns before and never did one of them stayed in my thought that much.What kind of person in this Nidhi Verma he kept on thinking.All her blabbering didn't seem annoying at all but rather funny and interesting to listen, A big smile came to his face while thinking of her. Ashutosh couldn't stop smilling while thinking of her and looking at her going in the corridor through his blinds.

He shrugged off his shoulders and said to himself i think there will be much more fun coming with this intern. Now back to work he murmured to himself.He took his coat and went out of his cabin direction the " Children's Ward "😆

Hope you'll enjoy guys and by the way i'm not from India and dint have time to check about the weather condition in Lucknow i just put the rain to give a twist to the story😊

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