An MPD case: Fun Post 1 - Page 2

hey bhagwan...

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Hey ! Every one !!!


I am starting a story on the present depressing situation ... please every one continue this...
(Libra, I hope this can be the starter for you... carry on...)



Ashutoshji ko ghutnon mein chot laga ...admitted at KGH. Treatment started immediately... X-Ray was taken...

arre! yeh kya hua!! ab kya hoga!!

All the ( non- existent) senior doctors hairaan... pareshaan...

There is a clear split in his ghutna... two distinguished parts ... clear MPD (Multiple Personality Disorder) case...


( Nidhi comes in with sponge in her hand)

Ashu: Nidhi, today I am feeling more love towards you.
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( Mallika enters.. Ashu ka ghutne mein dard.. personality changed)

Ashu: hey! Mallika!.. woh kaagaz ki kashti.. woh baarish ka paani...magar yaad karo apna jawaani ka saavan



Nidhi: dil deewana... bin sajna ke maanena...(haa..ghutna...vrooommm... ashu into Nidhi mode)

Ashu: aaj tujh ko pukaare mere geet re .. mere geet re.. oh! mere mitwa...



Mallika: aaajaaa...aaajaaa... (dddaaashhh... holding knees... Ashu in mallu's mode)

Ashu: Mitwaaa... kabhi alvida na kehna....



Nidhi / mallika:...some thing... some thing...
Ashu:

(Hey! suddenly my lappy went on strike... not opening icons' pages... please some one add relavant ones...)

Hi. Sorry it took so long for me to respond. I was not trying to be rude. This ff starter of yours totally blew me away, it's amazing. For the last several hours I have been rackin my brains and tearing out my hair trying to come up with even a few lines that would even come close to doing justice to what you have written, couldn't come up with anything. Yaar main to pehle hi nervous about writing, that to for soo many people and that also with some of the most incredible writers I have ever seen(you guys should be writing professionally). I really mean this. Maine toh ek simple si story envision kari thi. Main aap ke jaise creative nahin hoon. So I thought I could maybe write a short story and maybe have you read it, and you could give me your input, and then if it's good enough, I'll post it on the forum, and it could be starter for a chain ff. what say?

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

( Mallika enters.. Ashu ka ghutne mein dard.. personality changed)

Ashu: hey! Mallika!.. woh kaagaz ki kashti.. woh baarish ka paani...magar yaad karo apna jawaani ka saavan

Mudra to good, i have no words to praise ur creative thoughts. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Shee_xaan

great one.

Thank u shee_xaan... please extend with your caps na

Originally posted by: ashvinimk

Mudra to good, i have no words to praise ur creative thoughts. 👍🏼

Kagajg ki kashti barish ka pani😆 very well done.

Thanks ashvini, But I have a limited collection of old songs as I am south Indian...I guess all of you can come up with better ones...

Originally posted by: Blushsarika

Lovely post Mudra,
multiple personality disorder Lol
due to knee injury.
Funny

Thank you Sarika..
Kya kare, hamara dimag toh ghutnon mein... so very necessary to keep them carefully... nahi toh MPD banega...😆

Originally posted by: andkan

MUDRA TOO GOOD.GO AHEAD

ONLY YOU CAN BRING US OUT OF DEPRESSION

Hey come up with your story...not done...

Originally posted by: deepa_jd

hey bhagwan...

mudra u r too much ...

culd u please change d topic header -add fun post na !

when i read d topic ,i thought it was a serious post and was thinkin abt everythin i read abt MPD...i find it a very intriguing topic...

yahan aakar dekha ..to i actually was

HeY! look at from whom I am getting this compliment... done the title change Thank you...
BTW, I should thank you. I have read quiet often about the mention of ghutnon ka dard in your posts...😆... and when I saw, Ashutosh with knee injury, I was like 'My God! abhi iska dimag ka kya haalat hoga...'...



there is a funpost 2 also.. the ashes series...

Originally posted by: Libra

Hi. Sorry it took so long for me to respond. I was not trying to be rude. This ff starter of yours totally blew me away, it's amazing. For the last several hours I have been rackin my brains and tearing out my hair trying to come up with even a few lines that would even come close to doing justice to what you have written, couldn't come up with anything. Yaar main to pehle hi nervous about writing, that to for soo many people and that also with some of the most incredible writers I have ever seen(you guys should be writing professionally). I really mean this. Maine toh ek simple si story envision kari thi. Main aap ke jaise creative nahin hoon. So I thought I could maybe write a short story and maybe have you read it, and you could give me your input, and then if it's good enough, I'll post it on the forum, and it could be starter for a chain ff. what say?

Nahi re.. nothing like that... just think of a simple situation... you will get the flow automatically..

This idea I got from Deepa's posts... She often mentions about ghutna... So when, it was shown that Ashutosh had a knee surgery... I was looking for his dimag ka haalat in Deepa's posts... and I wrote it.