FF - The Story Of 2 Love Birds..[ Part 13 upd 15th May - Page 36 ] - Page 3

Thanks for the PM dear. Very interesting start. Looking forward to more. 😊

Originally posted by: sharmishtha02

Thanks for the PM dear. Very interesting start. Looking forward to more. 😊

Thanks for ur support..the support by all members really is a boost to me..
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Thank you for the message... Good start and interesting flow...

Very well written FF

Originally posted by: ApoorvaFan

<font color="#0000ff" size="2" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Thank you for the message... Good start and interesting flow...</font>

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Thanks for ur wishes and support and the suggestions too..
Regards..

Originally posted by: ash_arti

Very well written FF

Liked it a lot

Thanks a lot..
Regards..

Originally posted by: akshaya24

include this point in the story.

after all,every one needs to know that age gap remains the same.

Well..i was thinkin of posting this point in the FF at a later stage wen Nidhi asks her Baba that how did he know Ashu and how they became frnds..so will post this point then and not now..
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Part 3 - The First Hasmuk Nok Jhonk


Nidhi reaches Ashu's cabin scared..she knocks and a voice comes ' Come In '

Nidhi - ' Yes Sir..aapne bulaya '

Ashu - ' Ha..tum kitne baje hospital aayi ho '

Nidhi - ' Sir main ek gante pehle aayi thi '

Ashu - ' Toh phir tumne entry kyun nahi ki..mujhe pata hona chahiye ki kaun intern duty pe hai aur kaun nahi.. '

Nidhi - ' Sir maine dyan nahi diya '

Ashu - ' Kya matlab dyan nahi diya Nidhi.. '

Nidhi - ' Sorry Sir..main agle baar se dyan rakhungi.. '

Ashu - ' Tik hai..tum jaa sakti ho.. '

Nidhi leaves his cabin in emotion but what she doesnt know is he is angry today coz today is the day wen his Baba left him..he is sad and angry..he doesnt know what to do..
Nidhi goes to canteen to have tea..while sipping tea she recalls what just happened in Dr. Ashutosh's cabin..she finishes her tea and leaves..while on her way to the chamber she comes through the children's ward..she wishes her duty was in the children's ward..she thinks of sneaking in wen she is spotted by Dr. Mallika..

Mallika - ' Dr. Nidhi..aap ko abhi seminar room main hona chahiye..yahan nahi.. '

Nidhi - ' Ji Mam.. '

Mallika - ' Jaldi..Dr. Ashutosh aane wale hain.. '

Mallika leaves and goes to Ashu's cabin..she finds him lost..she tries to chear him up knowin the sadness of the day but that doesnt help..then they leave for the seminar..

In the seminar room Nidhi doesnt look serious and annoys Dr. Ashutosh..

Meanwhile Ashu is trying to control but at the end is forced to send Nidhi out of the seminar room and is asked to wait for him in his cabin..

Nidhi is waiting for him in his cabin..she thinks of killing time and starts to investigate his cabin..she reaches for his drawer and finds a diary..its Dr. Ashutosh's personal diary..just wen she thinks of opening it she hears the walking steps near the cabin and closes the drawer...wat she had forgot was that she has mistakenly worn Dr. Ashutosh's coat..

Ashu - ' Dr. Nidhi..aapne mera coat pehna hua hai.. '

Nidhi - ' Kyun mazak kar rahe hain sir..aapka coat to yahan aapke kursi par... '

She turns and notices it isnt there and indeed she has worn it..

Nidhi - ' Sir..sorry sir..yeh lo sir..galti ho gayi sir.. '

Ashu - ' Its ok Nidhi '

Nidhi - ' Nahi sir..sorry sir..galti se sir.. '

Ashu - ' Nidhi..its fine.. '

Nidhi - ' Is it sir..fine sir..ill leave sir.. '

Ashu - ' Nidhi..i had to speak to u.. '

Nidhi - ' Yes sir..boliye sir.. '

Ashu - ' Yeh kya sir sir laga rakha hai..ek baar bol do..kafi hai..har bar sir sir sir.. '

Nidhi - ' Sorry sir..galti se bol diya sir.. '

Ashu ( little annoyed and little smiling ) - ' Nidhi..tum mujhe pagal kar dogi.. '

Nidhi - ' Nahi sir..yeh mera irada nahi hai sir..sorry sir.. '

Ashu - ' Nidhi..just go..now.. '

She leaves in a hurry where as Ashu is thinkin what to do of this girl and says ' Yeh ladki bhi na '..he smiles and leans on his chair..

Nidhi runs so that she can have fresh air..she goes on sits in the hospital garden..she can still feel the whole cabin atmosphere and then she laughs at the way she was sayin sir sir..Ashu looks from the window and notices Nidhi smiling..he feels something and just gives a casual smile to himself..

In the evening Nidhi is about leave the hospital wen she is stopped by Dr. Ashutosh..he tells her that he will drop her and she responds ' Ok Sir ' .

Ashu - ' Nidhi..yeh hamesha Sir sir mat bolo..kuch zyada hi ajeeb lagta hai..ek ya 2 baar toh tik hai..par jab dekho sir..'

Nidhi - ' K Ashutosh..sorry..Dr. Ashutosh..'

Ashu - ' Now thats k.. '

Both are feeling the cold breeze blowing outside and Ashu comments ' Nidhi..tum haste hue bahut achi lagti ho..hamesha haste hue raho..aur udas nahi jab main daantu '

Nidhi - ' Aapne kab dekha '

Ashu - ' Jab tum garden main has rahi thi '

Nidhi thinks that why was Ashu seeing her wen he had whole of his cabin to look at..she keeps thinkin wen her thoughts are broken wen Ashu informs that they have reached home..Ashu drops her but is forced to meet Col Verma..Verma and Ashu have a small talk and Ashu leaves..

At night..Nidhi is still thinkin how Ashu told her that she looks nice while she smiles and she looks herself at the mirror and smiles..

Anji enters and finds Nidhi smiling at the mirror..

thank u all for ur support..
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