FF Complete: Closing the Loop (Part 18-21 - Pg 64)

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Shari30

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Posted: 13 years ago

#361

haaaila thanks for my double wammy... just love nandini ma she is great... details to follow be fainted back to ASH NI MB world

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sshirley

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Posted: 13 years ago

#362

Hi dear, beautiful update. esp. 14

hungry for more

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sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Binat
Awesome...short and sweet, wish it was longer😉 cant wait for the next update.

Thanks dear. 😊 Not one, but two parts are up today. 😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: sharmishtha02

Thanks dear. 😊 Not one, but two parts are up today. 😛

awesome parts. Could you update some more? 😉

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amjavali

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hai hai my santa Claus 😊...Thank you for double Post ..you made my weekend ..Wonderful write up ..thanks again..

Pls post next part soon ...waiting eagerly 😆

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DikshaBaluja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#366

Good morning Mish..Thanks a lot for these day-to-day wonderful updates...Your updates truly make my day and my night as well...Firstly, coming to the love confession part..It was just awesome...you know I simply love cookies,...It was so so so so sweet of Ashu giving rose to Nidhi..asking her out for a movie..and finally confessing his love to her..and asking her to give another chance to their relation...good that you included Nandini's weakness in their love confession sequence..one wouldnt accept love just coz one is weak..and liked the way Ashu clarifies to her that his love is not out of mercy or coercion.!!...Now, coming to the Tsunami part...It was really very very well handled...must say..it was superb..the tsunami didnt last longer...got finished as soon as it arose...I thought there would be some problem that would continue for next 2-3 parts but it was resolved in a very amicable way in that part itself...loved the way you handled the whole situation...Mrs.Verma really played a very nice part by intervening in their confusion and asking Nidhi to have trust in Ashu...After all, having trust in a relationship matters the most and as said by Nandini..there shouldnt be need of any third person..the two should know how to resolve their matters...loved the way ashu made Nidhi understand everything and both of them understood each other...I had slightest of idea that Ashu's grudge was to hide his real emotions for Nidhi..but at that time..it seemed a bit odd to believe so..as the grudge was just too much..and one couldnt percept that love is behind it...but now the mystery is solved and I'm relieved !!...and just when I was feeling that there was no romance coming up you updated the 14th part...Ohh..it was just wonderful...Nandini teasing Ashu and Nidhi was very cute...and then Nidhi asking Ashu..was there any woman in your life..was too cute and sweet...and then ashu cupping nidhi's face and closing in for a kiss was quite dreamy and nice...loved it...hope to see more romantic sequences in upcoming parts...important issues you bring up..like marriage is not like buying a refigerator...and ashu saying " "Oh God! You are anxious about that. Nidhi - I am not a ghost from from the fifteenth century that I would judge a woman on her virginity. What got you thinking like that? Oh... Oh my God."...indeed a commendable job by you by bringing these issues in light...Last but not the least..now since you have posted two parts in a row...is it so that you wont update tonight...Please post the next part tonight too...keep up the good job..awesome update...post soon !!

Edited by DikshaBaluja - 13 years ago