FF Complete: Closing the Loop (Part 18-21 - Pg 64)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: NeelimaSJ
Beautiful, beautiful update Mish.

I knew it! Ashutosh has been in love with Nidhi ever since he set eyes on her. No wonder he was tough on her. As they say "The meaner, the keener." 😳 The part where Nidhi feels better by Ashutosh's presence was really beautiful.

Nidhi's mom has cancer!!!😭

Thanks for sharing.

P.S. You've used Rupa instead of Nidhi in two sentences. At first I thought Nandini is trying to introduce Ashutosh to a single lady 😃

Thanks Neelima. I hope the wait for the confession was worth it. 😊 Its not over though. So, keep an eye!! 😳

Thanks for pointing out the name issue 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: vinnas
Ashutosh also lose his cool at that, "Stop this 'child' business, will you? No - you are not a child and I had never seen you as one. As far as I am concerned, you are a grown up woman, who is intelligent enough; a woman who is... mature for her age and charming and attractive. What did you say? I won't understand. Nidhi, you are the one who doesn't understand. You do not understand why I do whatever I do. Yes - I worry about you, I care for you. But the reason is that I am in love with you, since the first time..." Ashutosh stopped. He realized that he had spoken more than he ever intended to. The regret showed up on his face and Nidhi looked at him wide-eyed. Was all of this a dream?

I LIKE this conversation very much keep continue nd update next part early plzzz im waitin eagerly to read next pov👏👏

Thanks dear. 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: niniborn2rule
gr8t work mish...so ashni are in love!!!!😳

Thanks. 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: oaz30
Okay I am kind back to earth...

Mish Meri jaan... as i have said many a time you are simply like old wine keeps getting better and better... I loved sacrifice but this one is shaping as wonderfully if not way better than sacrifice

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Originally posted by: oaz30
ohhh you have to love the interaction ashu and nandini ma... love the way that ashu is gone become the support system of the two verma woman. Looking to see how you are gone develop the cancer track... with Rang and this one you have wonderful avenues to explore and wonderful parts for us to read.

the hospital part bears a semblant of similarity with sacrifice but haaaila love the way ashu firmly yet respectfully gets nandini ma to go and rest.

Yep - I have shamelessly plagiarized myself in this part 😆

[QUOTE=oaz30 hmmm the maelstrom of feelings beautifully depicted... present past doubts reality all blended together

Then the second dhamaka...the frontal face a face... shari was lost daydreaming MB as that ashu😍😍

That ashu sure has guts to come upfront with her lie... and then the dam breaks at both ends and haaaila so wonderfully done showing how each one of them is a strong character... but you know me have a personal pref for ashu... MB would have been stupendous here...
I won't understand. Nidhi, you are the one who doesn't understand. You do not understand why I do whatever I do. Yes - I worry about you, I care for you. But the reason is that I am in love with you, since the first time..."

dreamy words that yummy MB would have done justice to that. Thats spoken like then man who finally confronts his feelings .,, agree its under tension but he had to give it a name and nids had to hear it..

yeah dil mange much much much much much more

bear hug my mish

and shari faints back to MB ASHU land😍

Hugs back darling!! 🤗 And Mish chidkofied water on Sharifa to bring her back 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: ApoorvaFan
Thank you for message... Otherwise I would have read it tomorrow only...

Very good part... Dhamaka...
Nidhi's mom's health and also Ashu's confession ... ya.. also looks like Nidhi also has got some clues about her feelings...

The way 8th part has gone, I thought it will take atleast 2 more parts before love comes up. But you have got it quickly. Good;

Like most of the people predicted, here Ashu is more vocal and also taking steps

Thanks AF. 😊 The aftermath of health issue and confession will continue for a while. 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: wizardofoz
awesome awesome awesome , please continue the confession and post confession cute scenes.

Thanks dear. 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: SwastikAshNi
Quite interesting.So Ashu was i Love from the first day.But how did he take his feeling?I mean he just liked Nidhi and he had no intention to tell it then or he could not tell it? the flow is very fine,update soon.

Thanks dear. 😊 Your questions will be answered in next part. Though there is a hint in how Ashutosh regretted having blurted his feelings out. 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#248

Waiting for your next update... Goth

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Posted: 13 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: vanillaflowers
Mish
That's going at a wonderful and really engrossing pace. Next update as soon as possible. Till then it's ashu and nidhi waiting for answers from each other. 😊

Thanks Vanilla 😊 Update should come tonight.