FF Complete: Closing the Loop (Part 18-21 - Pg 64) - Page 24

Awesome chapter...
Oh Nandini is suffering frm brest cancer...really sad..i m scare to imagine nidhi's reaction when she ll know?its good to see that nandini trusted ashutosh...
Nidhi met an accident n after she awaked she wants to see ashu...it means she loves him..yupee
Last part was hilarious i knew it ashu loves her...
Now curious to know whr their r'ship goes n ofcourse me worry about Nandini...
Thank you

Another superb update ,
very well written,liked it,

Nandini is trusting Ashutosh so much that she has told him about her illness , which she is hiding from even his daughter
which means a lot ,she trusts ashu that he will take care of her daughter after her death.
Which explains that Nandini has read his mind that he feels something for her daughter , and same for nidhi also.

It's good that Ashutosh told her about his feelings before her mother revealed about her illness,
otherwise she must have thought he is pitying her.

Loved the way ashutosh revealed about his feelings,
want to know what would be Nidhi's reaction

can't wait ,so please update soon
eagerly waiting for the next part
curiosity is increasing.

Excellent...i am eagerly waiting for the next update!!

Originally posted by: vanillaflowers

Mish , really great going. Rock on

Originally posted by: DikshaBaluja

Hey Mish...Thanks for the daily updates...I really like it that you update your FF daily...and yeah..sorry for replying late...was a bit tied up in the last few days...Firstly, talking about Ranganath's problems and the issues he's dealing with..you really brought his fears and insecurities in a very nice way...showed all the symptoms that one suffers...his trying to hide his problems from Anji was very well descripted and was quite natural...one would definitely not want to reveal his darker side in front of anybody...but a big thanks to Ashu's understanding of Ranganath and Anji's love and support that Ranganath is undergoing a therapy now and hopefully Ranganath will not try to go away from Anji...Ranganath and Anji's love story was also very nicely written...slow, sweet, nice, subtle...Ranganath seems to be a quite good speaker...liked the way he speaks up in the discussion sessions...hope ranganath comes over his fears and accepts Anji's love and moves on with her..Thanks for bringing out a sensitive issue like Child Abuse..Its really very important that parents listen to their children and take necessary steps and also thanks for pointing out that April is celebrated as Child Sexual Abuse Prevention Action Month...Happy Earth Hour Day...and now coming to the sweet Ashni chapter..must say that this chapter is really very very nice..normally, I read a chapter twice or thrice..but this one I have read atleast a 10 times...simply awesome...I'm really enjoying the Ashni conversations...Love the sweet and outgoing Nidhi..who barged into Ashu's office just like he was a very dear friend to her whom she needed to listen her out...and then it was so sweet of Ashu to react in a calm and composed way...and assuring her that she can be there in her office any time she wishes too...This was the point of attraction in the whole part ""I remember everything about you Nidhi."..Does it mean that he had been rude to Nidhi in college life just.because she could work more and more hard...I just can't understand what was that grudge that he had for Nidhi in her college life..and this one is just an assumption...loved their conversation over the Tea a lot...I'm also enjoying the technicality in your FF..like exams..filling up forms etc...Nandini really likes Ashu a lot..moreover,she has also asked Ashu to move on in life and settle with someone...so, in future I hope that she'll gladly accept Ashu-Nidhi relation...sorry for the long review.but what to do..I'm always a bit late...keep up the good work...awesome update :)

Hi Mish, Love the complexities in your characters. Make them so much more realistic. For a while there I was wondering if Nidhi's mom was interested in Ashu..crazy scary thought😲

So Ashu confessed, am glad he did it after Nidhi realized her feelings for Ashu arent just a HOD/professor relationship.Sad that Mrs. Verma has cancer. Cancer is effecting so many lives and families. I am sure Ashu will provide the support Nidhi needs at point in his life, but he is still married??? Another complexity.

Fantastic update...

Originally posted by: Poojapange

Hey Sharmishtha...
Part 7 was intresting...Ranga faced so much in his past n now he dnt want spoil Anji's life...hope everything will be fine with them...
Part 8...Beautiful..I think Ashu is in love with nidhi...Because he helps her in her problems,he told her that she is free to come in his cabin any time,he remembered everything about nidhi etc.
Intresting story...
Thank you

Originally posted by: aarch

Part 7- focused on Anji-ranga.. You have put forward a very sensitive topic. really nice.. Its good Ranga is getting some help. Anj's behaviour is also very rational. 👏

Part 8 well, I am now quiet sure, Ashu got attracted towards Nidhi when she was student. I am liking their conversations.Nidhi's dependence on Ashu. Curious to see how do you take the story further, how will Nidhi realize her love..😉

Originally posted by: hopefulromantic

Sharmistha02, wonderful story! Just started reading it ... It's a very mature story with complex characters and motivations.

Love the relationship between Nidhi & her mother and burgeoning one with Ashutosh. I like the liberties taken with the story - changing the setting and the backstory. It is refreshing.

I read your previous stories based on DK, which were great, but this original story has its charm because as mentioned before, we don't know what will happen.