FF Complete: Closing the Loop (Part 18-21 - Pg 64) - Page 27

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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice mish...👏...with every chapter something new gets revealed...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mudraswathi

Sharmishtha,
what a fresh story yaar...I have caught up with your FF late and ..its amazing..how you people really carry on with the continuity and remember so many issues to intertwine tactfully!!

Hatsoff to you.👏


Thanks MS 😊 Glad you managed to catch up with it and liked it too. This is the first time I attempted something away from DK concept. So, I wasn't sure when I had started!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Sharmishtha. Commenting on this FF for the first time. Enjoying it completely and wait for your updates eagerly every day as always. This FF brings back a lot of memories. One, my Mum had breast cancer but she recovered from it by God's grace. N's reaction on learning that her Mum is suffering from it brought back my own painful memories. Two, a professor in my college and classmate of mine fell in love when I was doing my graduation. Dont know whether they married or not because there was additional complication. He was a Catholic but my classmate was Hindu. The professor was not apologetic about it though. Looking forward to read how A comes around to realizing that there is nothing wrong in being in love with someone so junior. Found Ranga's story disturbing but I guess that is what it was meant to be. Waiting to read progress on that front too. Good going.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mish... haaaila every word was worth the wait... that 1 is proving better that Dk ... Haaai ashu is indeed a knight in shining armour

Shari has fainted and is MB/Ashni land...

PS: niggling thought... when will ashu tell ab sarika
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superlike Sharmishtha...

Nandini is really a sweetheart. Somehow I visualize Shama Solanki as Nandini.
Poor Nidhi, really had a emotional roller coaster ride. Both of them know they love eachother, but Ashu is hesitant. Very nicely written. Very good flow..
Only thing It is a bit difficult to accept that Nidhi was unaware of fact about her father. just my POV...

Do I need to say, I am waiting eagerly for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks Mish, for this very interesting ff. It is very well written and has a very different flavor. Nidhi has no BB or baba. Same with Ashu.
I really like the way Ashu is handling the current situation. He is sensitive ( comforting Nidhi with encouraging words---There are times when our parents need us more than we do and for you this time has come a little bit earlier). He is practical (reminding her of the deadline and offering her to help grading papers). I really like your portrayal of Ashu.
Yes this story is unpredictable and I eagerly wait for your updates. Please continue.
PS. I imagine MB in this role. I enjoy watching SK as AShu too. I'm a huge SK fan but in this case its just an old habit. Happy writing!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh my god!!!!!!!!! i will die out of excitement until the next update arrives...so update ASAP!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Mish...
Wonderful and emotional update I must say. Some times u need a friend the most and the characterization of both ashu and nandhini have been done so intricately that u win hands down. Next update ASAP Mish.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mish ..what a beautiful update...

The strong relation bet mother and daughter is so well written. Here Nandini is so more like a friend to Nidhi and she knows her daughter so well even without Nidhi telling her anything. Am glad Nidhi has her support...knew she would as Nandini already likes Ashu .
Poor Nidhi agony and ecstasy on the same day...

Ashu has declared his love and support for Nidhi but when will he tell Nidhi abt his marital status and how will Nidhi react ???

Am loving this Ashu a lot...he has no insecurities and is so confident and tackles all problems head on !!

Update soon pls !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks a lot everyone for the lovely comments. I will reply individually later. I have work to do today. So, there is a small chance that the update may not come tonight. I will try my best to update, but please bear with me if I can't.

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