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Mimoha

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Bhanu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Hi,

Its really nice...please do continue.

Loving the concept...very interesting characters...its refreshing.

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ruchi21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Finaly Ashu and Nidhi get marry, they are couple now, and part 8 was great,i read part 8 many times, so ashu accept nidhi, i love ashu and nidhis relesionship is improve, eagerly waiting for next parts.

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bhalobasa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

How I missed these two parts...😭
As I said earlier, I was very sceptical about Shaina, I did not want her to have any feeling for Ashu, so it feels nice to see friendship and only friendship is between them and the bond is so pure...
Shaina rightly and naturally knows what a girl expect from her marriage, she knows that every girl wait for this day the whole life before marriage and cherish this day after marriage all life...Shaina herself expected this, but she was cheated...And so she wants, atleast Nidhi should get what she dreams, liked how she forced to Ashu to do all the rituals 😊..

Loved the family moments...Being a girl, I can understand what is going on in Nidhi and her mother's mind...A sad truth of any girl's life...ANd the Ishan and Aryan's teasing of Nidhi...I enjoyed it to the fullest... I personally being one and only child,
always craved for this funny little little things which only brothers and sisters can share..

And in Part 8 , I loved everything ...The bond between Nidhi and Mayank is so strange but so real, Mayank is so so fond of Nidhi, The children can understand better than the adults that who love them...And I wanted to hug Nidhi when she proudly declares Mayank as her, their son...👍🏼
And I believe this incident helped Ashutosh to adore her, respect her, to open up to her..❤️

Nidhi's urge to be near to her Man is so real...and she is ready to wait all her life to be loved by Ashutosh as a husband loves his wife, Her promise to Ashu lying on her lap----so so romantic...😍
Like Mimo said, my heart went out realizing Ashu's insecurities, someone who is deprived of love always, was hurt so many times in the past that he is so insecure about any relationship, being afraid of loosing Nidhi again...And Nidhi understanding this, seeing the fear, pain in his eyes assuring him by holding him, loving him, she is like the cold water to Thirsty Ashutosh, She is like the oasis in his desert life...

Anna , I enjoy reading all your updates of all FFs, but this Part 8 of this FF is best for me amoung all your FFs...👏

P.S.--- Shayna-Aryaan story is also on a interesting point..

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ApoorvaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

This is going good. I liked the different concept... Waiting for the next parts...

When are you planning to update?

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Ana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: kritash
yaar, great two love stories simultaneously. hope from here we can see the great romance of ashni.
it is hard to narrate a different story, which you are doing right now flawlessly.
hat's off.I liked the part where nidhi decleared mayank as her son , totally understandable and supportive wife.
with this approach only she can win ashu's love.
fantastic approach.
liked this saturday, two parts in single update.
waiting eagerly for next update kya karen yeh dil maange more.

thanx so much yara for liking the concept...
I just took a chance with this story n i m glad you guys liked it n give such warm response
Nidhi needs to pe patient to get ashu love...thats what i m tryng with her to do...n ashu understanding her...thats the most imp
hope to see ur comments as they mean too much to me

luv ya
ana😳

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Ana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: Mimoha
Loved both the chapters Ana. You are a revelation as a story teller. I am amazed at the sheer range of dimensions/issues/equations you are exploring in this story - A's & Shy's friendship, N's relation with her siblings, parents and now Mayank, Shy's relation with Aryan, A's professional relation with N's family, Malika's inability to accept that she can not be a mother and, issues related to adoption. I love the way you have intertwined the lives of A, N, Aryan, Shy and Mayank. You come across as a very mature and confident story teller.

N comes across as such a pure hearted soul. You have made her so lovable. I adored her announcement, "Guys, meet our son...Mayank". I am glad A has started opening up to N, depending on her and becoming attracted to her.

My heart went out to A on reading about his parents. Issues related to adopted children and adoptee parents are very close to my heart as my immediate family and two friends who are more like family have adopted children. We always discuss such issues when we meet/speak. DK had dwelled on these issues in quite a detail. You have described A's insecurity, fear and pain resulting out of being snubbed and rejected so sensitively. I plan to share this with them. My heart went out to A on reading "Are you going to leave me too?" and "I can't sleep without hugging someone...Those nights were sleepless". I am happy to read that A is starting to find emotional security in N. You separated A & N initially in your last FF. This is a contract marriage. Please please can I request you not to separate them in this FF even for a brief moment.

Looking forward to your next chapter. Dont make us wait for long.

I m so happy that u observe each n ever aspect i tried to portray...i want to show all the importance of each and every character😳
I myself love that guys meet our son Mayank part...i myself cant believe sometimes that how i can wrote this...many times its boring stuff that i wrote...but i love my this fic...😆
adopting children topic is also so close to my heart...my 2 cousins are adopted and i can see a huge difference in there brought up...😕 while one is treated like a princess, the boy is not...so i know how painful sometimes it makes a person...
keep commenting yara...it means alot

luv ya
ana😳

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Ana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Part 9

"Shy, please...give me a chance...only once...please" He said literally crying...Shaina on the other hand slide down against the door as tears too well up in her eyes...

She still care for him...his crying tone was eating her but is it all the result of the pain, she went through all these years...did he only deserve this...

NO, ofcourse not...he is capable more of it...If he wasn't confirmed to lead his life further with her than he should never done that...and if he did than he should accept her...it wasn't her fault that made her lead her life like a crap.. She stand up and open the door to find him sitting down on his knees, holding his face...

"Aryan, you never give me a chance so why should i gave you one...haan...living in the same city, you never bother to find out what happened to me...than why should i bother what you do...go away aryan...you are nothing to me"

She shut the door hard on his face but he again continued

"Shy please, i know i did wrong that time...i was confused between my heart and brain but now i got the answer...i didn't bother coming to you as i knew that you don't want me to come across you"

"Than why now? i didn't want to see you now too...can you just disappear with this face of your's?" She said harshly...

Aryan got his answer and he replied getting up

"If thats your wish...than i will never come across to you" Shaina left for her room and closed the lights as that indicate that she is not in mood for anything related to him

Aryan disappointingly, left the place...

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"Beta, i think its high time for you to go on a vocation..." Yograj said as ashutosh came to his room to discuss something about the tender they got

"But Uncle, the business..." ashutosh said trying to avoid this discussion

"Ashutosh, can you please sit here?" He made ashutosh sit on the couch placed in his room

"See Beta...i know you had a past...everyone do have but you have to move on..." Ashutosh look down at his file

"Don't think, i am saying because i am Nidhi's father...but generally...I am equal to the age of your father...take it as a fatherly advise...Life just can't stop with one person...You loved your wife...its pretty natural...but now you have some responsibilities too...Of Nidhi, Of Mayank..."

Ashutosh look up at him to find sincerity on his face

"You must be thinking that i myself put load on you by making you marry her" Yograj chuckled at his words but Ashutosh quickly cover up him saying

"No Uncle...She is not a load...Can i be frank?" He asked and continued as he nod

"I actually want to thank you to come with the offer...it was not only an offer...its now my life...She understands me and respect my decision...I am trying to cover up the loss and i assure you...You will see her life full of happiness" a smile broke on Yograj's face and he stand up

"I know, you will"...he went towards his table and take out two tickets from the drawer

"Here, your wedding gift from us..."

"But" Ashutosh again started but Yograj interrupt again

"Look, i don't want arguments...Take it as a gift from your father rather than Nidhi's" Ashutosh's eyes welled up on feeling such father's concern and just hug him...He missed this concern...and now he knows...along with Nidhi, he also found a family whom he can call his own...

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Shaina entered Ashutosh's apartment to see Nidhi doing dusting and arranging stuff while Mayank was playing on the carpeted floor

"Hey" she said as Nidhi turned and hug her...

"Long time Shaina..." She said as Shaina take place next to Mayank and started playing with his car

"Actually buzy with work...Ashu must have told you" She looked up at her and then back at Mayank

"Ya...but no office talk at home...ok...Can't you guys just get bored... always thinking about your office and tenders" She get into the Wash room to clean her hands...and then rush to Kitchen to find Kheer getting thick and so, she started moving spoon into it

"Hmmm...what a smell...Kheer" Shaina said as she too entered the Kitchen to find her working on it...Nidhi smiled and said

"Can you taste it? tell me is it Ok or not as its my first try?" She said as lines were appear on her forehead due to confusion

Shaina filled a spoon and after cooling down that, eat it and left stunned

"Is its really your first time?" She asked making a bad face just to test her...as she nod with a worried look...Shaina just smiled and said out

"Its really good...Ashutosh gonna love it" She said engrossed in Kheer's pan not to notice Nidhi blushing

"Maaa maaa" Shaina heart skip a beat as mayank cried out...She look at Nidhi to clean her hands with napkin and rushing outside to find Mayank hit the floor...Quickly getting hold on him...she just hug him and started calming him down along with kissing his forehead but mayank keep crying calling Mama while clinging to her but atlast...later the cry turn to sob and then he was normal

Shaina keep looking at them standing on the kitchen's door...

"She is perfect for Mayank..." Shaina thought looking at the worried expression on Nidhi's face and the calmness appear on mayank as she hold him in her hands...Nidhi stand up holding him and turn to find shaina lost

"What happened?" She snapped her out of the thoughts

"Nothing, he really get closed to you" She said touching his cheek which got a little jump with the touch...he was a chubby child

"hmmm...He is learning how to walk now-a-days...i assumed he just tried that himself" She said nuzzling Mayank's neck and left giving him a kiss as he smiled

"Oh, i came to take you out for Shopping...its long back i shopped last time with anyone...Will you come?? Please" Shaina said expecting a yes as if she didn't than ashutosh gonna hit her...He wanted to surprize her while getting up one morning to tell her that the luggage is packed and they are leaving for New Zeeland and Shaina just left grinned with his plan...he is trying to change himself

"Sure, but after Kheer is prepared...till then, you can play with mayank...i have lots to do..." She said handing over him to Shaina to whom he liked for the first time...he was getting friendly...and Shaina just left smiled

"Ok"

"Baby, don't be naughty ok" Nidhi said warning Mayank

"Baa baa...ga" He said in his childish tone as Nidhi left smiling and Shaina just come to main hall to play with him

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"This looks good..." Shaina said pointing towards a navy blue sari having pink and silver zarbdozi work on it...Nidhi like that too...She do have lot of collection of jeans, capri, beige with frock, kurta's or flip flop's as ashutosh don't want her to change and ask her to wear what she wanted...but only had that wedding sari with her...

"Try it" Nidhi went into changing room while Shaina stand outside with Mayank's stroller

**Beep Beep**

Shaina smiled meaningfully on seeing the name and pick up

"Where are you guys?" There was impatience in his voice

"Don't worry ashu...your wife is doing full shopping as i am not letting her leave a single stuff...you will left stunned on seeing her wearing the collection" Shaina knew that he must be blushing on the other side so continued

"Don't blush so much...the staff is watching you" She knew he must have come out from his room as she heard the voice of closing door and chirping of people

Ashutosh smiled seeing exactly what she said and get into elevator

"We will see...One minute Shy" He put the phone down as a peon told him to meet Aryan as he is leaving to calcutta next week to handle the business out there

"Ok, i will..." He again put the phone back to his ears and said

"Sorry Shy, i need to leave to meet aryan...he need to instruct me about the details of a project as he is leaving for Calcutta tomorrow..."

"Ok" she said stunned with the news...she was feeling bad to find about aryan but hold on...don't he deserve that...surly he do...he made her left her family...he too need to get the same lesson

"Shy, hmmm...have a good day at shopping" He said scratching his temple as a grin take place on Shaina's face and she said

"Ashutosh...hold yourself boy...she is your's...remember" She said putting some knowledge in his head

"Ok" he said cutting the call and entered aryan's cabin

"How it is?" Nidhi asked coming out as Shaina looked at her from head to toe and think

"Surly fit for a romantic candle light dinner...Hope ashutosh's going to take her to one...newaz, better to not take any chance" shaina thought as a smirk appear on her face

"Shaina?" Nidhi said getting confused

"Ya, its prefect..." Nidhi smiled and left to change

Whole day they buy the stuff for Nidhi and Mayank...

"Shaina, i supposed its going to be you to do shopping...but in the end, you didn't buy anything for yourself...i am feeling bad that you pay for all this" Nidhi said getting into the car, as after folding and placing the stroller the the back with bags, shaina take driving place and apply seat belt

"Nidhi, don't worry...tell you a secret...i stole ashutosh's credit card today...he is a biggest miser i ever met and today was the biggest chance to make him pay..." Nidhi giggled along with Shaina

"He's going to be angry" Nidhi said waring her

"He is not...as how can he get angry at his beautiful wife?" Shaina wink at her as she blushed

"My my...someone is blushing..?" Shaina said starting the car with a grin

"Shaina" Shaina smiled and reverse the car

"I always wanted a sister to whom i can look upto...from now its going to be you?" As car come to a halt, Shaina look at her and Mayank sleeping in her lap...and after giving a smile...she put the gear and zoomed off

How different can two siblings be...there aryan who didn't care a bit about her althought having a full year relationship...and she is, with whom only one day made her get so close to her...Life and people are surly unpredictable

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Ana

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part 10

Ashutosh wake up in the middle of the night to not find Nidhi beside him...ruffling his hairs, he get up rubbing his eyes and come out from the room...he searched in kitchen in main hall but no sight of her...Right then, he saw the lights of Mayank's room On and went in to find Nidhi sitting and sleeping beside Mayank's crib...He smiled and sit on his toes to have a good look of her

Today, Mayank got vaccination and Polio drops as Nidhi made ashutosh go with Mayank...she hate injections and moreover that, she knew mayank will cry and she hate that...but in the end, she knew its for his betterment in future...Doctors said that he will get fever tonight and with the fear of him crying at night, Nidhi take him to his room and sit beside her..

Ashutosh smiled and pick her up in his arms without disturbing her sleep and take her to the room...she was snuggled up with him as he put her in the bed and later, shifted Mayank too in there room with his crib...Getting into the bed, He cling to her and keep caressing her face...she was looking tensed and he knew the reason

In the morning...Nidhi opened her eyes to find herself absorbed in his chest and he was holding her tightly...protectively...she smiled and keep looking at him...Right then she felt the little hands on her shoulder and a voice

"Gaa...Ooo..oo" Nidhi turned and smiled seeing Mayank there smiling brightly...she shifted her weight and turn to hold Mayank... She checked his temperature and it was normal now...she take him in her arms and kissed his cheek...almost eating it as Mayank giggled...Nidhi too smile with him

With the movement, Ashutosh wake up to see Nidhi and mayank playing...He get up and kissed Nidhi's cheek on an impulse and took her with surprize...

"Whats going on?" he put his weight on Nidhi and tickle Mayank's tummy on which he smiled.

Nidhi blushed feeling him so close to herself and turn to look at Mayank

"Why you slept in his room?" He asked still looking at Mayank but Nidhi got it

"Mayank was getting a bit fever and he should get sweat... i took him to his room so he can sleep without fan...and that worked" Ashutosh admired her to be so caring for Mayank but for him too...she left so that he can sleep without disturbing...he is getting more attracted to her

"but how i came here?" ?Nidhi got confused and ashutosh smiled sheepishly

"you know i can't sleep without hugging you" He turn to look at her to find intense love in her eyes...

He keep looking at her and move forward to her face and placed his lips on hers...the pleasure was unmeasurable...they both just lived the moment as his hard lips take place on her soft one's...he nibbled, sucked her upper lip and later did the same with the lower one...Ashutosh hands went around her waist and rubbed her back...Nidhi's hand automatically go around his neck and press him down to have more of him...he got it and rip her lower lip to get more of her as he deepened the kiss...the passion, the intense proximity was hard to resist as her hands went inside his shirt to get incontact with his skin...they both just lose themselves in the moment...Her moans were making him more impulse to have her...at last they broke to have some breath

Still feeling eachothers breath, closing there eyes they just lived the moment...For Nidhi it was the result of her wait and for ashutosh...he was felling in love with her...she was snatching his heart...and they both didn't regret the moment

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Nidhi was shocked to find about newzeland plan of ashutosh...ashutosh already have packed all the stuff...he wrapped up all his work and inform all the details to Shaina...Aryan cancelled going to Calcutta as Yograj asked him to stop till Ashutosh Nidhi return...

"Ashutosh, but how...i mean...what is all this?" She asked turning to him

"Nidhi, we are going on a vocation and its final"...he move forward and hold her shoulders...they were now comfortable with each other...they do shared many hungry hot passionate kisses but ashutosh always withdraw himself when she was looking for more...but she was willing to wait for the perfect moment...n may be on this honeymoon...she thought as she blushed

"Look, i think its time that we should know each other as we can't live all our life like this...On the vocation, its going to be just you and me" He hold her from her waist and make her get close to him

"Ashutosh, do you really want to move on?" She said moving his hands on his chest...ashutosh smile and hug her, made her rest her head on his chest

"Positive" he said sweetly as Nidhi felt a sensation inside her body...but but

"Ashutosh, what about Mayank" She look up to find ashutosh looking at him, sweetly...he move his hand on her face and rub the corner of her lips with her thumb...

"He is going to be with Shy" Nidhi confused look up at him

"But how can he?"

"Nidhi, there is something i want to tell you..." He said leaving her and turn other side to have the power to say it to her

"What?"

"Mayank is Shaina's son" Ashutosh said it with great effort...he turned to find a calm Nidhi

"Someone just spend a night with her and left her with Mayank...luckily or unluckily, the day Mayank born, Mallika find out that she can't be a mother so i asked Shaina to give mayank to us as its hard to live as a single unmarried mother and she agreed" He made Nidhi sit on bed in tears

"That must be really hard for Shaina...no one can imagine that she went through so much pain...who was the man?" Nidhi look at ashutosh

"Don't know, Shaina refused to tell me and give me her swear to never asked that again...she loved him so much and i know, she still do thats why is not ready to marry anyone else" Nidhi got close to ashutosh and closed her eyes

"You are right, Mayank should spend time with Shaina as she her real mother...Now i know how hard must be it for her to see her son living away from her and to find him saying Mother to someone else than her" Ashutosh just kissed her forehead lightly and said

"Stop thinking about it Nidhi...Shaina is a strong girl and she can cope up with this...She give us happiness by putting the part of her heart away from her and now, its our turn" Ashutosh said as Nidhi nod in agreement

After that kiss that morning, they were getting more close to each other and now, share a good bonding...Love is there but they just need the perfect time to confess it

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Shaina hug ashutosh and nidhi tightly as she came to know that they are leaving Mayank behind for her...It was not like ashutosh never asked her to spend time with him...But she just feared...feared of what will happen if later Mayank will come to know that she is her mother...how she gonna explain about his father...She don't want to attach herself too much with Mayank that later it will be hard for her and Mayank too to stay apart...but now, the chance ashutosh and nidhi gave her, she don't want to loose that...she gonna have a time full of life with him

"Thank you so much guys...i can't think i can repay you guys ever for this time" She said having tears in her eyes

"Shy, don't be a baby...mayank is as much yours as ours and you have the full right on him..." Ashutosh said wiping her tears

"Look i don't think i should tell you anything about him as you know him more than me...but just give him a big sloppy kiss for me every morning...please" Nidhi said smiling as Shaina too smile

"Sure" Shaina and Nidhi hug while leaving ashutosh apart

"Ok Mothers...you better watch out your responsibilities...ok" He said meaningfully to Nidhi...Nidhi get a hint but think its her imagination as how can he move too fast...but ashutosh really wanted too...he can't neglect his husband's responsibilities anymore...its already two months of there marriage

"Ok, we should leave now..." Nidhi said asking for leave and went towards Mayank who was walking around the house...he learned in 5 days back and from then on, not a single moment you can find him sitting

"Catch You" Nidhi said as she hold mayank in her arms as he was running away from her as a game going on

"Ok, behave good with your Mother and don't tease her much ...ok..." mayank look at her and stay silent

"and remember...mama loves you lot" Nidhi said giving him her usual big sloppy kiss as he laugh out loud and kiss Nidhi on her cheek to as she pointed at it

"Good boy" Ashutosh and Shaina smiled and Ashutosh later too kissed mayank and both left, bidding bye to Shaina

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