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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ApoorvaFan

Good progress in the last 2 parts... This is a refreshing concept and you are dealing with it well.



thanx AF...glad you liked it dear😳
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thank u so much dear😳😳


Originally posted by: dikshashetty

lovely update waiting for the next part eagerly!!!



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anna finally caught up wid that 1 nice read... keep it up love the story



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Part 11


Getting into the Cab, Nidhi and Ashutosh look outside to find Snow covering all the view...it was like seeing clouds on earth...Nidhi get mesmerized by the view while ashutosh, he was mesmerized by her beauty...With the cold weather, her nose tip slightly get red along with her cheeks getting a light shade of pink...He loved that...His heart was asking just to touch her cold cheeks and the temptation was really high but he control himself...for the sake of...hmmm...
...no past memories but on seeing the driver looking back at them

"Ashutosh, look there" Nidhi made him look down the road to look at the children playing covering themselves with jackets and sweaters...this cold weather can never turn down there spirit of playing

"I am missing Mayank" Nidhi said making a sad face...Ashutosh smile and move close to her as she was still looking out...holding her from her waist, he put his chin on her shoulder and said sweetly.

"I am too, but Shaina to have to spend time with him...Right" Nidhi nod in yes, she know and she too don't want to take away mayank from Shaina but the fact here was that for him, she is his mother and she too feel same for him

"And Madam, you too need to look at your poor husband..." He said making a puppy face

Nidhi turn to look at him and look at him seriously..

"What?" Seeing her looking at himself, he spoke up with a light smile on his lips

"You are changing" Ashutosh just look at her and move her hand to her cheek and rubbed it slightly

"and, don't you like this change?"

After a pause, Nidhi just hug him and said

"I am loving it" Ashutosh take her into his arms and hug him tightly as she keep putting her head on his chest to feel the warmth of his love

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"Like a diamond in the Sky" Shaina made Mayank listen this poem as she had put him on his legs to which he was holding tightly and was giving her swing laying on the couch

Mayank giggle out loud as Shaina stand up holding him and blow him up in air and catch him...mayank was having a gala time with her mother...He didn't bother much except in mid-nights for his bottle...but Shaina was loving it...It was purly giving her the feeling of being a mother...she regret as she think how she missed seeing him growing up 24/7 infront of her eyes but she know...Ashutosh and Nidhi are giving him same love, actually more than what she can give and she was just so thankful to them

"Sha...Ma" Mayank said saying half of her name but it seemed complete as he add Ma to it

"My Baby" Shaina hug him as a tear spill out from her eyes...

After a sentimental moment, Shaina pull him apart and take him inside the kitchen to give him cereal.

Sitting on baby chair, Mayank lavishly eat the fruit cereal and shaina was loving seeing him doing so...he was constantly patting the front board of chair and smiling..

"Ok, last spoon" Mayank eat that and then Shaina went to clean the bowl

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"Hmmm, Nice room" Ashutosh said as he instructed the room service man to put his luggage aside and gave him tip...Smiling the man left the room as Nidhi move towards the windows and pull the curtains aside to have beautiful view of NZ from this 24th floor of the building...She gasp seeing the view and take a deep breath to inhale the coldness when right then she felt ashutosh's arms around her waist and left her shudder...His touch always do this magic either she want or not

Ashutosh smile seeing her face getting serious...not serious actually, but innocent...again with the coldness, her cheeks and nose started getting red...ashutosh move forward and kiss her cheek keeping his lips there for a moment as Nidhi get all heat up with this kiss...His too much closely left her breathless...for a moment she actually forget about her breath...

Ashutosh smile and kissed her nose lightly and said

"Breath Nidhi" He left with a chukle as she blushed hard and keep her hands tightly on the rail of the window

Sitting down and litting the fire...he turn to find her standing in the same position as he left her...This girl is something...hummm...he can't explain that...He just love his effect on her...She get too much tensed, no tensed...Intense...

He smiled at his thought...Intense was the right word...

"Come here, you will get cold on the first day of the vacation" Nidhi come back to her senses and turn around closing the window...She sit on the bed, crossing her legs and kept looking at ashutosh.

"Ashutosh"

"Hmmm"

"Where you and Mallika did went on your honeymoon?" Ashutosh's smile vanished hearing this...He was trying to forget Mallika and Nidhi again was asking about her...but he had to admit, he remembered that time when he planned this vacation and also when he was thinking about Nidhi's being intense...He never found that touch on Mallika...He thought about that but wasn't able to say thinking may be Nidhi will mind and...

"Ashutosh" Nidhi break his chain of thoughts

"Huh?"

"Did you mind I asked that?" She said looking concern and sorry

Ashutosh give a weak smile and turn around facing her

"We went to Goa...She didn't use to like outing more...She was a complete house wife"

Ashutosh said having a weak smile on his lips and look up to see Nidhi, deep in thought...He quietly get up and sit beside her and make her get out of trance by removing the strand of her hairs and tuck it behind her ear

"Nidhi, Mallika was my past...but you are my present and future...its true I can't forget her but its also true that I want to lead my life with you...I like the way you are and don't ever change yourself of anyone...ok" Nidhi look up with tears in her eyes...He has started knowing her...he could get what she is thinking and what's on her mind..

"You have started to know me" Nidhi said having a weak smile on her face

"What say?...I am a fast learner" Ashutosh said wiping her tears and give her a bright smile

"Oh so that mean, I should be careful from now on...may be you can get my wild plans" Ashutosh eyes popped in horror...just for showing and Nidhi giggle seeing him

"You are a sweet Choochi Coo Pie" Nidhi said pulling out his cheeks

Ashutosh smiled at this and Nidhi hug him

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"Aryan, these files need Shaina's signature...she is on leave today...Can you please go and collect her signatures" Yograj called aryan as he was going towards his cabin

"Sure Dad" Aryan don't have any other option so agreed

"But dad, I have an important meeting to attend with the Textile Mills owner" Aryan said giving a chance to avoid

"Don't worry beta, I and Ishaan will handle that" Yograj pat his back and handover him the file...Aryan give a weak smile as he promised himself not to come infront of Shaina, and he is going to break the oath

Aryan's car stopped infront of Shaina's house...He look at her house and sigh closing his eyes...How he is going to face her...He keep sitting in his car for half an hour

parking his car...He take slow steps towards the door of her house...He was frightened...but he need too...Holding the file, he was about to ring the bell but found the door ajar...he opened it fully and entered to find quietness in air...He move inside to see the pictures of Shaina with Ashutosh, Mayank, Mallika on the front wall...There was one where mayank was a new born and Shaina holding it...He smiled seeing the calmness and happiness at the same time on her face...

Right then he heard a cracking voice from the kitchen and he get out from trance of her...He hide himself behind the pillar and look at Shaina coming out from Kitchen holding Mayank in her hands and smiling

"You are a naughty naughty boy Mayank...you spill all the milk and then clapping..." She said tickling his tummy and he giggled

"Sha...Ma" Shaina smile as she put him on couch and lay in his little lap

"Yes Mama's Jaan...Mama loves you" Mayank smile and pat her cheek lightly...

Aryan was standing still behind the pillar...thinking why Shaina treating him like his mother...

Shaina was lying closing her eyes and Mayank keep patting her cheek lightly...

"Mayank, you know, I will never be able to call you my son as for world...You are ashutosh and Nidhi's son...but promise me you willn't hate me after knowing the truth in future...please baby...I will die if you are going to reject me" A tear spill out from her eyes as she get up and hold mayank in her arms as she hug him tightly..

"I love you my baccha" Shaina keep crying as mayank too hold her patting her back and making her sounds

"Tuvv...Ooo" Mayank said as Shaina break the hug and kiss his cheek

Aryan was dumb hearing it all...

"That means, Mayank is Shaina's son..." With a heavy heart, Aryan was about to left the place when by accident he hit a vase and it shattered down into pieces

Shaina instantly get up to see whats up and on seeing Aryan there, her face became pale..."Did he heard what I said...did he heard that Mayank is my and stuff" With lot of questions in her mind, she again put the mask of anger on her face and said in a harsh tone

"What are you doing here Aryan?...Didn't you heard that I don't want to see your face?"

After a bit of quietness, arranging things in his mind, Aryan spoke up

"Oh sorry for coming in without knocking...actually the door was open and I just..." Aryan didn't find words to complete the sentence

"What are you doing here aryan?" She again said in her stern voice

"Here are some papers, Dad asked me to come here to get your signatures" He said putting forward the file

Shaina take it with a go...open it and went towards her study...Aryan in he meanwhile, keep looking at Mayank and noticed how he resembles Shaina...he missed noticing this thing before...He got that why shaina was so peaceful and happy in that pic with mayank...mayank was playing with the cushion and was hitting it hard in enjoyment...

Shaina came back glaring Aryan who was looking at mayank...She hate seeing him looking at her son...She put forward the file and make him get out from his thinking session

"Here it is"

"thank you" Aryan check the signatures and turn

"Bye"

Shaina didn't respond and turn towards Mayank

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"Nidhi, wake up...we need to go to the amusement park today...its already 1 pm yaar" Ashutosh was trying to wake up Nidhi from an hour but she was sleeping like a monster, unaware of surroundings..

"Ok, then...if you are not coming than I am going alone and will find some hot girl to accompany me in the roller coaster...What say?" Ashutosh turn and was about to walk away when Nidhi hold his hand and said still from inside the cover

"Don't you dare do that" That was a warning...Ashutosh smile...He knew this trick work easily with wives who are so protective about there husbands

"So what should I do???"

"Be mine, forever" Nidhi pull him down and he lay on the bed beside her as she was still covering herself with the blanket

"Is going to amusement park more important that my sleep?" She removed the cover till her eyes to see his response

Ashutosh think for a moment and then nod in yes

Nidhi mouth fell open seeing him but ashutosh smile and nod in no

"because we are here to know each other, not Newzeland" he hugged her from her waist and a smiling Nidhi again went inside the covers

"But if you keep sleeping like this than i can only get that you keep shifting in sleep almost about 32 times and get very quickly irritate if the hairs come on your face and..." Ashutosh remove the covers from her face and look at her with an intense gaze

"And..." Nidhi spoke up as love was clearly visible from her voice

"And, you look adorable...just like an angel..." Ashutosh complete the sentence and find her looking at himself with passion

"My Angel" it was almost like a whisper but Nidhi heard that...Ashutosh move forward and kissed her luscious lips with great love...He was falling head over heels in love with her and her single touch can arouse him...Nidhi responded to his every touch greatly...Ashutosh's hands slowly get under the shirt of her night suit to explore her body...and Nidhi was dumb struck...She was loosing her senses...They break the kiss and ashutosh move down to kiss her neck and collar bone as unstuck the buttons of her shirt...The atmosphere around was cold but there was heat on the bed as two souls became one with a pure spirit.

This roller coaster Ride was far better than the ride of an amusement park and they loved it...

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Part 12

Sun rays were trying to sneak in from the window but drawn curtains were blocking there way………….and that's why, they weren't able to see two lovers in each other arms

This was the best sleep, they both had in there lives…………there faces were perfectly portraying the condition of there hearts………calmness, happiness and Joy..

Ashutosh hands move around her and land resting itself on her tummy………..while Nidhi was sleeping, holding his other hand under her pillow and her back was completely engrossed in his chest

Ashutosh open his eyes slightly to have a blur view………he blink his lashes a few times and found his life in his arms…………..He smiled remembering the incident of the last day….They spend whole yesterday in the room, loving each other, talking to each other

He move forward and brush his lips on her bare shoulder…

"Ashutosh" Nidhi said in a low gasped tone

"Yes, my love" he move forward and kissed her ear lobe slightly

"Ashutosh, stop it………let me sleep"………She shift her body and lay on her tummy……..while ashutosh get more naughty ideas

"Nidhi" He said in a sugar coated tone

This time Nidhi give no reply………….she was blushing hard through out

He smiled and traced her back in a ticklish way……

"Ashutosh" She suddenly again shift and look at him in annoyance

"You are not going to let me sleep right" Ashutosh rolled his nose and that left Nidhi with a smile

"Hmmm, so mister……….what's the plan?" She moved her fingers across his neck

"What plan?" Ashutosh asked smiling

"Don't tell me we are going to spend the whole day again in this room?" Nidhi said making a bad face

"Actually not a bad idea……….i was thinking about something else, but hence you enjoyed last day, its ok……….i can sacrifice" Ashutosh said making a romantic face

"Not at all, we are going out today………….." She covered sheets around herself and was about to get up when ashutosh pull her back

"Ok, we will first go to a club and then for dinner……….happy" Ashutosh said as she smiled

"and as for now,……." Ashutosh get up and pick her up in her arms as she left shocked

"I think you need company in there right?" Ashutosh smiled slyly

"NO" she just said it with the shape of her lips with horror in her eyes, but ashutosh just ignored that and enter the Wash Room

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"Is Shaina hiding something big inside her?…………….mayank is her son…..but how can it be……….is he Shaina's and mine…….No no………..it can't be…….but what if it is?" a line of worry appears on his face…

"But may be, she had meet someone else later and Mayank is"……….he sit helplessly on his chair………….his office was seemed moving to him……these assumptions were killing him but his heart……it was stable

"No, as far as i know Shy, she can't love anyone else………….she is a one man's girl….that means…….." tears came in his eyes...He need to confirm……..he is living a guilty life before……..now he need to confirm that is he made a mistake that destroyed her life...is he a killer……….a murderer of her happiness, her smile, her believe……

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Ashutosh was waiting outside the room's door for his beautiful wife to come outside………he knocked for the 14th time on the door

"Nidhi, you ready……….we are getting late" He was looking cool in his white shirt with blue jeans and black coat…….

The door opened and Nidhi was standing there, looking gorgeous in her navy blue sari which she and shaina buy during shopping

Ashutosh look at her from head to toe and smiled thinking "Shaina did her work perfectly"

Nidhi noticed the smile and ask nervously

"How am I looking?" She wore sari for the first time on her own self………..on the wedding day, her mother and beautician helped her, but this time……..she just remembered the trick of them and wore it

"You are looking perfect, just these two plates of your sari are going on wrong side" Nidhi knew something is wrong with the sari…

"I just knew this………….I am changing" Nidhi turn to change in something cozy but ashutosh held her from her arm

"No, let me help you" He sit on his knees and pull up the material to see be stomach……He take out the fabric and start tucking in accurate position………..Nidhi stomach grumbled with the movement of his hands and felt electrifying………ashutosh noticed and loved his touch on her…….Nidhi the whole while kept her eyes closed…

"its done" he said softly near her ears, as he had done it 5 minutes before but she keep standing like a statue, closing her eyes and ashutosh just keep admiring her……..Nidhi opened her eyes to find ashutosh leaving the room and blushed hard on her foolishness

The Club was totally rocking………..it was an Indian club and the hindi tracks, just adding fuel to the fire……………….people were lost in there own world having the companionship of the lovers

"Hello Sir" The Manager just received the couple

"Hello, Ashutosh Mathur" ashutosh introduced himself and tell him about the reservation, he had made

"Yes sir, this way"…….He takes them to a corner which was a bit low………….so that they can enjoy the environment as well as can be with each other…….They sit on the couch in each other arms

After getting some refreshing drinks, both hit the dance floor as a soft romantic song was going on

Main agar Hoon, Ae Humnasheen

Apsara Ho Tum, Yaan Koi Pari

Tareef Yeh Bhi Tau, sach hai Kuch Bhi Nahi

Tum Ko Paya Hai Tau Jaise Khoya Hoon

Kehna Chahoon Bhi tau Tum Se Kia Kahoon

Kissi Zuban Main Bhi Who Lafz Hi Nahin

K Jin Main Tum Ho Kia Tumhain Bata Sakoon

Ashutosh tuck her hairs behind her ears, and said

"Want to do Salsa?...i know you had attended its classes….right?" Nidhi was surprised on how much ashutosh had started to know her

"Yes, I had………but…….."

"No buts" Ashutosh left her alone on the floor as he went to the DJ and made a request

"And guys, this song in dedicated to Mrs. Mathur from his husband" The DJ said out loud and light fell on them both

Ashutosh put forth his hand as song started

Sholon si sholon sitere ankhon ki yeh roshni kiske liye hai kiske liye haichandni chandni, tere chere ki yeh chandnikiske liye hai kiske liye haitera muskurana nazar yun jhukanatera muskurana nazar yun jhukanamere liye hai bas mere liye hai sholon si sholon sitere ankhon ki yeh roshnikiske liye hai kiske liye haichandni chandni tere chere ki yeh chandinikiske liye hai kiske liye hai samjho mera joh ishara haijoh bhi hai mera woh tumhara haisamjho mera joh ishara haijoh bhi hai mera woh tumhara hailehar mein koi hoon khoyimanzil toh hai tu kinara haiyeh meri adayaein yeh meri wafaeinyeh meri adayaein yeh meri wafaeintujhko pata hai sabh tere liye hai sholon si sholon simeri ankhon ki yeh roshnitere liye hai tere liye haichandni chandni mere chere ki yeh chandnitere liye hai tere liye hai haske dikha do deewane kojoh ho raha hai ho jane dohaske dikha do deewane kojoh ho raha hai ho jane dodil ke uljhan zubaan peati hai toh aajane doyeh hoton ki narmi yeh sanson ki garmiyeh hoton ki narmi yeh sanson ki garmimere liye hai bas mere liye hai sholon si sholon siteri ankhon ki yeh roshni kiske liye hai kiske liye haichandni chandni tere chere ki yeh chandnikiske liye hai kiske liye haitera muskurana nazar yun jhukanatera muskurana nazar yun jhukanamere liye hai bas mere liye hai

They danced on the tunes and were amazed of each others flow of dancing…………They were looking like a true pair as they do know each other steps and all left mesmerized seeing this couple

"I never knew you can dance so well" Nidhi said as she saw a new shade of ashutosh today

"You don't know anything yet……….there is much more to the story" Ashutosh said smilingly as he take her out from the Club and they move towards the restaurant

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"Shaina, I need to talk to you" Aryan said as he saw shaina moving towards elevator as she was leaving for house

Shaina stop in mid way but then again start walking

"I don't want to talk to you"…………she said as she just enters the elevator.

Aryan became furious as Shaina was just ignoring him…………it was important for him and she knew, about what he is about to ask and that's why, it because more important for her to ignore him…………….but Aryan didn't accept defeat…….he shrugged all the thoughts and enter the elevator….

No one was there in the office except them as they both were doing work on a projects separately……..they need to collect records which took most of there time

Shaina saw him entering and was about to leave the elevator when Aryan pushed her back and the door closed………….He made her stand with the wall of elevator as fury was visible from his eyes and shaina was not able to accept defeat

"What the hell is this Aryan? Leave me" She was extremely angry

"Not until you answered some of my questions" He said as his fingers dig in her arms giving her extremely pain, but right now, the more pain he was giving him was his standing near to her

"And why should I bother, you are not so important that I will consider to answer your questions" she said in extreme arrogant tone

"Because it's about mayank" his words made her stop as its fear that comes across her eyes

"What…what about mayank?" Her voice cracked with this

"I know Mayank is your Son" Shaina froze

"But I want to know, who is his father?" A little smile come across her face

"Yes, he is my son…………….But Don't worry Aryan, he is not your son………….He is the son of the man I ever loved…and you are not the one" Aryan's grip around her got weak and Shaina pushed him away as door opened and she left with tears in her eyes..

yes it was true…………..mayank wasn't the son on Aryan…………It wasn't this Aryan to whom Shaina loved, he was much more promising and lovable……………

Shaina sit in her car and put her head on the steering as tears spill out from her eyes

She remembered how in NYU, they both just used to felt miserable to see each other……as there friends were rival…………….They use to skip there lunch with there friends just to got a chance to be with each other but right then the images of the morning came infront of her where Aryan just left her, leaving devasted in that state…..

"You are not the same Aryan to whom I love…………….you have changed and I don't know this Aryan who is selfish"

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The whole night Aryan thought of shaina and her words

He remembered her sarcastic smile as of making fun of him……….She gave his answer but his heart was not ready to accept that shaina can ever love someone else than him

Aryan look into the mirror to see his reflection, which was seemed to be laughing at him

"What do you think Aryan, after you left her alone that morning, you still think she can love you………..she can only hate you……you played with her…." The reflection said him in an ironic tone

"No I loved her, I still do" Aryan deny the fact

"No you don't. if you had………..you must have accepted her…..you should have brought her home to your parents and get married to her……..you were afraid….afraid of carrying any responsibility………then why are you getting into Mayank's matter………..it will only add responsibility on you and you are not capable to carry any…….you are a loser Aryan, a complete Loser" The image said this and vanished……….leaving Aryan standing there with fear

His inner self was abusing him and he just cried……….it was true, he was not ready to carry the responsibility but now he is ready………he is ready to take Shaina back in his life….and he just knew that mayank is his son and he gonna make shaina say the truth to him tomorrow

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: akshaya24

even i read part 8 many times.
that feel is there.very well written👏
part 10 is tooo good n u know for what😳😆
cant wait more...when will u update???



hehehe...i m so happy to know that you liked part 8 and 10😆😆😆😆
keep reading n keep commenting

luv ya
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kritash

After many days
bade dino ke baad update aayi hain.
Thanks for this fantastic update.
Liked it very much.
the interaction and understanding between ashni is really great.
well written concept. slowly nidhi is stealing ashu's heart, liked the concept.
Dhire Dhire aap mere dil ke mehman ho gaye,
phele jaan phir janejana ho gaye.
really liked it.
both the parts were good.
simultaneously the story of shy and aryan is great.
really fantastic, fabulous and wonderful update thanks.😊



yup, a long gap occured but here is the treat you guys waiting for😃
it was slowly slowly, getting my lolly kind of fic😉😆
thanku so much dear for your wonderful detail comments
always love them😳

luv ya
ana😃


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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Ana,

Thanks for the update dear...gonna read now...
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Posted: 13 years ago
ana ur updates r like a breath of fresh air amidst all the turmoils the KTLK fans r going thru...awesome dear...loved them..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey...here i come...

Nidhi get mesmerized by the view while ashutosh, he was mesmerized by her beauty...
awww...so sweet...moment for me

Loving Shaina and Mayank getting along very nicely...and love the way you describe Mayank's actions...whether it be he calling Nidhi "Maa" for the first time or "Sha...Maa" and all the sweet little naughty things he does...it really adds an extra charm.

When Ashu said "Breathe Nidhi...after kissing her" I was like OMG...just can't imagine...what effect Ashu leaves on Nidhi and vice versa😛...me just getting naughty here☺️...ahem...ahem.

Of everything...I loved Ashu loving, more attracted to Nidhi than Mallika...just hate Mallu😡...just loved the following words..."he had to admit, he remembered that time when he planned this vacation and also when he was thinking about Nidhi's being intense...He never found that touch on Mallika"

Thanks for keeping the same Bubbly, Childish...Nidhi...and understandable, matured and more Romantic Ashu , which you have shown more in 11th and 12th parts...Ahem...Ahem...and all of it..."he can dance...yipeee...so nice"...me too dancing

Loving the way you are depicting Aryan and Shaina's story along with AshNi's love...giving the importance it deserves without effecting the main story...waiting to see how their relationship turns too...

Overall, its really a wonderful update👏...and wishing for more...keep writing and please...please...don't make us wait for long...just becoming greedy to read more...
Edited by anu13 - 13 years ago

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