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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi,

Wow...that was a very valiant Ashu with charming romantic and realistic update...

Just loved every bit of this marathonish update and would love to read more of these kind...and would like to say that the teaser of bonfire ignited the fire and the marvelous update burned me into passionate land...

The cons of AshNi relationship will be there no matter what when u first face it...but when we get deep into their relationship its not less than to be worshiped..I just love the understanding of one another and care...and control or handling the situation wisely is what I just love in your writing...

After the encounter of Ashu with Rohan's dadi...I was expecting a very diff scenario..but Ashu just gave a sweet shock with his thoughts and ways of handling his inner turmoil.

The way Nidhi introduced her love to all her friends so excitably was so lovable...its again reflects how chirpy, full of life and most importantly happy she is with her love...I just was amazed too..

Ashu feeling out of place among Nidhi's friends was a bit expected as well as her friends' view about AshNi relationship was also quite predictable, but not to this extent for me...the way they were accusing Ashu was way too much handle for me as it was for Nidhi...as me also so much in love with Ashu😉😆...

The way Ashu was calming taking Nidhi into his embrace was so compassionate...I just ❤️ it.

OMG...I just hate this Rohan adding fuel to it and making Nidhi agitated and loving to see Ashu jealous...I was hell angry on him and it was so irritating...I at one point thought Ashu might lose his temper and after the playful end of the raged Nidhi-Rohan chase seeing Ashu I was like...where this will lead to...I no wonder their friendship gonna create some rift in Ashu's matured brain in the future😆 and in turn affecting their relationship...and I hope that its end making their, AshNi, bond more strong.

I just loved the way Ashu was taking all the precautions for the camp and care due to the presence of girls...I hope Nidhi's friends realize his "extra-protectiveness," which they might have thought it as, just as care and worry about their safety...and hope that if you could put in some story regarding this, which I would love to see...which in turn make them realize it that its not about the money but about the safety that he was thinking from the start and how much lovable he is and what kind of character he withholds...after all he is no less than a hero😉.

All said, I really am thankful to Rohan because of whom we all got to see this dauntless Ashu and all illusory or dreamy moments...way to go Ashu...hayee...its so enchanting...This side of Ashu just added spice to the entire update...the aftermath of that French Bold Kiss was much more charming...the way you showed his restlessness to have her in his embrace all the time, possess her and love her was just amazing...and the tantalizing short pecks and wanting to kiss her again and again was just unexpected part for me...I never ever thought in my wildest dreams that Ashu could be such a daredevil😆
😆😆😆...and naughty, but I am just loving it...and would love to see this Ashu much more than often😉😃.

I am just falling more and more for your AshNi with each ride.

All said, Thanks for such a lengthy and not less than adventurous part...just loved it to bits..muaahhh...and all the credit for this love ride goes to u...u really are awe-inspiring writer..great writing...just keep rocking like this always and don't forget to give us marathonish updates forever...

Waiting very..very...impatiently for the next part and hoping to see more AshNi moments as well as would love to see the bonding between Ashu and Nidhi's friends too...(though I hope that her friends don't consider this gesture or boldness of Ashu into complete lust...as it was not lust but longing and possessive love I feel).

At last, but the most important...without eating your brain more with my bak..bak...would love to say that I will be eagerly waiting and will defo stick around for the next update...as the end of the update already made me way too restless..just waiting to know whats in store for us...and also waiting for the teaser but dare u delay or make us wait for long for the update after posting the teaser.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Cherishh

Hi,
--ohhh!! such huge huge review.. i m overwhelmed seriously! Thnk u soo much!
Wow...that was a very valiant Ashu with charming romantic and realistic update...
--valiant Ashu.. aaah.. i luv tht adjective for Ashu!

Just loved every bit of this marathonish update and would love to read more of these kind...and would like to say that the teaser of bonfire ignited the fire and the marvelous update burned me into passionate land...
--😆.. u r too good at words.. i luved the line!

The cons of AshNi relationship will be there no matter what when u first face it...but when we get deep into their relationship its not less than to be worshiped..I just love the understanding of one another and care...and control or handling the situation wisely is what I just love in your writing...

--yeah.. Ashu impresses me most..coz even tho he has bitter past..he uses his brain pretty well.. he is the think tank of the two.. and he naturally assumes postion of caretaker and nurturer... and due to their differnt level of maturity.. and seniority thrs no power struggle betn the two as to who shud control and dominate.. also thr personalities play imp part in thr rshp..and thy know how to handle the situations..
After the encounter of Ashu with Rohan's dadi...I was expecting a very diff scenario..but Ashu just gave a sweet shock with his thoughts and ways of handling his inner turmoil.
--Actually earlier version of Ashu wud've reacted differently.. remember.. the "niece" chapter..bt he has wisened up.. and he knows he has to b thr for Nidhi and tht he has to face the challenges tht Col. Verma wants him to! Thr is lot more to this man.. he is just letting out one at a time.. thngs and worries still lay in his subconscious mind.. it will come to foray slowly triggered by tht particular incident.. will have to wait and watch to see his deep and complex side..
The way Nidhi introduced her love to all her friends so excitably was so lovable...its again reflects how chirpy, full of life and most importantly happy she is with her love...I just was amazed too..
--For Nidhi.. its quite simple.. she simply worships him.. and no matter wat wudnt stop doing tht.. its a very simple equation for her.. and i luv her for her simplicity and truthfulness!
Ashu feeling out of place among Nidhi's friends was a bit expected as well as her friends' view about AshNi relationship was also quite predictable, but not to this extent for me...the way they were accusing Ashu was way too much handle for me as it was for Nidhi...as me also so much in love with Ashu😉😆...
--😆 yeah.. thy wer a bit too harsh.. bt in reality its even more harsher.. bt i played a safe game here i wud say!..😆 ufff for luv of our Ashu.. even it was hard for me to write anything more harsher 😆
The way Ashu was calming taking Nidhi into his embrace was so compassionate...I just ❤️ it.
--Oh.. i luv this side of Ashu so much...wen Nidhi needs him, he naturally fathers her.. its instinctive in his nature to care for the ppl who needs him...
OMG...I just hate this Rohan adding fuel to it and making Nidhi agitated and loving to see Ashu jealous...I was hell angry on him and it was so irritating...I at one point thought Ashu might lose his temper and after the playful end of the raged Nidhi-Rohan chase seeing Ashu I was like...where this will lead to...I no wonder their friendship gonna create some rift in Ashu's matured brain in the future😆 and in turn affecting their relationship...and I hope that its end making their, AshNi, bond more strong.
--Rohan..is a funny guy..😆.. u will b shocked to learn the real reason behind this awkward jealousy filled rship with Ashu.. bt its still growing.. will take long i think! Its funny.. its one thing tht Ashu's mature brain cannot reason out.. however hard he tries..😆
I just loved the way Ashu was taking all the precautions for the camp and care due to the presence of girls...I hope Nidhi's friends realize his "extra-protectiveness," which they might have thought it as, just as care and worry about their safety...and hope that if you could put in some story regarding this, which I would love to see...which in turn make them realize it that its not about the money but about the safety that he was thinking from the start and how much lovable he is and what kind of character he withholds...after all he is no less than a hero😉.
--didnt he say tht he is on a campaign to prove everybody wrong and make thm feel jealous!😆 and he has already a plan for it! He is a real quick thinker!😛 Well wasnt he an easy charmer always... .. he is a man of such a character tht noone cud resist falling for him.. and well v all know he doesnt have to try hard.. he jst has to b himself.. and any woman on this earth wud luv to die for him!😆.. I liked Angie's suggestion to him sooo much!👍🏼
All said, I really am thankful to Rohan because of whom we all got to see this dauntless Ashu and all illusory or dreamy moments...way to go Ashu...hayee...its so enchanting...This side of Ashu just added spice to the entire update...the aftermath of that French Bold Kiss was much more charming...the way you showed his restlessness to have her in his embrace all the time, possess her and love her was just amazing...and the tantalizing short pecks and wanting to kiss her again and again was just unexpected part for me...I never ever thought in my wildest dreams that Ashu could be such a daredevil😆
😆😆😆...and naughty, but I am just loving it...and would love to see this Ashu much more than often😉😃.
--Wen he sits and thinks back he is gonna blush!😆.. Nidhi made him wait for 1 long week.. this kudi is charming him with her cute ways day in and out.. to kaise resist kar paaye!. once initial hesitation is overcomed thy will b tend to b a little bolder..😉.. and his naughtiness is jst going to rise.. Nidhi itna bhaav jo deti hai..😆
I am just falling more and more for your AshNi with each ride.
--me too! 😆

All said, Thanks for such a lengthy and not less than adventurous part...just loved it to bits..muaahhh...and all the credit for this love ride goes to u...u really are awe-inspiring writer..great writing...just keep rocking like this always and don't forget to give us marathonish updates forever...
-- awww.. thnk u so much..its really inspiring for me..😳. i have not enuf words to put wat i m feeling.. even tho i m the writer..😆
Waiting very..very...impatiently for the next part and hoping to see more AshNi moments as well as would love to see the bonding between Ashu and Nidhi's friends too...(though I hope that her friends don't consider this gesture or boldness of Ashu into complete lust...as it was not lust but longing and possessive love I feel).
--yup.. he needs to bond with Nidhi's friend.. and most importantly impress thm! Bt i think a sincere person cannot b judged wrong for his actions for long.. its his inherent good qualities tht make him hero! so in the end he will emerge a hero!😛

At last, but the most important...without eating your brain more with my bak..bak...would love to say that I will be eagerly waiting and will defo stick around for the next update...as the end of the update already made me way too restless..just waiting to know whats in store for us...and also waiting for the teaser but dare u delay or make us wait for long for the update after posting the teaser.
--wats waiting is very interesting.. the way all of u have been speculating abt the nite and the way i have planned it.. it is really gonna give u a very pleasant surprise.. Surprise.. Surprise!!😛 thr luv wud remain as pure and sacred as it had been before!

i have written half of the chapter.. and jst planning a teaser over the weekend.. lets c if i can deliver tht..

Edited by achiever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the much awaited update. It took me more than an hour to read it, with many interruptions, but was worth it. Love Ashu's boldness, but u always keep us wanting for more. Hope you post soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ssktlk

Thanks for the much awaited update. It took me more than an hour to read it, with many interruptions, but was worth it. Love Ashu's boldness, but u always keep us wanting for more. Hope you post soon.

I m so sorry it was such a huge chapter. and i know how much time it takes to read.. ask me!😆 bt thnk u so much for taking out time to read and comment on tht..
have almost completed the chapter.. jst thinking abt wer to end..and not make it extra lengthy..😆😆
with all u ppl speculating abt thr spending a nite together.. well all will b in for a nice surprise..
will b posting a teaser soon..😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Teaser for Nxt Chapter..
Chapter 39: The nite with u…
"So? U r planning a sleepover with him?"she asked. Nidhi nodded a yes! Thr was a twinkle of excitement in Angie's eyes.. "Really wow! Thts so romantic.."she cried excitedly. "I don't know.."Nidhi said unsurely! "y?"Angie asked. Nidhi wasn't sure how she shud put it. Thr was so much of tension going on betn thm.. and everytime thy wer left alone this way.. thy have jst leaped onto the nxt stage of thr r'ship.. the intimacy had jst bt growing.. and with his and her's growing desires.. it was risky in a way! Nidhi fidgeted with her fingers.
I know this excerpt will again lead u to wild speculations abt thr spending nite together..😆.. bt u all will b pleasantly surprised by our dearest and loving Ashu... bt yes thy wud share this beautiful nite together under the moonlight..😳 and yes thy wud experience tht "something" thts started betn thm... bt still thr luv wud remain as pure and sacred as it shud b..
in fact this nite will bring thm more closer thn thy had ever imagined..... yup yet again thy will leap into the nxt stage of thr r'ship as Nidhi feared..😆😆😆
so gear up for the nxt chapter.. will b posting on monday..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Manisha di...
The chapter was SUPERB...I loved it...I love the way Ashu handled the situation when Nidhi was fuming with anger because of her friends taunts,misbehaviours,insulting words for her man whom she love most but Ashu tried to show her other angle by giving Arman example...aww AshNi r awesome..i loved this scene most & hate her friends and Rohan..he always tried to come between them ughhh...Anyways it helps to show Ashu his passionate romantic side whenever he fuming with jealousy...Last part was stupendous...all other girls also fall on his passionate yet sweet romantic side...
Thanks for the chapter...Plz pm me next time...
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Posted: 13 years ago
I just love your Teaser Achiever 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Your Teaser is just making me much more anxious for the update yaar...and This "Surprise" word is much more inviting...ur updates have always been blissful and am looking forward for the next yummilicious surprise update...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Poojapange

Hi Manisha di...
The chapter was SUPERB...I loved it...I love the way Ashu handled the situation when Nidhi was fuming with anger because of her friends taunts,misbehaviours,insulting words for her man whom she love most but Ashu tried to show her other angle by giving Arman example...aww AshNi r awesome..i loved this scene most & hate her friends and Rohan..he always tried to come between them ughhh...Anyways it helps to show Ashu his passionate romantic side whenever he fuming with jealousy...Last part was stupendous...all other girls also fall on his passionate yet sweet romantic side...
Thanks for the chapter...Plz pm me next time...

Thnk u sooo much.. was waiting for ur coments..😛
yeah.. Ashu is very mature "man"..seasoned and wise.. he is not social person bt he knows how to handle ppl... wat i like most is tht he understands Nidhi so well.. 👏.. he reciprocates his love for her in his own way.. wer as N idhi is more demonstrative and simple in her approach to show her luv.. i liked the way she introduced Ashu to her friends.. or the way she tried to give a positive impression on Rohan's parents abt Ashu.. or how she cannot tolerate ppl ill-talking abt Ashu.. she knows Ashu is a deep and complex person and she tries to understand him in her own ways.. i jst luv her for tht.. yes thy make an excellent couple....
wat i adore abt thm is the way thy handle their matters.. thy r true souls and thy see the world thru those eyes.. and so for thm world is beautiful.. even tho life hadnt been tht fair to thm.. esp Ashu..
as for Rohan, i wud jst say wait and watch.. i had to scrap his scenes to make way for more of Ashu Nidhi or Angie-Nidhi or Ashu-Angie scene... i felt more than Rohan-Ashu.. first thr has to b a bond betn Ashu-Angie.. so i gave it priority.. rohan will come and annoy Ashu as i have planned.. so Ashu has to get himself ready for some jealousy.. in the coming chapters u will learn abt Ashu's jealousy and possessiveness in a cute sort of way.. and its not jst Rohan!😆
the girls r in for a drool!!😆😆😆😆 Ashu's campaign starts from nxt to nxt chapter.. i.e. after this nite.. so it wud b intrsting to see the strategies he employs.. and some sizzling chemistry thts gonna enfold betn Ashu-Nidhi.. engagement ke liye go ahead miltey hi thy got so bold!😆
will update nxt chapter on Monday!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Blushsarika

I just love your Teaser Achiever 😳

😆.. thnk u mam.. i luv teasers.. as much as Ashu luvs to tease Nidhi..😆..
I miss heydoc.. she likes my teasers so much.. i dunno wer she is bt i really miss her comments..😊.. we both r huge fans of hitchkock and likes..😆
I will give u a short teaser for the nxt to nxt updt as well.. wer Ashu employs his make-jealous campaign strategies..😆.. The girls r in for a drool!!!😆 I dunno wat will happen of Nidhi!😆
bt the gentleman he is, it is to b seen how he will do it!😛

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