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Posted: 13 years ago
Ohf!!!What a Story u r writing!Excellent and outstanding nevertheless.The Chocolate part was too much...Ashu is pondering over Nidz picture and her half-eaten chocolate!Little remained for him 2 b Mad in Love .Nidhi is trying to reveal it to Baba in her own way.Everybits r interesting.And i'm pretty sure,the next one will b another bombshell.Wil wait for the next.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SwastikAshNi

Ohf!!!What a Story u r writing!Excellent and outstanding nevertheless.The Chocolate part was too much...Ashu is pondering over Nidz picture and her half-eaten chocolate!Little remained for him 2 b Mad in Love .Nidhi is trying to reveal it to Baba in her own way.Everybits r interesting.And i'm pretty sure,the next one will b another bombshell.Wil wait for the next.

yeah.. his reactions r pretty cute... 😆.. bt for me the cutest part was him pondering abt how to plan his meet with Nidhi...😳
for nidhi, her missing him at dining table was pretty cute..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
GOOD ONE!!!!!!!!!!!...so u are quiet successful in building up the curiosity...great going...continue soon...take care.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hiii achiever...
Thanks for updating...
LOVELY UPDATE...
I like Ashu's pov...As we all know that how hardstone he was..how much he was work holic,strict,disipline like person...but now he is deeply in love with Nidhi n complete changed...
Ashu cursed himself for the promiss of not to meet him even not to call him...Ashu watch all pics of Nidhi n dream about them..SO CUTE...
Other side Nidhi also missing Ashu very much...she cooked his fav dish but not ate properly coz she didnt share with him...Ohh poor Nidhi...
Chocolate scene was the best for me...love the way Ashu pleaded to kaka for them...finally he got chocolates after some promisses to kaka..then he brought them in room n stared them as he watching Nidhi..Awww...
Ohhh now i m also eager to meet AshNi...My condition is not more different than this love birds...Hope finally we will get some oh not some many more AshNi romantic moments in ur next update...
Thanks for taking step by step process of love of our lovely love birds..
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Posted: 13 years ago
today s sum treat day i guess,gettin so many😉😳
oh u r turning out to ba sweet li'l devil wid dese teasers😈,uff😳
i luvd evri bit of it..,i mean every bit😃😊
n wow strting from the title👏👏
ashu s POV s jus sooo sooo cute☺️
he callind others by her name,den shuffling his work to make time for his luv,den his thoughts of a long drive n all,overall dis ashu s jus madly in luv as much as his lady
d cutest was d half eaten chocloate,n kaka s teasing,OMG his n kaka s convo r always entertaining..

hmm i really likd nidz n d litlle prince part,every word of it wid her baba..😊😊😊
n she missing him during her hare channe ki adventure..

kisi ke intezaar bhi itna khoobsoorat ho sakta hai socha na tha..,beautiful bud😊😊

i thoroughly enjoyed dis update😊😊

n omg y do u end it at dat ending n on the top of it a killer teaser n now ringing bells wid an off for dis week???


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Posted: 13 years ago
hi Achiever must say its a lovely update👏👏👏loved the part of Nidhi losing her appetite at the dining table after preparing the dish with so much love and later not getting the taste of it bcoz your loved 1 is not with u😭loved the way HM KAKA teased poor ASHU,Im liking kakas character very much he is not a passive character in your story which gives a lot of growth to the story and the characters around him too😊.and the way NIDHI was asking questions about her prince from her BABA was simply terrific and heart warming bcoz we girls are naturally shy in talking about these matters with our Fathers and are more open with our mothers in the matters of our heart😆.the way this match is going on to and fro between these two is simply nail biting... and the way ASHU was looking for NIDHIs half eaten chocolate was something I think every person in love can relate to😆😆as the 1 thing that reminds u of your beloved is near u it gives u feeling of warmth and the rush u get while looking at it beyond any rush u can 😆get😉.and the 1 thing that I liked about ANJIE was the way she said "thats why i dont like falling in love"to NIDHI it reminded me of myself when im councelling my cousin aginst falling in love 😆[she hates me for that though]😆 and lastly thanks for giving us this long update on ASHUs point of view. 1 request though can u plzzz tell the date of the next update with your updates 😊 Thanks again for this marv. chapter 👏👏. Love and take care🤗sorry for such a long feedback but couldnt help it😉😕😆 waiting for the big secret of NIDHI to come out of the bag. ok bye aga😆in
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: achiever

Ritu...

Yeah.. Ashu is too cute wen he has no clue abt how he is gonna take things wen he meets Nidhi... tho Ashu tends to think tht he has the situation under control.. which he apparently has not! 😆
Ashu's fumbling is going to b pretty interesting...he thinks a lot b4 acting.. he is highly complex person.. bt wen it comes to Nidhi on one side he cannot chng his basic nature.. bt on other side.. he cannot help himself slipping down under!
weras, Nidhi she is pretty simple and uncomplicated girl wen it comes to expressing or even accepting her feelings unlike Ashu.. she reacts spontaneously to Ashu and so is highly unpredictable!
so its gets pretty interesting wen thy interact!


he might have not realized that but he is changing fast.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepikikamandal

GOOD ONE!!!!!!!!!!!...so u are quiet successful in building up the curiosity...great going...continue soon...take care.

yeah.. i like suspense and mystery novels.. so i tend to naturally put it in my story as well... I need to go thru and make sure i havent revealed much tho.. 😆
the best and most entertaining set of novels tht i have read till date is definitely Harry Potter Series.. absolutely marvellous!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Poojapange

Hiii achiever...
Thanks for updating...
LOVELY UPDATE...
I like Ashu's pov...As we all know that how hardstone he was..how much he was work holic,strict,disipline like person...but now he is deeply in love with Nidhi n complete changed...
Ashu cursed himself for the promiss of not to meet him even not to call him...Ashu watch all pics of Nidhi n dream about them..SO CUTE...
Other side Nidhi also missing Ashu very much...she cooked his fav dish but not ate properly coz she didnt share with him...Ohh poor Nidhi...
Chocolate scene was the best for me...love the way Ashu pleaded to kaka for them...finally he got chocolates after some promisses to kaka..then he brought them in room n stared them as he watching Nidhi..Awww...
Ohhh now i m also eager to meet AshNi...My condition is not more different than this love birds...Hope finally we will get some oh not some many more AshNi romantic moments in ur next update...
Thanks for taking step by step process of love of our lovely love birds..

This Ashu is very adorable.. with Nidhi he is completely different.. he mite have not realized it yet.. the way he has changed.. but all happens for good.. and luv can chng u so much.. or rather bring the best of u out.. 😳.. I feel Ashu is basically a gud and lighthearted person.. bt the circumstances made him the way he is today.. it wud b interesting to read abt his past.. v know a lot abt Nidhi bt a lot less abt Ashu..😳
thnx a lot for the review..
Edited by achiever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: heydoc27

today s sum treat day i guess,gettin so many😉😳
oh u r turning out to ba sweet li'l devil wid dese teasers😈,uff😳
i luvd evri bit of it..,i mean every bit😃😊
n wow strting from the title👏👏
ashu s POV s jus sooo sooo cute☺️
he callind others by her name,den shuffling his work to make time for his luv,den his thoughts of a long drive n all,overall dis ashu s jus madly in luv as much as his lady
d cutest was d half eaten chocloate,n kaka s teasing,OMG his n kaka s convo r always entertaining..

--yeah.. he fills in Armu's place for now.. imagine wat will happen wen Armu and Kaka will b together..😆

hmm i really likd nidz n d litlle prince part,every word of it wid her baba..😊😊😊
n she missing him during her hare channe ki adventure..

kisi ke intezaar bhi itna khoobsoorat ho sakta hai socha na tha..,beautiful bud😊😊

i thoroughly enjoyed dis update😊😊

n omg y do u end it at dat ending n on the top of it a killer teaser n now ringing bells wid an off for dis week???
I cant help it.. coz i havent written it as of yet... Embarrassed..

thnx sooo sooo much for detailed review..
Edited by achiever - 13 years ago

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