*Smthin_Clld_Luv*Nov3_Updt_p146*Jaane Kya Baat Hui - Page 109

Originally posted by: wizardofoz

no words for your writing achiever. FFs by you , turags and Libra are the ones i love equally. I do not know which one to read first. They are all super duper awesome👏. Mereko ko teen sar aur che aankhen chahiye, sab ffs ko ek saath padne ke liye.😆

Originally posted by: Cherishh

I.."The late lateef" am finally here😆😆😆.

--u know i was so eager.. tht i went thru it once already while preparing b'fast.. and now here i m to give detailed reply!😛

Coming to the update..the title "Entagled Past" is just perfect.

--yeah.. no confusion of title this time! This plot was plotted way back wen i initially started my story.. and finally it has seen the light!😆

Seriously, I thought this past will last for at least 2 parts, but great it hasn't...u r such a sweetu, lovely girl😉...muaahhh...thanku so much dear...btw if u haven't done that, u know what would I have written..right???

--yeah.. yeah.. i know!😆 isiliye maine ek hi chapter mein kaam khatam kar diya na!😆 in today's world consumer(read reader) is king or shud i say queen😉! 😆

Well, the house has finally made its reentry lessening all my anxiousness to a large extent...freeing me from my overexert thinking.

--😆 u know u sound like Ashu! 😆😆😆

OMG...poor Ashu really has to b a bit more sharp and have self control to say no to his not so mature yet a lot more understanding Nidhi...so for being a lovesick puppy ended up in her house to face not only Baba's teasing but his Jigar Ka tukda Rohan😆😆😆...arre really yaar he has become a part and parcel of his life along with Nidhi to annoy him and to rage him to no extent..poor lad facing it from all sides, Rohan (The J King), Nidhi (Not giving in so easily to his needs, yet soothing him now-a-days😉.and yet soothing dose to all his worries) and Baba (The player with words and his equal yet hard to crack than the others)...arre show some mercy on Ashu.

--Hey to Rohan's defense.. usne aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya jo Ashu ko itna gussa dilwa de actually.. agar vo jealous ho raha hai to Rohan kya kare!! he he he.. btw whose JKT Nidhi's? Agar Ashu ne sun liya to tumhari khair nahi!😆 Aur ye tumhe bahot hamdardi ho rahi hai Ashu se? agar vo khud itna boja apne sar pe ladega to hum kya kar sakte hai.. the problem with him is he is wat he is.. cant help it.. he wud luv to solve all the problems of the world if he has tht authority! 😆 Agar vo Nidhi ki tarah simple hota to usko koi bhi situation ya person complex ya problematic nahi lagte! Jst to compare, the ease with which Nidhi tackles and deal with ppl and tuff situations in her life, Ashu makes it equally difficult and hard all by himself.. and he luvs doing tht and thn coming out of it successfully too.. may b tht way he boosts his ego and self-importance.. thr mite b an underlying complexity tht he deals with every situation as problem.. it relates to the fact tht he was an orphan and had to fight his way to make a place in this world.. he is moulded to fite and come out winning by the circumstances of his life!😳 Nidhi hadnt had much to face and sees life from more simpler angle! Time and again as i say thy complement each other!😳

The way Baba said "aah.. Dr. Ashutosh.. welcome welcome.. at last entering from the correct entrance!" he commented" was so very very funny and should say perfect timing..how could he leave this chance and at the same time he is making him comfortable and well trying to make the situation easy, which is very wonderful.

--yeah.. i luv how thr bond has developed.. and thy have started trusting each other so much.. Respect was always thr.. bt thy have opened up to each other a lot.. thr bond has reached an intersting point now lets c wer thy from here..😳

WHAT IS IT WITH THIS ROHAN...ERGGGHHH...WHAT THE HELL HE WANTS...I am sure before I understand him I will b half mad..and what is this convo of love letters and all...what is he upto and here Nidhi enjoying it all to see Ashu being all Jealous...its all interesting and annoying (i.e., Rohan).

--ha ha ha ha.. u sound sooo much like jealous Ashu!!!😆 Nidhi for the first time realized how jealous Ashu is.. so its her time to tease Ashu!😉😆

Well thanks to Anji for giving us a chance to see how easily Nidhi can melt d raged Ashu with her simple and sweet gesture (the quick peck)..just luved this Nidhi.

--yeah.. Ashu cant resist this sweet Nidhi.. and wen she looks at him with big innocent eyes.. she always reminds me of a cute cartoon characters.. like Ariel.. or snow white.. she is so much still child at heart!😳

The way u put out the past was brilliant...I was just moved by it..its had all d elements that needed.

--thnk u..i didnt wanted to make it tear-jerking.. i wanted to put all valid arguments and maintain a balanced emotional quotient.. bt at the end i thot some light romantic moments wud help a lot!

The part where Ashu put out his feelings of how and why it was so difficult for him to let go of his past instead of him wanting too..was just so emotional.

--it was something tht was bothering him for long.. wen u read the story u realize how much time it took for him to open up this touchy subject to Nidhi.. he had talked abt everything bt he cudnt voice his real inner emotions..till Nidhi forced him to do so! Its good to vent out one's distressed emotions..only tht can help one let it go.. as Nidhi had advised..😳 and I luv Nidhi for her such maturity..👏

In all this, I luved bringing Col. Verma into picture as it was much needed by Nidhi being so courageous yet helpless and Ashu just running into that shell all again.

--yeah.. i too felt tht the story wud b incomplete without CV's presence..and thts y i made thm reveal it at Nidhi's house! he was integral part of tht story and i knew he wud act as a grt support for Ashu.. being elder to Ashu.. Ashu wudnt go overboard and listen to him quietly, understand, and thn let it go!😳 i luv the way he subtly advised to Ashu! No big lecture.. jst a precise point! 👏 and I agree.. Nidhi wudn't have been able to stop Ashu from going into tht shell! she is equally helpless to reason out with him wen it comes to his love and deep feelings for her! Tho eventually she mite have brot him out.. bt it wud've taken a long time! and so I m glad tht CV was thr!😳

There was no fault of anyone yet every1 was wrong..and in all this the one who suffered for no mistake was Nidhi for no doubt. Saying it, I didn't mean that any other person was wrong or has suffered less..its just the circumstances which made them to take these decisions.

--exactly my thots! Sometimes its situations tht make us take those drastic steps and spit out those angry bitter words.. the heat of the moment leads us to our downfall.. and i was happy tht Ashu finally learnt how futile one's anger and ego is and wat price u mite have to pay at the end!👏

From my pov, I guess Ashu was not hating Nidhi becoz of the house but he was fighting with himself as he thought he wasn't that person with whom his Baba could have shared his probs, emotions or inner turmoil or a major part of his life...i think this is what was eating him up all these days and has ended up hating her for no reason or say taking out all his helplessness and frustration in the form of hatred.

--Again very very correct observation! 👏 thr was nothing whom he cud pin the blame of misfortune and grief to.. It was his baba's fault rite bt he loved him too much to do tht.. and the only easy target who in his eyes was more responsible was the heir of baba and his hatredness was fuelled by half truth!😳

But loved the way Ashu reacted to all this painful revelation yet soothing his heart to some degree and bringing him out of the loneliness or say from his thoughts of being not wanted by the person who was everything to him..

--i luved tht this lonliness issue and the feeling of being unwanted was addressed and i luved tht he spoke abt his insecurities to Nidhi!👏 this has led him to b more free and he can now live a more peaceful and unburdened life.. the one he had wished for wen he had met Nidhi initially!😳

The realization of Col. Verma, his repenting and pain he was going thru might have at least by 1% decreased by sharing it with his daughter and now with Ashu..hope he comes out of it completely...well for that Baba entry is must..so eager to know whats going on in ur mind in this regard.

--yes.. CV is still suffering a lot! thr r still couple of issues tht r bothering him and Nidhi's nana's entry will help him.. again this plot was attached to Ashu-Nidhis seperation plot.. and rite now i m unsure wether i shud bring tht seperation plot.. i m still working on it.. or else i will introduce Nidhi's nana in some other way into the story!😊

The thing which I loved the most in this entire update was the 3 of them handling the situation very maturely with understanding others pov

--yeah.. i luved tht! u know both Ashu and baba have seasoned thru life's hardships and tribulations.. and thy r mature enuf to understand the consequences of their actions and also wen and wat shud thy learn from their mistake.. thrs sheer contrast in how thy have acted wen thy wer young and now wen thy have aged and wisened up!😳 Nidhi is very mature wen it comes to understanding r'ship.. may b she has learnt it her way bcoz she didnt have a mother..and she knows the value of r'ships!😳

Guess all is well that ends well...and it again reflects where AshNi have reached in their relationship..their trust, ready to let go all their pain for other and how strong their bond has become and how well they understand each other and their luv.

--aah.. thr bond has strengthened manifolds and thts y i felt tht this house issue or past issue was bt a very trivial thing compared to wat thy have started to share!😳 Wen u reach tht point in luv.. everything else becomes secondary!😳 Bt this will also make my seperation plot if at all i introduce very engaging!😳 Thru their various phases of life i want to protray different forms of luv.. luv has a very vast meaning and its definition varies from person to person.. i believe thrs nothing sort of measuring rod or any particular unit tht can measure luv.. its relative and situational.. and it comes forth in its true form in worst of situations! and its true luv if it makes any person a better human being!😳

The most unexpected thing in all this is Nidhi not knowing about all this from the very beginning.

--yeah.. tht was a surprise package for readers!😆 something unexpected always makes reading a pleasure!😳

Also loved the way Nidhi made the situation lighter at the end of the revelation with her cute cribbing and anger...leading to that soothing embrace of AshNi and bringing the naughty Ashu who just luv to not leave any chance to tease Nidhi and enjoy her blushing...and of course the bold Ashu who is romancing in her house...well I guess he is having much fun with his lovely talks with Baba😆😆😆...but thanks for CS entry😡😡...well guess this only gonna bring more of their closeness..so just bring it on😉

--😆 Ashu really enjoys teasing Nidhi a lot! her blushes r lifeline for him!😆 and as the days pass, he is becoming much more of lovesick puppy!😆 and yeah.. its seems both CV and Ashu r enjoying this tug of war!

I just luved the update to bits...the way u have written it out is so beautiful..I mean its just beyond words to say..it had everything from luv, teasing, jealousy, maturity of thinking, and most importantly no big MU...and u just made me to read without a blink of my eyes from the screen..its just perfect part for me. Thanks for adding up the teases and the sweet romance in that tense phase making all the things a bit lighter...and making the update much more interesting and lovely-dovely

--aww i m humbled! seriously! Wen u write such stuff inresponse, i feel its worth writing!😳 for any reader, the biggest source of encouragement r interactive readers.. and once again i will say i m grateful to u all!😳

So me very interested now in some AshNi moments...more in Ashu's house u know "no Baba"😉. And yeah me missing Armaan too..so could u add up the trio (Ashu, Armaan, Nidhi) outings or something of that sort.

--yes.. i m missing Armaan too! Its long time no see! and yes.. ab to approval mil gaya hai.. to AshNi moments to honge hi na!😉 Wer and wen.. well u will have to wait and read!😛

And of course not to forget "The Engagement" and Ashu's next test...me wondering how many more..but luv them though.

--yes.. bt engagement se pehle hi Ashu ko thoda relief milne wala hai!😛 and test.. aah.. it will not b a test.. kyunki baba ne kaha na ki he is going to help him out!😛 so no test from his side at least!😳

So update the next soon..

Originally posted by: ChitaRK

I bow down to this awesome author who had brought the most beautiful couple back to life

Originally posted by: KBfanNo1

beautiful update

Originally posted by: achiever

Okay.. i have jst finished the chapter...bt if i include all the things its getting.. tooo long.. i m wondering wat to do! 🤔

Originally posted by: Cherishh

love to read long ones...but its up to u how to give us...becoz me cherishh just cherish everything😃😛.

will be waiting

Originally posted by: achiever

😆 I luv tht!😳 bt if I put everything it wud become one of those marathonish updates... bt i dont want to cut down on their romance at all... bt the substance of this chapter has to b thr too.. errrmmm.. wat to do!!???!!!! Super confused!