*Smthin_Clld_Luv*Nov3_Updt_p146*Jaane Kya Baat Hui - Page 108

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hilarious44

WOW..👏.

What a wonderful update...😛.
Beautifully written...😃
I love ur command over language..👏..
--thnk u sooo much!🤗...😊😊😊!
U handled the situation of clearing the MUs in a superb manner...👍🏼
Great to see all three of them acting maturely...😊.
--yeah.. i luved the way thy cleared thr MU.. i felt Baba's interefernce was necessary.. he had been very instrumental.. i thot without him he wud've got into his shell... he jst luvs her so much.. he wudnt have bear to see he was reason for her grief! Bt all is well tht ends well.. and Nidhi has a wonderful knack to bring him out of his depressed state!👍🏼 I luv her for tht!😛
Love the naughtiness in ur Ashu😆...he is adorable😳...he is HOTTT..☺️.
--I agree.. he is sooo hot.. bt i havent even started to depict his hotness!😉.. ☺️☺️.. bt for me, his naugtiness is a big turn on! **blush blush***😆
This rohan irritates me alot.😡...dont like him..😆.
--I agree.. he is irritating.. my all attempts to make him look cute have went in vain!😆 He is going to confuse Ashu a looot!😆
Lets c what u have in store for us...
Will be waiting eagerly....
--very nice chapter... i m sure u will luv it equally...😳..
This was an update worth the wait for sure...👏👏👏
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
--thnk u again.. sooo sooo .. very much!🤗 my chest wud swell out of proportions if i put in words wat those stars and applauds meant to me!😆 😆 😆 😆 !

bt sincerely thnk u soo much for ur kind and encouraing words!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra

Aah.. again a very long awaited reveiw!😳
This was outstanding Manisha👏
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I t was a superb chapter.
--thnk u sooo much!😛
and very very emotional.
I like the initial teasing.
But the revelation of the past was
amazing. It really really moved me.
--too emotional!😭 tho thnkfully i cut some oversentimental dialogues.. or else.. thr wud've been flooding on this thrd! Ashu's past is really very emotionally disturbing bt i tried to compensate it with rite measure of playfullness and light teases! To keep thm and us sane enuf to enjoy this chapter!😆
Col Vermas story also managed to wipe out all the grudges, and past pain from Ashutosh's heart.
--yes!! i luved tht.. his heart is free from all the remorse and pain! His heart is set free to luv unconditionally and unlimitedly!😳👍🏼 Lets c wat Nidhi teaches him this time!😳
That was the best part. he is only again light hearted, and playful.
Love how he teases Nidhi, and make her blush by beingnaughty
--He is a different person wen he is with Nidhi... i luv the spontaniety with which thy react to each other..i jst luv it! it invokes good humor, playfullness, and romantic teases.. setting up a mood to get more close and opening thmselves up!😳 I feel a husband-wife shud always share such friendly romantic r'ship!
I cant wait to read about their honeymoon.
But first jaldi se shaadi karayiye na inn dono ki.Embarrassed
--😆 u r one impatient reader! u have gone as far as their honeymoon.. itna far into the future to Ashu bhi na sochta!😆 Bt wat kind of romantic he is bahot jald pata chalega!😉

thnk u sooo much for coming here and commenting! I wonder how u find time to write 3 FFs and thn come and comment on our thrds! and so i appreciate ur replies even more!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alkaparmart

Wow Achiever,fully mixture of emotional chap dear,very justified.How CV make the confess of his and nidhi's mother's love.Baba left Ashu.Here two lover are paying for nothing.I don't know what is a role of Rohan?but sometimes he irritates me lot.And Ashutosh and Nidhi's romance.Nidhi"s stand by for ashu in his sorrowness.And liked Nidhi-baba conco and one father's stand for daughter.Really very emotional and wanting chap,thanks achiever once again.

first of all i m extremely sorry tht i havent had time to comment on ur post after reading it.. please PM me all ur nxt updts.. if u will please...😳
yeah..it came out brilliantly.. all pieces fell in place.. their past.. their grief.. their remorse.. and the fact tht Ashu was abandoned as a new born too resurfaced again!😭 I really feel for such orphans!😭
yeah.. CV was grt.. i luv him both as a father and as a person.. he mite have blundered bt he knows he blundered and accepts it and wants to seek forgiveness.. for me thts the biggest thing for any person of true character!👏
every one had their share of loss in the end.. baba.. lost everything.. CV - lost his wife.. Nidhi - her mom and nana.. and Ashu - his baba and his youth... the fate brot thm together.. to fulfill tht void tht was created.. the only things left in this jigsaw puzzle is entry of Nidhi's nana and Ashu's baba!😳
Rohan..😆 .. u all r so irritated by him.. bt he has a role to play for sure! He is in to give zor ka jhatka to Ashu!😆 bt trust me Rohan is going to ask him all the rite questions tht he mite have not otherwise faced!😳.. okay he has faced..bt he till Rohan confronts him.. he wudnt have had to face this truth upfront.. and trust me its going to test Ashu for his words and character for good!😛
Ashu-Nidhi romance is always to savor again and again!😛 and everytime we think this is it.. thy step further and v r left with awe and want more and more!😳
I luv Nidhi-CV bond.. CV is a very good father.. and v traces of fatherhood not jst for Nidhi bt also for Ashutosh!😳 Tht makes me think will he able to fill the void tht his baba has left.. tho thr equation is totally different and at different level.. bt still.. i wud like to c wer it goes in tht front!😳
thnk u sooo much for ur comments.. i find ur short review equally interesting.. coz its short jst to say.. bt c the amount of things i have replied... I cannot accept ur review as short by any means!😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pooja_0910

AWESOME update...
"aah.. Dr. Ashutosh.. welcome welcome.. at last entering from the correct entrance!" OMG col.verma bhi kuch kam nahi hai he didnt leave any single chance to tease Ashutosh hehe and thats why i like would be FIL-SIL scene...

--thrs so much underlying humor betn thm..wen i imagine thm in one frame i cant stop myself from bringing tht little zing to their conversation! its jst so very entertaining!😆

Ohh Rohan ki to khair nahi he gonna get something special from Ashu for his closeness to Nidhi even as for friendship hahaha i loved to see Ashu jealous kuch alag he maza hai usme:):)
--yeah.. jealous Ashu is dream come true! He is already so possessive abt Nidhi! he he heh.. And Nidhi.. vo to thrill feel kar rahi thi!😆😆😆

The whole house issue & misunderstanding between AshNi finally finished and the conversation argument was PERFECT...
--yes! it ended in a nice and logical conclusion.. everything from Cv's love story and their past.. to Nidhi's fainting and its connection to her mom's accident.. and tht invisible thrd tht had connected Ashu and Nidhi's mom finally came to light.. i luved the fact tht Ashu cud connect to Nidhi's mom at emotional and personal level too.. he had seen her mom and well connected her to Nidhi!👏 Its trivial and subtle thing ..bt helds a deeper meaning and strengthens Nidhi-Ashu bonding! by drawing parallels betn Nidhi's mom and Nidhi, it helped him to overcome tht block of grief subtly 😳 subconsciously, his guilt over Nidhi's mom's death wud b overcome by showering his luv over Nidhi!
Nidhi handle it beautifully as daughter & partner...
--yes! well said! she was a grt support system both for her father and her lover! sometimes she knows wen to listen silently! 👏

SO whole chapter was mixture of emotions like jealousy teasiness love guilt & most importantly discovery of truth...
--yes.. it makes me feel like i m writing a filmy masala chapter sometmes.. 😆.. bt thn essentially this is wat every reader including me.. wud like and luv to read!😊
So i guess separation is over now ya phir aur bhi kuch baki hai?
--well thrs still a plot in my story..bt i dont know wether i wud b bringing it to fore at all or not! i m having second thots on tht!😆 if at all if the story demands, i wud bring it.. bt thrs big "if" ... for now forget abt tht.. and njoy the story as it comes.. the nxt chapter is good!😛
Thanks for the update:):):):)

thnk u very much for ur lovely lovely comments😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: harsha6

thnkzz for d lovely update di..u hav mentiond d incidents so very clearly...moreovr i luvd d way Ashu reactd...i mean he was angry but gt meltd...as his innocnt Nidhi trappd him into her heart nd innocence...
ciaoo..
thnkiezz!!

yes.. all the past incidents play a very vital role in the story.. and i like to make use of every single stuff tht i had put on earlier in the story.. a few things r still remaining.. bt i will bring it at correct time and let me see how many of u remember it!😆 I know i had developed a bad habit of putting everything on shelf and thn pulling it down after long long time wen u all tend to forget it!😆 so i m to b blamed actually.. 😆
and yes.. i luved Ashu reacted.. he is a very changed man for all to see.. earlier Ashu wud've reacted and ended up with contempt and bitterness.. as he had done with his baba's incident.. no matter how much he loved his baba.. he still had tht resentment.. and Nidhi didnt want tht for herself! and she did it very nicely.. she brot out the good Ashu from him!😳 Ashu still had a choice to not accept tht house after everything at the end.. bt it was for sheer luv for Nidhi tht he did! I felt earlier Ashu wud not have accepted it out of his ego till baba had presented it himself ! bt his ego melted for Nidhi as he realized wat prize his baba and Nidhi's baba had to pay for their ego!😳
thnku sooo much for ur comments!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rajanigandha26

Oh My God! Thts such a cuuute cat! i luv the way its thinking!😆

thnk u soo much!😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
I.."The late lateef" am finally here😆😆😆.

Coming to the update..the title "Entagled Past" is just perfect.

Seriously, I thought this past will last for at least 2 parts, but great it hasn't...u r such a sweetu, lovely girl😉...muaahhh...thanku so much dear...btw if u haven't done that, u know what would I have written..right???😛

Well, the house has finally made its reentry lessening all my anxiousness to a large extent...freeing me from my overexert thinking😛.

OMG...poor Ashu really has to b a bit more sharp and have self control to say no to his not so mature yet a lot more understanding Nidhi...so for being a lovesick puppy ended up in her house to face not only Baba's teasing but his Jigar Ka tukda Rohan😆😆😆...arre really yaar he has become a part and parcel of his life along with Nidhi to annoy him and to rage him to no extent..poor lad facing it from all sides, Rohan (The J King), Nidhi (Not giving in so easily to his needs, yet soothing him now-a-days😉.and yet soothing dose to all his worries) and Baba (The player with words and his equal yet hard to crack than the others)...arre show some mercy on Ashu.

The way Baba said "aah.. Dr. Ashutosh.. welcome welcome.. at last entering from the correct entrance!" he commented" was so very very funny and should say perfect timing..how could he leave this chance and at the same time he is making him comfortable and well trying to make the situation easy, which is very wonderful.

WHAT IS IT WITH THIS ROHAN...ERGGGHHH...WHAT THE HELL HE WANTS...I am sure before I understand him I will b half mad..and what is this convo of love letters and all...what is he upto and here Nidhi enjoying it all to see Ashu being all Jealous...its all interesting and annoying (i.e., Rohan).

Well thanks to Anji for giving us a chance to see how easily Nidhi can melt d raged Ashu with her simple and sweet gesture (the quick peck)..just luved this Nidhi.

The way u put out the past was brilliant...I was just moved by it..its had all d elements that needed.

The part where Ashu put out his feelings of how and why it was so difficult for him to let go of his past instead of him wanting too..was just so emotional.

In all this, I luved bringing Col. Verma into picture as it was much needed by Nidhi being so courageous yet helpless and Ashu just running into that shell all again.

There was no fault of anyone yet every1 was wrong..and in all this the one who suffered for no mistake was Nidhi for no doubt. Saying it, I didn't mean that any other person was wrong or has suffered less..its just the circumstances which made them to take these decisions.

From my pov, I guess Ashu was not hating Nidhi becoz of the house but he was fighting with himself as he thought he wasn't that person with whom his Baba could have shared his probs, emotions or inner turmoil or a major part of his life...i think this is what was eating him up all these days and has ended up hating her for no reason or say taking out all his helplessness and frustration in the form of hatred.

But loved the way Ashu reacted to all this painful revelation yet soothing his heart to some degree and bringing him out of the loneliness or say from his thoughts of being not wanted by the person who was everything to him..

The realization of Col. Verma, his repenting and pain he was going thru might have at least by 1% decreased by sharing it with his daughter and now with Ashu..hope he comes out of it completely...well for that Baba entry is must..so eager to know whats going on in ur mind in this regard.

The thing which I loved the most in this entire update was the 3 of them handling the situation very maturely with understanding others pov

Guess all is well that ends well...and it again reflects where AshNi have reached in their relationship..their trust, ready to let go all their pain for other and how strong their bond has become and how well they understand each other and their luv.

The most unexpected thing in all this is Nidhi not knowing about all this from the very beginning.

Also loved the way Nidhi made the situation lighter at the end of the revelation with her cute cribbing and anger...leading to that soothing embrace of AshNi and bringing the naughty Ashu who just luv to not leave any chance to tease Nidhi and enjoy her blushing...and of course the bold Ashu who is romancing in her house...well I guess he is having much fun with his lovely talks with Baba😆😆😆...but thanks for CS entry😡😡...well guess this only gonna bring more of their closeness..so just bring it on😉😳

I just luved the update to bits...the way u have written it out is so beautiful..I mean its just beyond words to say..it had everything from luv, teasing, jealousy, maturity of thinking, and most importantly no big MU...and u just made me to read without a blink of my eyes from the screen..its just perfect part for me. Thanks for adding up the teases and the sweet romance in that tense phase making all the things a bit lighter...and making the update much more interesting and lovely-dovely

So me very interested now in some AshNi moments...more in Ashu's house u know "no Baba"😉. And yeah me missing Armaan too..so could u add up the trio (Ashu, Armaan, Nidhi) outings or something of that sort.

And of course not to forget "The Engagement" and Ashu's next test...me wondering how many more..but luv them though.

So update the next soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: achiever

wud b eagerly... impatiently waiting.. come back sooon!😳

b4 i update my nxt!😉 already half complete!😛


Hey I have finally done it😛...

So now me waiting eagerly and impatiently for the update...and as u have completed half already when I expect the next??

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