Devakshi OS-They Were Finally Home(Updated) - Page 12

Read an OS aftr so many days.it was gud.keep writing

Originally posted by: shruti.

Read an OS aftr so many days.it was gud.keep writing

Thank you dear 😃

A really well written OS😊

Originally posted by: star.21

A really well written OS😊

Loved reading every bit of it.😊

Do write more😃

Thank you so much for your appreciation 🤗

Beautifully written with all emotions correctly expressed.

Lovely os
Poor sona was in a miserable state thinking she'd lost Dev to another girl
But here it's all his plan to make her realize she still loves him n can't live without him
Loved his speech about never hurting her again sealing it with a sizzling kiss
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

Beautifully written with all emotions correctly expressed.

It is natural for Sonakshi to hesitate and deny herself Dev's love.

Once bitten twice shy.

Dev has to practically prove his love for Sona. Only words will not do this time.

As both love each other and suffered a separation they will be careful this time and will think twice before taking any decision .

Well written.

Yup you are right this time Dev will have to do a lot of effort to finally get Sonakshi and thank you for your comment

Originally posted by: Heatsha8176

Lovely os
Poor sona was in a miserable state thinking she'd lost Dev to another girl
But here it's all his plan to make her realize she still loves him n can't live without him
Loved his speech about never hurting her again sealing it with a sizzling kiss
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

Thank you so much,I am glad that you liked it

Wow this is fantastic ...I so loved it ...this is really beautiful ...I so wished something like this was shown ...but alas ...and thank you so much🤗

Originally posted by: sweetyidiot

Wow this is fantastic ...I so loved it ...this is really beautiful ...I so wished something like this was shown ...but alas ...and thank you so much🤗

Thank you dear,I hope that I lived up to your expectations