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Kavya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Lovely..!!

you are very good writer..!! Keep it up.

I am imagining the seen..

If writers copy this seen, that day's views will beat the 5M views of previous episodes 😃

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: kvys
Lovely..!!
you are very good writer..!! Keep it up.

I am imagining the seen..
If writers copy this seen, that day's views will beat the 5M views of previous episodes😃

Aww thank you so much for your sweet comment dear ❤️

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Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: write2neetha
Beautiful os..

Thank you dear 😃

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Silambu

@Silambu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Nice work. Lots of thought process and efforts put into your writing.

But I have one problem...not that I am taking Dev's side. What happened 7 years ago was cause and effect of both internal and external factors. So Dev asking for forgiveness as if he is the sole reason for the marriage break up is not going well with me.. It takes two to tango. Both failed miserably.

External - Ishwari and gkb, Bejoy, Vicky

Internal : Dev and Sona

They had serious issues, not just trust alone. The foundation of their marriage was weak.

I am really waiting for the longest time for both to talk about what's really bothering and go back in time what went wrong with the marriage and the hurtful words they threw at each other on that night. I hope that the producers will show this for both to realize how they let others snatch away those 7 years from them...had they only trusted and being honest and open with each other.

And 2nd Chance will only materialise if both admit their faults and how to fix it from here on. That's part and parcel of life. There are no guarantees in life.Happiness is how one controls it and also learning from past mistakes. it takes lots of courage to say sorry and admit faults.

But hey, good clean writing. Keep it up.

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Silambu
Nice work. Lots of thought process and efforts put into your writing.
But I have one problem...not that I am taking Dev's side. What happened 7 years ago was cause and effect of both internal and external factors. So Dev asking for forgiveness as if he is the sole reason for the marriage break up is not going well with me.. It takes two to tango. Both failed miserably.

External - Ishwari and gkb, Bejoy, Vicky

Internal : Dev and Sona

They had serious issues, not just trust alone. The foundation of their marriage was weak.

I am really waiting for the longest time for both to talk about what's really bothering and go back in time what went wrong with the marriage and the hurtful words they threw at each other on that night. I hope that the producers will show this for both to realize how they let others snatch away those 7 years from them...had they only trusted and being honest and open with each other.

And 2nd Chance will only materialise if both admit their faults and how to fix it from here on. That's part and parcel of life. There are no guarantees in life.Happiness is how one controls it and also learning from past mistakes. it takes lots of courage to say sorry and admit faults.

But hey, good clean writing. Keep it up.

Thank you so much and I agree that it was not entirely Dev's fault but the fact is he chose to lie(eg the whole pregnancy track) rather than finding the solution was the thing I despised the most and in this OS I wanted to show Sona's fear since time again in the show she has realised that it was not completely his mistake but hers also.

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Silambu

@Silambu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Devakshilover
Thank you so much and I agree that it was not entirely Dev's fault but the fact is he chose to lie(eg the whole pregnancy track) rather than finding the solution was the thing I despised the most and in this OS I wanted to show Sona's fear since time again in the show she has realised that it was not completely his mistake but hers also.

Yes i can understand your reasons for despising him. I know it was wrong for him to lie . Its the same thing like he did for the infertility track. He knew Sona will not marry him if she knows the truth and above all he won my heart when he went and married her despite her shortcomings.

For the pregnancy lie...he was caught off guard as he knew she couldnt get pregnant and he was buying time and was trying to find a solution to come out of the mess he created...bottom line he didnt want to hurt both women he loved most...so I couldnt never bring myself to hate Dev for those white lies. Not saying what he did was right...

Sona fell in love with Dev despite knowing how attached he is with his mother...

One cannot forget the qualities that attracted and drew them together. They just need to work on that ...

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Silambu

Yes i can understand your reasons for despising him. I know it was wrong for him to lie . Its the same thing like he did for the infertility track. He knew Sona will not marry him if she knows the truth and above all he won my heart when he went and married her despite her shortcomings.
For the pregnancy lie...he was caught off guard as he knew she couldnt get pregnant and he was buying time and was trying to find a solution to come out of the mess he created...bottom line he didnt want to hurt both women he loved most...so I couldnt never bring myself to hate Dev for those white lies. Not saying what he did was right...

Sona fell in love with Dev despite knowing how attached he is with his mother...
One cannot forget the qualities that attracted and drew them together. They just need to work on that ...

Hmm I can understand your POV
But the thing is Sona even didn't react violently when He slapped her father but her breaking point was that one Get out from him even when She did not push Ishu deliberately and that was when she lost all hopes that he will ever change before that she coped up with each and every tantrum of Ishu like the honeymoon one and I am glad that you put up your views and please read my other works too,I hope you will like them

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Silambu

@Silambu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Devakshilover
Hmm I can understand your POV
But the thing is Sona even didn't react violently when He slapped her father but her breaking point was that one Get out from him even when She did not push Ishu deliberately and that was when she lost all hopes that he will ever change before that she coped up with each and every tantrum of Ishu like the honeymoon one and I am glad that you put up your views and please read my other works too,I hope you will like them

Well to answer your question...remember after the slap,sona took off and stayed away from him refusing to answer his calls? And finally she came with a cheque. In their bedroom they had a very heated argument about this matter and Dev was explaining to her taking such huge loan was a mistake but she wouldnt listen. Just wanted to settle the loan. She was yelling at him too and he walked away angrily and the incident with him mum happened. Let's not forget about the way she was holding his collar...prior to that..

What I am saying his...the situation has become from bad to worse.Lots of anger moments were created and made the situation very bad. So when he saw the push...he said things out as what he saw...

Lets also not forget how he pleaded with her at farmhouse after he found his mother's part in prenup and he was prepared to live with her only. And what she said...he will be a loser and will live alone only...

Anyway, we can go on and on about this...but at end of the day if both parties dont talk about what happened and only point at each other but not their mistakes...things will be difficult to mend.

Again I am not taking Dev's side but the man has apologized so many times...but no use and the best part he still wants her only...his only love... Lets end it. I dont want to keep going back what she did and he did. Very tiring. Everyone has their own opinions and let see how the makers are planning to unfold it.

Ok I will read your other OS.