Devakshi OS -Humari Adhoori Kahani - Page 9

Originally posted by: dakshasharma

Very emotional and touchy story...

Thanks for pm dear...

Thank you I am glad that you liked it

Very nice OS...Beautifully written

Originally posted by: sa1234B

Very nice OS...Beautifully written

Emotional & heart touching story...

Thank you 😃

Originally posted by: Tumpa12

superb
loved it
thnx for pm

Thank you 😃

Thank you for pm nice story hope u write more😊

Originally posted by: sweetyidiot

Thank you for pm nice story hope u write more😊

Thank you 😊

How sad😭

Originally posted by: JyotiBThakur

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<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2" color="#660033">Beautiful piece of writing.👏👏Do keep writing dear.😊</font>

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<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2" color="#660033">Loved those 2 poems at the end.😭</font>

Thank you so much 😊

Originally posted by: Anjali333

How sad😭

Devakshi ki adhoori kahaani..

Loved the whole story

Dev couod not even confess his feelings

But uski wish poori ki usne

& yes...jo uski sona ke saath hua...

Wo wesa kisi or ke saath nhi hone dena chahta

Poems were so beautiful

Aapne khud likhi hain?

Thank you so much
And I have not written the poems one of my has written them and I have modified them a little in accordance with my OS