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Posted: 8 years ago

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A Fiesty Start with an Emotional Ending

Dev fell in love with Sonakshi but when he realized it all it was just too late she had cancer and was leaving his world behind

the love Dev carried for her didn't end with her instead he treated cancer patients making sure they all get treatment so their love ones never have to be like him alone without his love

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Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: Jade0001
A Fiesty Start with an Emotional Ending

Dev fell in love with Sonakshi but when he realized it all it was just too late she had cancer and was leaving his world behind
the love Dev carried for her didn't end with her instead he treated cancer patients making sure they all get treatment so their love ones never have to be like him alone without his love

Thank you so much 😊😊😊 you summed up my story in beautiful words

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Nice one but very emotional ...I felt so sad ...😭 after reading it ...beautifully written...👏

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld
Nice one but very emotional ...I felt so sad ...😭 after reading it ...beautifully written...👏

Thank You 😃
I am glad that you liked it

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Wow..i mean such a amazing piece of writing ...
Nice storyline
Reaching the end.. my eyes were wet... i got reminded of something ...hats off to u
The letter of sona,tha poem by dev from sona's collection nd lastly the reply of the poem by dev...all were just full of love nd showed the sad part of their incomplete story ...
Bit long comment n...but what to do..can't stop my self aftr reading it

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Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: varsi
Wow..i mean such a amazing piece of writing ...
Nice storyline
Reaching the end.. my eyes were wet... i got reminded of something ...hats off to u
The letter of sona,tha poem by dev from sona's collection nd lastly the reply of the poem by dev...all were just full of love nd showed the sad part of their incomplete story ...
Bit long comment n...but what to do..can't stop my self aftr reading it

Thank you so much for such a long comment
I really crave for them
I am glad that you liked it and were able to connect with my story 😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

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