New Devakshi SS - Lifetime of Love (complete) - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
very unconventional but m curious to know where all this will lead them to
update soon
thabks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
This was really beautiful Asha

Sometimes when words fail to convey ur emotions physical intimacy helps out
U can actually convey ur feelings and inform ur partner what u actually feel about him/her

They are two mature individuals and if they have decided to keep their relationship limited to a physical level then they must have thought about the consequences of it as well
But only fear is that how long will they be able to control their emotions and hold on to their facade infront of their family members

Eager to know what happenes next
Please if possible update soon and pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73
It was such an beautiful update. Words are less to describe it. I am in love with our writing. Do update soon. Waiting desperately.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

This was really beautiful Asha

Sometimes when words fail to convey ur emotions physical intimacy helps out
U can actually convey ur feelings and inform ur partner what u actually feel about him/her

They are two mature individuals and if they have decided to keep their relationship limited to a physical level then they must have thought about the consequences of it as well
But only fear is that how long will they be able to control their emotions and hold on to their facade infront of their family members

Eager to know what happenes next
Please if possible update soon and pm me

Physical intimacy is sometimes the only way to express ones feeling.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: asha2012


I also wanted them to show something like this on the show and i am sure that Shaheer and Erica would enact it briliantly as there is a certain physicality involved here and all actors may not be comfortable with that.

But then this is primetime in India - so i dont think the storyline would be so bold!!

Thanks for liking the story!

Cheers

They don't need to show bold scenes as such. A certain level of physical intimacy and subtle story line will work. N i completely agree with you, Shaheer and Erica will do full justice with this storyline. They have a very raw and untapped chemistry.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Loved the update.
Like how they are living for themselves. Hope to see something like this on the show as well.
Pls update soon😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
I can't get enough of this ss. Hope u turn it into an ff cz I love ur writing style. So subtle yet impactfull
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
Nice chapter a bit hot too please continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
Beautiful update..
Wow...dev visited mumbai..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I would really like to thank all of you for liking this rather unusual love story between Dev and Sona. I am using the words unusual rather than "bold" for a reason.
This is unusual because though they love each other greatly they are scared to reveal that to each other especially after their bitter breakup. They are also aware that their love for each other has proved to be destructive to them and their families in the past as well. Hence, them being physically close to each other is a way for them to demonstrate and express their love and longing to each other.

This is different from the time when they got married. They were mentally very close but got physically close later.

Trust this clarifies my thoughts somewhat on writing this SS,.

Thanks to all of you once again.

Have a wonderful day.

Regards
Asha

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