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Posted: 8 years ago


Awesome update .

Dev should punish Vicky.

Unite them soon as a family.

Waiting Eagerly. 👍🏼
Edited by maasha - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely updates as alwayz...Very well written
Enjoyed reading this story...Continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update😊
Pls update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
interesting update..👏waiting for next update😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Asha.. I read all the chaps again..
And i wanna say that i loved this again.. I also had a similar concept in my mind which was physical rather than emotional..
I always wanted devakshi to live in together with soha and have a physical relationship bt filled with unspoken words of love trust respect nt lust..
I want a passionate devakshi who wishes the world to go to hell and just be with each other with thr little bundle of joy..


So i would like to say u almost fulfilled my wish.. Though i kno in the serial it wont be shown as it airs on prime time and also Sharica may nt be comfy.. Bt still i gt in this ss..

Pls pls do continue soon and give the next Update.. We all r mature and i guess going through the comments all r liking it also.. Everyone wants a self centered devakshi who think abt themselves only haina?? So pls continue soon..

And thanks once again for writing this
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Posted: 8 years ago
I am waiting for ur update dear. Do update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was very beautiful! Loving this story :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

New Devakshi SS - Lifetime of Love- Chapter 6 updated


The next few days were hectic and tense and by the end of five days Dev managed to get hold of 75% of the shares which were floating around the market and when he was convinced of a majority he swiftly made the next move, that was largely based on the advice of his lawyer. In all these difficult times, it was ironically Sona who stood by him and boosted his low morale. There were times when he felt he was going against the family but it was Sona again who made him understand that he was fighting for what was rightfully his. On one of those days, he came to the Bose residence to meet Soha. Sona was not home and Soha was doing her homework. He played with her and helped her complete her homework and had dinner with her. After dinner he even read her a story. As her was leaving he saw Asha in the kitchen and went upto her and said "Can I call you Maa again please? Asha was very touched and said "Of course you can call me Maa .. just because Sona and you are not together does not mean that our relationship changes. Would like to have some coffee? Dev smiled and said "Yes I want to have some coffee. Asha and Dev were finishing their coffee when Sona walked in at 10.15 PM. She was surprised to see Dev around. She put her bag down and sat down on the dining table next to her mother. Asha got up to get her some food when Dev leaned towards her and said "You are looking very tired. Where were you? Sona whispered back "I went to Faridabad to get something. Read these papers on your way back. Saying that she reached into her laptop bag and handed over a packet to him. Dev left and before her started his car, he opened the packet and saw there were some more evidence against Vicky. Sona managed to get hold of the details of some bank accounts which Vicky had opened in Faridabad and where he had transferred money which was siphoned from Dev's company. He thanked his lucky stars that Sona was in his team and not against him as she would have made a very formidable opponent.

The next day, Dev dropped the bombshell at home by calling the cops home to get Vicky arrested. Vicky protested when the cops arrested him for fraud and he said loudly to Ishwari "I told you not let that woman into the house see she came back after seven years and see she caused a wedge between me and bhai. Would I ever cheat him.Ishwari came rushing to Dev's room and said "What is happening Dev Why have the police come to arrest Vicky. Come down immediately. Dev came down coolly and found his Mamiji and Vicky filling Ishwari's ears.

Dev quietly separated his mother from Mamiji and Vicky and said "Maa don't listen to them. I went against Sonakshi so many years back and gave him a job because you told me to. He has been stealing money from the Company for so many years. He has tried to get me killed when I was going to Jaipur for a meeting and Sonakshi saved my life. He got Sonakshi's family thrown out of their house using my name. He tried to misbehave with Sona many times when she was in this house. Ishwari and Mamaji were stunned and Mamaji spoke first "Dev beta you get him arrested now. Mamiji was quiet for a change. Vicky still continued "What proof do u have Dev bhai? Dev got angry and held him by his collar and said "I have proof which has already been submitted to the police and I will ensure that you don't come out for the next ten years. Saying that he turned to the cops and told them "Take him away please. Mamaji turned to Dev and said "I am very sorry for all this Dev beta.

Ishwari was stunned and she sat down on the sofa with a thud when Mamiji spoke up "Jiji this is all that bangalan's work. She brought a fight between the two brothers. Why will Vicky steal money from Dev's Company? Before Ishwari could reply Dev spoke up "Mamiji please don't justify Vicky's actions. You disliked Sona from day one because you could never accept that she was not interested in my money like you always were. Don't make me open my mouth I know how your house was burnt down. Because of my respect for Mamaji I kept quiet all these years. In fact Maa it is important for you also to understand how generous Sona is. She was the one who lent me a hundred crores a few days back to take care of the financial issues caused by Vicky. So please I will not stand anyone talking badly of her in this house. In fact she stopped Vicky from taking over this house as well.

Dev did not wait for Ishwari to reply and went upstairs to his room. He closed the door and dialled Sona's number. She picked it up in one ring "What happened? was the first thing she asked. Dev smiled at her impatience and said "Thanks to you everything went off well and the police have taken away Vicky. The first thing that Sona said was "You should be with Maa she must be feeling very bad. Dev was somehow not surprised that inspite of the hard exterior that Sona liked to project she was still soft hearted to think about people close to her first. Dev said "Yes I will work from home today. By the way can you meet me at the apartment tonight? Sona was quiet for a while and then she replied "Yes.

When she opened the door to the flat at seven PM in the evening, the soft lights were on in the living room and some nice music was playing. There was bottle of wine chilling in the ice bucket and Dev was standing at the window watching the busy street downstairs. She walked upto him silently and hugged him from behind. He smiled and held her hands and turned around to face her. Still holding her hands he looked at her intently and said "Thanks for being there for me. I realise now that you have always kept your promises. In our relationship I have always been the weak one. Sona said "Lets not talk about these things now Dev. Lets celebrate. Saying that she took him to the living area and asked him "Can I have this dance with you Mr. Dixit? "Of course Ms. Bose replied Dev with a chuckle and they danced.

When Sona got home a little later, her mother asked her "Sona I need to speak to you come to my room. Sona was surprised and she said "What happened Maa? Asha replied "Have you thought about your future with Dev? Sona replied "There is no future to the relationship maa. We are good friends and probably a mean a lot more to each other now than we did when we were married. All the misunderstanding of the last seven years have now been erased. We are co parents to Soha. That's all there is to my relationship with Dev. Asha nodded and said "That is all alright Sona but you need to think of your future also Sona sighed and got up and said "Not today Maa I am very tired. Saying that she went upstairs to Soha who was waiting for her.

<<End of Chapter 6>>

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi All
I finally managed to post Chapter 6 of the SS that i was writing on Devakshi.

Sorry for the delay.

There are few more chapters left in this one...

Then am writing another one as well.

As always waiting for your comments and likes.

Cheers
Asha

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Posted: 8 years ago
Read all the chapters in one go. Skilful storytelling and beautiful writing. Love the story. Please update soon.

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