Devakshi OS 'Second Chance' Bonus Chapter,Part2-Page6 [28/2/

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Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Aww this was so cute
Flirty dev is a treat to read
and Soha and Dev are partners in crime aww so cute
so finally he apologised for everything wrong he has done till date and bijoy too forgave him Wow that's great
So he told his mother that he loves her but she will have to accept Sonakshi too. That was amazing
But why did you stop there?we want to know how would he propose Sonakshi again

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.FlyingClouds.

@.FlyingClouds.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

It was Awesome...

But why did you stop it here??

Pls cont soon

Thanks for the pm

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cscs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Amazing :)

Loved the way Dev gave roses to Boses and Ishwari in return gave her rose to Sonakshi.

Waiting for the next part, to hear ILU from Sonakshi.

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Suchi_Ejf_fan

@Suchi_Ejf_fan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Wow it's amazing
Post soon

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Sonali Mahajan

@Cutiepie.sona

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Awww!😳

Such a lovely chapter my dear!

Loved the way Dev accepted his mistakes and apologised for it by giving roses😃

And Finally IshwRi accepted Sona...wow!😊

Waiting to see how will Dev propose his lady love!😳😉

Update soon😊

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Anjali Sharma

@Anjali333

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Dear mehak

Very beautifully written...

Dev ans sona's convo was very cute

I loved it

And the last part...

Everything getting right

Awesome

Thanks for PM

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Zaya.hp

@Zaya.hp

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

This is brilliant!! Thanks for this amazing piece of writing.

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Chandni Davey.

@Chandniyati

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Hi Dear...

My comment for chapter on page #1.

Yet to read the bonus chapter...

Will comment for that once I read that...

Wow ...

Loved the way it started from hate, fight taunting, irritated with eachother... To express heart out... To listen n understand eachother... To accept own faults... To clear MU... To finally confess the burried love... N again accepting love...

Oh God... It was so emotional... I could imagine our DevAkshi there... N that short forms of their names to eachother... Wer kinda epic ones... Loved them...

Then their swt n tiny miny gestures of kissing Soha n eachother... So much symbolic...

Sorry Dear for being late...

Keep giving us this kinda dozes... Loving them...