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Posted: 8 years ago
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That was just Brilliant

Oh I wish Dev and Sonakshi can have a really serious talk in the show where both can speak about the pain and solutions to it
I loved every bit of this OS
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is one of the best things I've read on this forum. Thank you so much for letting them both speak. For letting them both put their point forth and accept their mistakes. A good talk would always do wonders. Fabulous! And thank you Ms. FWMG meaning Fantastic Writer Mehak Gera.
Your writing and story are both amazing!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful... the dialogues.. the emotions everything is JUST PERFECT...
loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zaya.hp

This is one of the best things I've read on this forum. Thank you so much for letting them both speak. For letting them both put their point forth and accept their mistakes. A good talk would always do wonders. Fabulous! And thank you Ms. FWMG meaning Fantastic Writer Mehak Gera.

Your writing and story are both amazing!

thank you so darn much. i am elated
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Bonus Chapter

Part-1

Dev's POV

"Mr.Dev Dixit! You think you are very smart han?" Said my furious cat
woman entering the room.

"Why would i think that when I know i am smart" i said stressing on the word know.

She growled "Dont get on my nerves. What did i tell you?" Before she could say anything else i interrupted " that you love me" i said with a cheeky smile. Her mouth was turned into an big O. "Haww! i didnt say that.Stop dreaming" she exclaimed .

"But you will na?soon?" I said flashing that flirty smile of mine which she loves but denies.

I glanced at the watch. It was 8:30, we had to leave for office soon but wait! Is she going to office dressed like that? So sexy? She was wearing an off shoulder mint green top teamed up with a blue jeans upto her ankles and tan stilettos. No no no! Doesn't she know we have men in the office?

Before i could say anything she was ranting again "Didn't i tell you not to drop soha to school? You are spoiling her. She could go by herself, driver was there to drop her na".

"Arey! My daughter wanted me, her papa to drop her to school how could i say no? I know the driver can drop her but what's the point having a father if he cannot even drop his daughter to school?" I argued.

Sona keeps complaining that Suhana ha become quite
demanding now, you know after me coming into the picture. But thats
good na. My daughter is such a perfect child. She finishes all her
homework, her extra co-curricular activities, even helps grumpy Golu
finish his homework and then think of playing or something.
But Sona being Sona thinks that because of playing with Suhana and
complying to all her wishes, I dont get time for myself and I dont
rest enough or take care of myself. But when i have her to look after
me now, why should i even bother?

"Dev! You could have rested more instead of getting up early and dropping her." She said. My Shona. I cupped her face and said "after all the years away from her do you think i would choose sleep over my daughter?".

"But dev! "

"No buts Sona! Stop worrying about me or Suhana. And You should enjoy with us too instead of romancing with those books of yours " i said.

She rolled her eyes. " lets go now. You are making me late for the
office." I just went to her cupboard and came back with a
scarf. I draped the scarf around her bare shoulder while she frowned.
"Now we are ready to leave" i said taking her hand and dragging her
out of the room. She jerked my hand and crossed her arms, tapping her
foot waiting for an explanation.

"You cannot go to office that way Miss. I am not the only man in the office." I pouted. She giggled and pulled my cheeks "its good that we have other men. I can fave fun too."

"First of all why do you keep pulling my cheeks? I hope you
haven't mistaken me as Golu. And secondly, you want to have fun with
those flirty men? Ms.bose dont forget i am still alive." I spoke.

"And who are you ? My boyfriend? " she asked smirking.

"I will be Ms.bose! Very soon! And you wont be able to reject me." I said confidently.

It was an hour later, I was working on some presentation when my gaze fell upon Sona who was working in her room on the other half of the building. God! She was beautiful. Those honey brown eyes, i could drown myself in, her pink lips which mouthed only good for the world and those cheeks which in my presence turned red. God must have made that beauty with patience.
Now that i think about it, I am so happy that she bought this office.
We were getting along well now.It's been three months since she gave
me a second chance and life ever since is heaven. We bought an
apartment together, more of a pent house apartment. Though both of our
families were against us moving in together but this time there was no
backing out. I made it clear to maa that she cannot snatch my
happiness this time and i would do, what suited best for my daughter
and Sonakshi. She like always pounced me with her emotional blackmail
but it didnt affect me. While on the other hand, Baba was furious too
but sona and soha together handled him. And the best person? Maa? I
mean bengali maa? She couldnt be more happy. We got the most positive
vibes from her and Dadi. Sonakshi has got all her patience, strength
and kindness from maa. I hope Suhana gets some traits from her dida as
well.
I was so lost in my bengali beauty that i didnt realise my phone was
ringing. Without checking the caller ID i picked it up, still lost in
her' dreams.
"Mr.Aubhodrooo" the tone was sarcastic. I glanced at
the phone to confirm my doubt and then at sona who was looking at me
with her phone on her ears. I was caught.

"I think i should be afraid of you instead of other men in the office." She said.

"Its all your fault. Why are you so beautiful. And what can i do that your cabin is across mine." I said foolishly.

"Oh! Well in that case i will keep the
blinds down from now on." She chuckled.

"You do that and i will settle in your cabin permanently." I said irritated. She giggled. Did i tell you her laughter was like music to my ears? Whenever she giggles, i fall in love with her all over again. Damn! I am crazily in love with her again and what me and my daughter have planned for today, i have millions of butterflies in my stomach.

"Okay! Finish your work fast, we have to pick up suhana from school today! Its saturday!" She hung up the call reminding me. How can i forget it? It should be her who needs to prepare herself because whats in the coming for her, i am sure will blow her away.

"Oh ho! Papa dont worry! You are suhana bose dixit's father. You will
be fine." Suhana said making the collar of my shirt tidy. Sometimes
she acted like she was my mother and i her child. My little munchkin. If it was in my hands i would never let her go anywhere just keep her by my side.
"I hope so.By the way my angel is looking quite pretty today." I said kissing her cheeks.We were ready for what sonakshi assumed to be our Saturday's
long drive. But little did she know, we had some other plans. Suhana
wearing her new navy blue dress bought by her papa was sitting on my
cars bonnet trying to calm me down as we were waiting for sona to come.
I was fidling with my phone out of nervousness when i saw sona
coming.My jaw dropped. Damn! She looked gorgeous. And hot! She was
wearing a burgandy lace dress which was upto her knees with nude
stilettos. We had asked her to dress accordingly as we were going for
a dinner after the long drive.Just the 3 of us. Though she was
adamant that she had already prepared the dinner and we should not eat
unhealthy food of a restaurant but could she say no to two innocent
puppy faces ?
Suhana who was now chuckling at my situation closed my
mouth with her tiny hands and said "focus papa! I know she's looking
beautiful but dont divert your mind from the surprise.". I
straightened, Picked up my little partner and settled her carefully in
the back seat. I, then being a gentleman open the door for my lady and
we were off to our destination.
"I know you want to say those 3 magical words. I am all ears dear" i
smirked at sonakshi. She gave a tight fake smile and spoke "oh ! I so
much want to. JUST SHUT UP". I pouted at her.
In these 3months, I have told her a millionth times that i love her but she wouldn't budge. She wouldnt say it back. She would just tease and leave me disappointed. I hope i get to hear it today. We were right now at a roof top restaurant and to sonakshi's surprise i had called her family too. I
had even called my family members. So right now everyone was here.
Yup! Thats right! Boses and Dixits together. But everyone was all
smiles. Baba was trying to subdue his anger for suhana,i guess and
sonakshi's maa was her neutral self. My maa was trying to cope up with
surroundings and thanks to kids they were making the environment light
and happy. Sonakshi was glad to see this progress. Everyone was done
with dinner by now. My heart was beating faster now.Miles per second.
I stood up nervously and with me, my little munchkins, Golu ans Soha were ready with their jobs too. I glanced at sonakshi who just smiled though a
bit confused. I took slow steps to where maa and baba were seated.
Taking a deep breath, i went down on my knee attracting everyone's attention to me.
"Maa! Baba!" My voice first came out croaky, clearing my throat i continued "I know, out of a hundred things i have done, 95 of them
are mistakes. I couldnt prove myself to you guys. But after all these
years i have realised, its not just sonakshi whom i cant live without
, i am incomplete without you two too!" I said without looking into their eyes.

"maa! You have always supported me. Whatever i did , you forgave me. Will you keep supporting me forever? Will you keep loving this son of yours always? I promise, one day you will be as proud of me as you are of your other two kids."

I looked at her expectantly.Her eyes were twinkling with tears.Suhana
gave me the pink roses and i forwarded them to her. And as expected
she accepted them gladly and hugged me.

"Offcourse Dev. I already love you so much. And to tell you the secret i love you a little more than shona" she said breaking the hug. I teased sona by sticking out my tongue and she rolled her tears filled eyes.

I now turned to baba.
"Baba! Will you please accept me as your second son? I have done a lot
of mistakes but i have learned from them now. I would prove myself as
your son now. I would one day make you proud of myself i promise. Will
you accept me as your son? You can even run around in the house behind
me, hitting me , if i do something wrong just like you do to saurav.
Just be my mentor and bless me with your warmth?" I said everything
from my heart forwarding the white lilies i had brought for him. He
looked a little miffed. The little smile which i had vanished and my
little man, golu who had been capturing these moments all this while,
stopped.
"No no! This is not fair. " he said crossing his hands. "Asha gets
roses and me lilies? Partiality already?" He chuckled and i looked at
him shocked.
He held my shoulders,making me stand and accepting my flowers, he said
"get ready for a lot of scolding. Since i have two sons now, i need
to be more strict." I just hugged him, elated.

Baba finally accepted me. This was the biggest achievement. We broke the hug. I glanced at sonakshi who was literally sobbing right now, but she was smiling through her tears.

Golu and Suhana gave me a thumbs up and proceeded to my mother.
Its okay dev! You are good. I encouraged myself. I went on my knees
again. I will be needing a pain killer tonight. Maa looked at me
expressionless.

"Maa! You love the most right?" I asked and got her nod as an answer.

"Maa i love you so much too. And i respect you too. I wont ask you to accept sonakshi or suhana. I would ask you to accept me. Accept the Dev, i am today. I want you to accept your son who is a father now, who has other people in his life now. There is no doubt that i love you but i love sonakshi equally too. And i love Suhana and Golu even more than i love you both. I have maa-baba in my life too, whom i want to take care of the same way i want to take care of you. And maa, all these other people in my life wont snatch me from you neither will i stop loving you. Its just that i will love more people as much as i love you. Shouldnt you be proud of that maa?"I choked by the time i finished. Suhana handed me the yellow roses i had got for maa. I forwarded them to her.She was motionless, not uttering a word.

Dissappointed, i just got up to leave only to be stopped by her. She
took those roses from my hand and walked up to sonakshi. No maa! I
prayed to god that we dont get to see a face off again. But to my
surprise she offered them to sonakshi and said
" sonakshi! I know i have always been unfair to you and i am responsible for all your sorrows. I dont want to revive those memories. I just want to say
sorry and want to tell you that i will give my best shot this time.
7years was enough time for me to realise your importance in the dixit
house and in our lives. Will you give me a second chance? Lets both
team up together and do our bits to make it work?".
Sonakshi just hugged maa and sobbed in her embrace. I couldnt be more happier. I made sure that golu didnt miss to capture the moment i have been waiting for since years. I quickly ran upto them and invited myself into their hug. We broke the hug and i wiped maa ans sonakshi's wet
cheeks. Meanwhile suhana and golu, tugged me down through my shirt so
that i could reach upto their level.

"Papa!enough rona dhona. 'Her' turn now" suhana whispered in my ear.

"Yes bigcha! We have been waiting for it for so long now!" Golu whispered in other ear of mine.

I took a deep breath. Final move now.

Edited by MehakGera - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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ooohhh so sweet... love this a lot. eagerly wsit for nxt part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved it !! Wonderfully written 👏
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beautiful
update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely
Loved what dev said to Sonas parents...
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Wonderful update...loved it to the core👏
Beautiful piece of writing...

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