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_RS_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#61

Thanks for the pm di

Res

Edit: Aree darling di.. wese to I generally don't read stories where the characters of Dev n Sona are shown to be a lil different from the show, or they are shown younger but this one's an exception I guess. And I'm pretty excited for how you'll unfold the story, how will the things go wrong between Dev Sona, how'll Dev fall in love with Sona, how'll it be when these two "best friends" will kiss each other for the first time. EXCITED!

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Gayatri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: _RS_
Thanks for the pm di
Res

Radhs is back

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Sharica

@Sharica

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#63

Awesome start Gayu👏 Weekend boring hone se bhi bacha liya...

Bunny and Cheeku👍🏼

Ish to purani films type vamp hain..But 100 points to you...

Pucho kyu????

Kyunki Dev doesn't give damn about it🤗

But loved Dev and Sona's friendship...And jahan friendship hoti hain wahan main jaroor hoti hu...and Dev and Sona ki friendship to special hain...😳 Bahot special...

Natasha - GOD tumne to isko bilkul hi C grade bana diya..aur Dev iske chakkar mein kaise padh gaya...Sona ki sunega bhi nahi...pyar mein pagal panchi😒

Tootne do iska dil..tabhi maja aayega...Sona se ladega bhi Natasha je liye..Koi nahi...Sona ki life mein bhi koi le aana...

Aur dating ki explanation was fun...I love this teasing in friendship...

Aa usual will wait for next update...

Tk cr..

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

Liked the first chapter...Cant understand why Dev loves Natasha and not Sonakshi...but I liked their conversations...nice ..cute and innocent !!

Eagerly waiting for your next update...

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AnanyaGhosh

@AnanyaGhosh

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#65

Hello dii... Aa gyi.. Lekin der ho gyi... Kya karu i was studying... So first comm nhi hua.. Maaf kar Dena.. Yaar mujhe bura lagta hai ki main bolti hu lekin hota nhi pehla comm.. I do nt keep my words...

Chalo ur ff... Hmm... Kya bolu... First chap bht achha tha... Yess i admit it was nice... Lekin prologue sach mein daraona tha... Thats also true... Sona dev ki dosti bht sweet hai... Vry good... Loved thr bonding... And ish ish yaha bhi mirchi lagati hai... Achha hai dev uski baat nhi sunta... Yeh sahi kiya... Jay dixit ka character zyada nhi hua... Aage hoga i hope...

So nuts also thr... Yeh behuda ladki shaadi k bare mein soch rhi hai dev se... Hawww... No doubt sona dislikes her... And dev kya sach mein andha hai... Yeh sab samajhta nhi.. Boka chele... I kno too early par i hope yeh bdam wali jaldi nikal jaye inn dono k raaste se...

Now as u promised yes i liked d chappy.. Par fir bhi i would like to read more... Par filhal u hv got full marks... So be happy 😆😉

Do update soon...

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Devakshilover

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Posted: 8 years ago

#66

Aww this was so cute
Cheeku and bunny
And Ish will be Ish uske liye no comments
Loved the way dev helped sona and how sona wakes him up
Their scenes were adorable and pure joy
And ye Natasha to ekdum C grade maal nikli humare dev Babu NE Na jaane usme kya dekha and ye to uske pyaar me bilkul andha hai
Kuch happy updates ke baad Rona padega jab ye Dono juda honge