Devakshi FF - When Life Has Other Plans For You(clsd)~New Thread Crtd - Page 9

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Liked the first chapter...Cant understand why Dev loves Natasha and not Sonakshi...but I liked their conversations...nice ..cute and innocent !!

Eagerly waiting for your next update...

First of all thanku for commenting
I would like to say that for dev sona means purely friendship
We do have friends of opp gender right but we don't have a crush on all of them
So dev n sona have actually not imagined each other in that manner
Another 2 3 chapters will make the picture more clearer

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

Hello dii... Aa gyi.. Lekin der ho gyi... Kya karu i was studying... So first comm nhi hua.. Maaf kar Dena.. Yaar mujhe bura lagta hai ki main bolti hu lekin hota nhi pehla comm.. I do nt keep my words...

Chalo ur ff... Hmm... Kya bolu... First chap bht achha tha... Yess i admit it was nice... Lekin prologue sach mein daraona tha... Thats also true... Sona dev ki dosti bht sweet hai... Vry good... Loved thr bonding... And ish ish yaha bhi mirchi lagati hai... Achha hai dev uski baat nhi sunta... Yeh sahi kiya... Jay dixit ka character zyada nhi hua... Aage hoga i hope...

So nuts also thr... Yeh behuda ladki shaadi k bare mein soch rhi hai dev se... Hawww... No doubt sona dislikes her... And dev kya sach mein andha hai... Yeh sab samajhta nhi.. Boka chele... I kno too early par i hope yeh bdam wali jaldi nikal jaye inn dono k raaste se...

Now as u promised yes i liked d chappy.. Par fir bhi i would like to read more... Par filhal u hv got full marks... So be happy😆😉

Do update soon...

Tere first para pe itna kahungi ki no worries dear
Pehla comment aaye na aaye it doesn't matter
I will always search for ur comment n reply
Waise i reply to all the comments haina

Achha now coming to ff
Thanku for liking the 1st chappy
Isiliye kahaan tha pagli dont judge a book by its cover aage aage dekho hota hai kya

Nats aage aur bhi prapanch karegi
Aur bohot dhamaka karna hai use
Aur dev bhi jaroor sambhlega
Sona hai na use sambhalne keliye

Thanku teacher jee mujhe pass karne keliye
Will update soon n wait for your comments

Originally posted by: Devakshilover

Aww this was so cute
Cheeku and bunny
And Ish will be Ish uske liye no comments
Loved the way dev helped sona and how sona wakes him up
Their scenes were adorable and pure joy
And ye Natasha to ekdum C grade maal nikli humare dev Babu NE Na jaane usme kya dekha and ye to uske pyaar me bilkul andha hai
Kuch happy updates ke baad Rona padega jab ye Dono juda honge

Thanku ankita for commenting
Sachi bohot aacha laga aapka comment dekh

Sahi kahan dev n sona are adorable
Isshu is isshu
N nats ...use chodo she's not even in d picture

Overall enjoy the story n keep commenting
As i sd comments karo update paao

Originally posted by: moni160282

Ohh wow. Maaza aa gaya. Really excited to know who will fall in love first and how u will shape there lovestory.

Thanks for commenting dear
Will update soon
Will be glad if u like it

Originally posted by: Soumya21ag

are waah radhika dii

u r back

r u still watching krpkab ??

Mera pyaar use kheench laata hai sammy
Jaise tujhe exams ke time bhi le aata hai yahaan

Originally posted by: ketaki9narkhede

Wow di it's superb.

Cheeky and bunny that so cute,and that Natasha how can she talk mandir mein hoon when she is enjoying with another guy.

Thanku ketaki for liking my cheeku n bunny
Nats to hai hi besharam jhoot to bolegi hi

Originally posted by: A.K.Aggarwal

Awesome yaar
Bt i dreading d MU which will be created by nuts uff devakshi will separate bt hopes nt for long n nuts is such a she she dog wanna kill her n dev uff yaar yeh business world mein kaise survive karta hoga
Bt ek request plz send someone opposite sona to make dev delhi as well

Don't worry dear
Kuch galat nahi hoga hamare devakshi ke saath
N nuts juss frgt her
Sona ke opp...yeh to.abhi tak socha nahi hai maine

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

It was Awesome dii...main din mein ek baar IF par aati hun...aur aapka PM mil gaya...

Too good...

I loved Devakshi's friendship...

And this Ish...uska toh main khoon kar dun...

And Natasha is so evil...I can't believe ki duniya mein aisi ladkiyan bhi hoti hain...

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

Adi baccha hws studies going onnn
All well na????
Awww din mein ek baar if aayi aur mera pm mila
How cool

Nuts ke type ladkiyan hoti hai
Maine khud dekha hai
Ths girls do exists

All the best once again girl

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Mera pyaar use kheench laata hai sammy
Jaise tujhe exams ke time bhi le aata hai yahaan

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

<font color="#009933" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Pad liya mne Chappy pad liya</font>

<font color="#009933" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Aur m aa gyi comment thokne😆😆😆</font>

<font color="#009933" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Mast h chappy Gaddi!</font>

<font color="#009933" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Loved the way you talked abt Delhi ki Sardi😃</font>

<font color="#009933" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Delhi ke baare m inna accha sunkar accha lagA...beautifully described😳👏</font>

<font color="#009933" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">So coming back to the chapter</font>

<font color="#009933" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Devakshi ki friendship is superb!</font>

<font color="#009933" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Loved the way they have kept each other's pet names😳</font>

<font color="#009933" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">So Ishu is insecure idhar bhi🥱</font>

<font color="#009933" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">And Nats is just so characterless...</font>

<font color="#009933" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Par accha hai...Jab tak Story mein Villain na ho tab tak maza nhi aata😉</font>

<font color="#009933" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">And I'm waiting to read how Sona will protect Dev from Nats betrayal😉</font>

<font color="#009933" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Waiting 4 next chappy</font>

<font color="#009933" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Update soon😃</font>

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Cutie pie hii fiii

Aa gayi gaddi ki buddy aa gayi
Accha laga chappy bacche

Good good
Aur sahi kahan kahaani mein villian na ho to mazaa kahaan
Isiliye nats

Dont u worry dear
Sona dev ko bacha hi legi