Devakshi FF - When Life Has Other Plans For You(clsd)~New Thread Crtd - Page 58

Originally posted by: write2neetha

a nice update.. but dev is very rude aubodhro types.. I feel bad for Sona

Dev will be rude dear
He's a dark character in this fiction for few more chapters

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Gini dii
Now i know why i felt incomplete yest
It was coz u hd not commented

Coming to the update
Yes even I'm not scared of the dark dev
Infact i love writing his character n dialogues
Infact trust me i can imagine dev doing all such things

As far as their facade infront of dev's family is concerned
Its all because dev wants to torture sona himself
He has never stooped down to a level where he would take his mother's help to torture sona
Infact on a second thought he doesnt even get along with his mother well

Will be updating soon dii
Thanks for commenting

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Disaster 😲
Awesome bhi bol rahe ho disaster bhi
Dark fiction ne sabki batti gul kar di hai
Abhi picture baaki hai mere dost

HAHAHAHAH

Just loved this amazing update... :D

Originally posted by: LoveAnushka

Yes, Yes, Yes!!!!!!!!!

I read it!!!!

All chapters!

Maa kasam, mujhe itnna gussa aa raha hai Nats par ki use nuts main zehar dekar maar daloon!

She cheated our Dev & he doesn't deserve her.

Who toh Sona, asli sona hai. 😊

Itna achha dost shayad hi mile bunny ko as in Chiku! Choo cheewt names!🥱

Aur who Ishu ko maaro goli is one thing I repeat. Idiot, janam ki maari hui aulaad! Samjhti kya hai apne aap ko. kahin ki rani, maharani.

Why everyone are hel bent on destroying Sona & Dev's life. Specially Sona!

Oh Poor Sona, Bichari! Bunny pata nahi aisa kyu kar raha hai? Apni Chiku ko hurt karke use bhi maza nahi aa raha still... he is all for believing that crap letter.

That letter is all a plan of Ishu & by Nats(nuts).

I felt bad seeing Dev forcing himself on Sona in that thought that Sona has did all this & now she wants him, physically.

But Dear Dev, Sona isn't someone like a wh**e who will just throw herself on any man in physical pleasures, she wanted a love story & she is really horrified see him in this state & disastorous...

Ab patanahi, Gayu Di, aap kab Dev ko realize karwaogi because agar Sona ko pata chala then she might be in problem...

Ek baat is that I'm totally enjoying this FF... I'm like now wanting ki Dev sees Sona's vulnerability by even forcing or anything, I mean he is just seeing himself, he needs to acknowledge her, her tears...

She is same just he changed into beast. Which is irrational without knowing the truth...

I hope it gets crystal clear soon!

Update soon Gayu Di!!!

Love,

Anushka

P.S. Sorry, reply kuch zyada bada hogaya!

Yess yess anush
Finally tune padh hi liya
Par yeh kya
Itni khushi hui tumhe ki itna bada comment likh diya 😆

Nahi nahi
Nuts ko jeher nahi dena
Cid pakadlegi
Use kuve mein dhakka dedo
Matter finish

Isshu ko goli maaro danda maaro
Jo mann mein aaye maaro
Meri bala se

Ek baat batao
Hum sabse jyaada gussa kisse hote hai
Jisse hum sabse jyaada pyaar karte hai rght
To ab bass tum samajh jao

Dev ko realise hoga jaroor hoga my red
Btw tum khud bhi to dark fiction likhne waali thi
To u shd love this one

Waiting for ur update
Thanks for commenting

Originally posted by: Mishti_94

<font color="#660099" size="3">Wow!</font>

<font color="#660099" size="3">What an update Gayu Di!</font>

<font color="#660099" size="3">Hila ke rakh diya bilkul!</font>

<font color="#660099" size="3">Dev is being terrible to Sona!</font>

<font color="#660099" size="3">I feel so sad for her. Bechari bhala karney gayi thi. Kya se kya ho gaya.</font>

<font color="#660099" size="3">Waiting for the next chapter!</font>

<font color="#660099" size="3">Waise Di, I have a question. How long is this FF going to be? Matlab approx kitney chapters hongey?</font>

<font color="#660099" size="3">You see, I'm waiting for them too fall in love and understand each other and also for Dev to know the truth soon. Isisliye pooch rahi hoon!😆</font>

Mishh ko maine itna hila diya ki usne badle mein 2 stories likh daale 😆 bhagwaan kare aap aise hi hilte raho

Kyun mera ff khatam karne pe tuli hui ho
Nahi khatam karungi jaldi
Likhti jaungi likhti jaungi
Aur tum sabko padhna hoga
Samjhi 😡 😆

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Chanda raani badi sayani
Padhegi padhegi meri kahaani
Jaldi unres karo

Originally posted by: Sharica

You felt incomplete?? How sweet of you Gayu😳

You knw infact I imagined Dev doing all those thinga and imagined his room in the show, i imagined Ishwari's face as well when Sona opened the door...😆

Dev still cares for Sona, asjed her to have food...then rather than asking her to sleep on couch or on floor, he let her sleep on the bed and he asked Sona to sleep as next day she has to submit her project...not bad..

I knw he will get worse in coming chapters but still I have a soft corner for him...😉

And by doing this he is punishing Ish as well...I am loving that...he is good with Sona infront of all...This is the best part..

Anyways you would be in office abhi? Whr r u from?

Yess gini dii
I missed u

Bingo
I imagined that too
Shah looked dapper in my imaginations i swear

Yes my dev is caring self
He cares for sona
How sweet of him na

Yes indeed he'll get worst
But still we r gonna love him
Like we love him in d show isn't it

Yess he wants to hurt sona but doesn't want others to do so
Fair deal

I'm from goa dii
Aur aap