Devakshi FF - When Life Has Other Plans For You(clsd)~New Thread Crtd - Page 163

Originally posted by: simplesweety1

hehheheeh! loved it yaaar! update soon!

Thanku somuch
Will update soon

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

dev ne sona ki class le li 😆
Amazing
plZ update soon
thanks for pm

Haan sona diii
Dev ne sona ki class aakhir le hi liii
Thanku for the comment 😃

Originally posted by: A.K.Aggarwal

I actually thought I missed a chappy or something bcoz of ur start. N it was so much fun

Plzz ek request hai plz write d whole thing as if they don't disclose their relationship in d office n full on flirtin n stuff in d office with ppl confused like an affair for them it wld be so much fun

Waitin

Well anjani
As off now i dont think it will be advisable for them to disclose their relationship to their staff
So all i would say is let them carry on with their facade
And lets all enjoy their flirty banters

Originally posted by: dakshasharma

Really nice update...when I start to read chapter, I felt ...am I missed previous chapter... Because of starting...

But really appreciate yor work on this it was good... And Pls continue...

Next chapter kab daine wali hai dear... Can't wait..

Thanku so much dear!!!!!!!
Agla chapter jald deni ki koshish karungi
Stay tuned

Originally posted by: Rhy2015

Ok so Gayu let me tell u from the beginning wat happened to me, wen I started reading this chapter...

First two lines I was like 😲
Then next two lines I was like 😕
Then whole stanza I was like 👎🏼

Then I went to chapter 16 jo mujhe laga k main pakka miss kar diya hai..Lenin jab dekha to i was like 🥱

Main Sochu yeh ho kya raha hai... 😆
Fir Maine apni akal lagayi aur story neeche se padni shuru ki... 😆
Thanks to u...itna ghumane k liye 😆
Coming to ur update mujhe na abhi se hi next update padna hai coz yeh blinds down karke badi curiosity jaga di hai.. 😆
Very very nice n mind boggling update 👏

Ok now let me tell u ki what did i feel reading ur reply
🤣

Wah kya dimaag lagaya aapne
Neeche se upar padha
Wah jii wah

Blinds down to hui hai par har baar aage jo hoga it'll be totally unexpected!!!!!!
So wait n watch my quack quack buddy
It'll be fun

Originally posted by: Razzy03

I can't stop laughing
When I started reading I thought I have missed chapters
I went back to index to check 😲
But no, I haven't missed anything 😆
I started reading again. I was bowled 😆
Excellent writing. Too much excited for upcoming chapters 👏 👏 👏

Thanku dear!!!!!!!!!
Glad u enjoyed the story n my writing

Originally posted by: randomramblings

yaar,.. bahut achha chapter tha. so now dev is going to make sona feel restless and jealous at the same time. wish his proximity with tina,makes sona blurt the truth that she started liking him in a romantic way, not platonic like they shared till now . i am not sure if dev already has romantic inclinations or not, i would love to see some devakshi moments anytime😉

Thanku jii thanku
Dev is going to make her fully jealous now
lekin rahul bhi to hai dev ko jelo feel karane keliye

Ab dev pehle bolega yaa sona
Yeh to waqt hi batayega
N yess u will gget lot of devakshi moments in future

Originally posted by: JessyJane

This chapter was too cute...when I started reading it, I thought I actually missed the previous chapter..so I actually went back to read the previous chapter

I want that romance to come back hopefully soon in devakshi life...

Thanku so much for ur cute comment dear

Well all of are waiting for that romance to be rekindled in Devakshi's life
And it will be happening soon

Originally posted by: flowers321

😕

Aur nahi to kya
Tum sab daud bhaag ke pages poora kar dete ho
Phir mujhe daudna padta hai update likhne keliye

Na dimaag chalta hai na hi haath
😭 😭
Isiliye iss baar no target
Jab likh lungi tab update doongi

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

Aur nahi to kya
Tum sab daud bhaag ke pages poora kar dete ho
Phir mujhe daudna padta hai update likhne keliye

Na dimaag chalta hai na hi haath
😭 😭
Isiliye iss baar no target
Jab likh lungi tab update doongi

ok 😭 kitna daant lia mujhe 😆