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@TwinFlames

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#1171

just one word.. "Brilliant".. very well written.. dev slayed.. wow 👏 hopefully ab devakshi k problems sort out ho Jaye.. & ishwari 😡

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@_RS_

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#1172

Finally finally finally ... He has got to know the complete truth..wuhu.. I'm so loving it how he wants to take the best care of her n wants to do everything that'll make her feel better.

Now waiting for how she'll forgive him n fall for him as well. For Dev, he's already falling for her I guess. Which is so good.

You come up with such amazing stories ya dii..

Waiting for the next chapter

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Heshine

@20701

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#1173

Wowo...!! I was juz waiting fa this part...! Finally u have posted...! Wow...! This was such an amazing part..👏👏.! The episode was such awesome...and beautifully written too...!

Eagerly waiting fa the next part di ...!

And this was something like the real story written by professional author... Such fabulously portrayed...! I'm awe with ur writing skills...!

Really gaining curious to know about the next part...! What would Ishwari do now...!!????

Oh...pls post the next so soon...!

Have no patience to read the next but would wait fa u to update as soon as possible. !

The dialogues were also good but if possible pls add few English sentences too so that it would be easy to understand the track of dialogues...

Else. ..it was perfect. ..and juz perfect...

Pls post the next soon di...!

And yeah thanks for the pm...😊

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#1174

Gayudiii...

Super duper fantastic update dii...

What an amazing chapter...

Dev realised all his mistakes n what others did with him...

Finally sona reacted...great...

Waiting to know what will happen...

Continue soon dii...

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Devakshilover

@Devakshilover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#1175

Wow what an update
Loved the was dev carried sona in his arms and Jay ko EK badla hua dev dekhne ko Mila
Loved the fact that dev is realising all the mistakes he has done
and us ladke ki to band baj gai
the way Dev calmed an angry sona was awesome
And last but not the least Ishwari ki dhulai was mind blowing and hume 15 saal pehle ka raaz bhi pata chal gaya

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Shaun

@Jade0001

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#1176

Two culprits dealt with today

but the painful part is that Ishwari had always felt Sona was the cause of her daughter's death always hating her trying her level best to get her away from Dev but because of her lies Dev forcefully married Sona then Ishwari organizing those clothes for Sona to wear at the party and getting the bedroom arranged had all just triggered Dev's rage and he misbehaved with Sona but now Ishwari has also lost her son because hating Sona was understandable but trying to make her look characterless was just horrible and a jealous move to hate someone does not mean to get involved in their life but here Ishwari did everything to tarnish Sona's name in Dev's eyes while she at the same time kept him in the dark about Natasha it was Dev himself who had found out everything now Ishwari telling him about Natasha makes no difference at all

Sona on the other is filled with fear and anger she wants to go back to her house as she fears Dev will again misbehave with her but now he has realized the truth and he already feels ashamed for not trusting his cheeku

waiting now to see how will Dev and Sona take future steps what will be the factor that will bring them together as friends again

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Gayatri

@Gayu_K

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#1177

Originally posted by: Anjali333
Kab reply doge di??

Aaj bass thodi der mein

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Kuku_92

@Kuku_92

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#1178

Hey gayatri di...😊 Tanu here..

Again very well written and well presented chapter by u 👏.

I really liked that deal part done by Dev to relax her 😆.

It's really sad to see how ishwari in her misunderstandings ha s spoilt sona's as well as her own son's life...But we know how this will turn out to be a beautiful life long journey for both of them 😉

Now waiting to see how sona's parents will react when they will come to know about the truth and specially aisa kya hoga jisse sona ko apne bunny se pyar ho jaiga...

Update soon...

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write2neetha

@write2neetha

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#1179

Beautiful update yet again... So finally all seems to be going good... Their journey was so emotional how he remembered his old cheeku.. n the reaction by Sona after getting up was genuine I guess.. how she got calmed wen she heard him saying cheeku... So the reason for ishwari hating sona was nehas death.. next update soon plz