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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: A.K.Aggarwal

It was super duper n awesome
It wld hv been very difficult for u to write such a scene where he was tryin to force himself and their intense faceoff
Dev ki realisation was nice bt u cant undo wht u hv done
Thank god dev mows d entire truth toh ab all hv to face his wrath
Bt sona is his priority n sona ki condition really gave me tears as its more painful jab a person whom u know n trust does something like this to u
She has really turned into a dead corpse without any emotions she didnt even feel d pain due to those bruises as her soul is in deep pain
Well jab dev sona ko mana raha tha it was as if talkin to a child bt his cheeky was like a baby to him
He has a up hill task to manofy her as sona has really zoned out on him
But I really want him to suffer like this he deserves it
I am so dying to read it
Ghar Jana hai as in like his home or hers as I really think she meant her home bt there wahan dev ne bijoy ke saath jo kiya will bijoy accept her n dev will feel more guilty
I think she shld go far frm dev like dev ke father me kaha tht he can't stay away so he will feel more pain
I am bein a sadist now

Jaldi jaldi update plzzz
Cant wait as d plot has really thickened




thanku Anjani for commenting
yaar Dev ko ab sach pata chala hai
use aur kya tadpaana
bechara khud guilt mein tadap raha hai
itna gussa na karo uspar
maaf kardo bichare ko
will update soon dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy




Hey Anki
yeh kaise hua
I din pm u?????
gayu sorry hai dear
agli baar se yeh galti bilkul nahin hogi

par phir bhi aap aaye aur aapne comment kiya uske liye thanku
finally ab khush na
churail ka sach saamne jo aa gaya


Is baar ke liye you are forgiven but next time se ye galti nahi honi chahiye Lol 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

Chillax Gaddi

I don't have any issue if u don't reply
Apan ki life toh set hai😆😆😆
Main padai ki tension nahi leti reply ki kya lungi!🤣🤣
Arrey aish karo Gaddi!
And get well soon😃




Cutie
pitna hai tujhe
padhai ki tension lena shuru kar de
yaad haina
gaddi ke gadde ki ijjat ka sawaal hai😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: simplesweety1

Mind blowing! I HATE DEV.



Dont hate him dear
bichara waise bhi pareshan hai
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 20701

Hey..! I would say that this is the first time I'm

Commenting in ur works but I would make sure that
I read each and every part of it...! To be honest...all the epi was
Juz splendid as it could be👏👏...flawless..I'm falling off words to
Describe it yet I'm building up myself to appreciate u..!
Seriously, an amazing work.👏👏...it work is really applaudable...
I must say..!
But rather I have a mild obligation...that hope u could clear it up .
Moreover its like my request...! That as the story was very
Interesting from the first ...but the dialogues in only Hindi making
Me lose few of those as I was not good in Hindi. !
If u would try to give fewer dialogues in English too...it would
Much more easy to read ...as I don't want miss even the
Dialogues as like ur story...!
Juz hats off to ur work...!
If to be the dialogues in English accompanying with Hindi too..
It would be really an amazing ...as even the dialogues matters..
Hope u wil take in concern...its juz my request..!
Anyways...! Pls post the next so soon...that I can't wait to read ur
Next part pls ..!👏




thanku so much dear
feeling great
another silent reader comes to fore

I know my hindi dialogues make it really difficult for some of you to understand
but what to do I'm better expressing my self in hindi
but will try to make it more of english or alteast put up a translated version in brackets
thanku so much for commenting

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Soumya21ag

Dii I will come here soon
Love u for understanding me




sammy😳😳😳
no worries dear
exams ke baad to yahi aana hai tumhe
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Devakshilover


Is baar ke liye you are forgiven but next time se ye galti nahi honi chahiye Lol 😉



jo hukum mere aaka
point is already noted😆😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
haila 150 pages ho gaye yaar
thoko taali
🥳
lets party


🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy



Anu ek secret main bhi batau
teru Gayu dii bhi yahaan aane se pehle ek silent reader hi thi
baakiyon ke stories padhti thi aur sirf like karti thi

par yahaan aane ke baad sab itne acche log mile ki mujhe saamne aana hi pada
n i'm glad ki I came here
atleast yeh to pata chala ki mere andar writing ka keeda hai😆😆😆



Wow kitne similarities hai humme.. Main bhi like karti thi aapke stories ko... Par comment nhi karti thi.. Sharam aati thi.. Nayi thi na..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Congrats gayu di... 150 pgs... Nachho...

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