Devakshi FF - When Life Has Other Plans For You(clsd)~New Thread Crtd - Page 107

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

Done reading chap 11

Wow!!👏

Chapter is amazing!😉

Finally Dev encountered with the truth

But I guess it had been too late..

My heart went out to Sona for her indifferent attitude towards Dev asking for forgiveness😭

Uff!..I can't even imagine the pain she had gone thru in the night!...others must have comitted suicide if they had been in a similar situation but Sona acted brave and fought back as much as she can!👏⭐️

Waiting to.see how's Dev gonna revive Sona's real self-the bubby, chirpy , and a sweet girl she was😳

Update soon Di😃

Originally posted by: ketaki9narkhede

Diii I hate u why did u stop here.Tears were streaming down my cheeks while reading the chap.god Sona was soo so helpless.I can't even think of that.

Loved it ,plz update fast

~KET@K!

Originally posted by: Erinasingh69

Omggg it was beyond expectation n that's y I call you awesome writter hence again you proved me right 😳

Thanku so much Eri😳😳

Finally vo ghari aa hi gyi jiska mai intezaar kr rhi ty. ..what a timing ek taraf khatri k show m aane se pagal ho gyi hu aur ab tmhre iss twist se kaboo khud pe rha na hasti hmari khone lgi shayad yhi h. ..😉 in previous chap I was disappointed with dev but in today's chap I'm feeling bad for him too .I guess this is only called destiny when you hate something it always come behind you but when you want that same after sometime it go very far way from you 😭 exactly what happened with dev n sona. .one song for both :-"kuch pal to thehaar jao na ya phir laut ke aaona yun kente nhi alvida. ..

I know Khatri is back in the show n here Dev knows the truth

double dhamaka

u also felt bad for Dev naa

dekha kahaan tha na maine

u cant hate him just like that

one request from you please if possible then in next chap pen down their bond, their awesome time n their sweet time which they spend together before nat entry n spoiling everything as their memory aur flashback I want to remember all those moments -request from my side if possible then try to fulfil my request. ...

ok will try

but if it doesnt go with my storyline then I will omit it ok

hope u dont mind

N thank you very veryyy much for this fabulous chap with breathtaking concept i not only liked it but thoroughly loved it from core of my heart

For this a lovely hug to awesome writter from my side 🤗

❤️ aaj to mjhe vhi feeling aa rhi h dance krne ki jaise sona nekiya thaafter dev proposed her but this eri can't dance 😆

Goshhh mai kitni happy hu I can't even express in word I wish mai bhi thora bht pen down kr pati to definitely batati 😉

Chalo now I will go to come back soon for another awesome chap till then take care n keep smiling

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itni tareef na karo Eri jee

kahiin main behosh na ho jau

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Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

Its absolutely okay di.. Np.. Zyada stress na lo.. Aapke headache ka reason pta hai mujhe.. Khair chodo.. Zyada prareshan na ho and try to relax.. Lambi saans lo...

And reply mil jayega hume..

And aap na chup rho.. Bht achha update tha.. Forcing scene k bawajoot bhi sab ne aapko bht pyaar kiya and iss update ko saraha... Matlab samajhti ho?? Iska yeh matlab nhi ki yeh log aapse pyaar karte hai.. Matlab yeh hai ki apki writing se pyaar karte hai.. Apki imagination se karte hai.. Iss duniya mein sirf main and sonu hi aapse andar hi amdar pyaar karte hai.. U know why..

aww Anu tere iss comment keliye meri taraf se

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Now relax and listen to baby ko baas pasand hai... Lol..

Originally posted by: shri123

Superb update, was impatiently waiting for it. It was the best chapter. Thank u for this update.

Originally posted by: Erinasingh69

It's absolutely ok sweety not take much stress just chilax 😛

N btw how do you know chap kaisa tha we have right to decide na whether it's great aur ok ok ??? but trust me if I have to choose btw ur whole chap best part of this ff I will go with this one bcse u pen down every emotion very beautifully n very hearttouching too ...

N we don't mind if you can't reply ..if you are not feeling well drop it itna to hm kr hi skte h n compensation m next update jaldi post kr dena we will be more happy 😆 so agree? ??😛

Take care

Have a lovely sleep

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Originally posted by: Sharica

Gayu dear..how can you say ki chapter itna acha nahi tha?? Hum sab jis din ka wait kar rahe the vo aa gaya..to ye to best chapter hua...and reply ka fikar not...apna dhyan rakho and jyaada stress mat lo..

Tk cr dear...gudnyt

Originally posted by: Devakshilover

Wow Gayu Di
Maza agaya update padhakar
It was shocking to see Dev forcing himself on sona but I am glad he realised what a grave crime he had committed
And wow Churail Natasha ka aur Ishwari ka sach dev ko pata chal gaya yahoo ab bajegi sabki band
But I cried at the last part bechari sona shock me chali gai and the way he was trying to make her speak 😭
Agla part update karna jaldi and you didn't pm me😔

Originally posted by: write2neetha

Yaaay... 😊 What a dhamakedar chapter.. dhamakedar confrontation bw dev n sona then that thappad... Ouch ..

Thanku dear

thappad bhi pasand kiya yaar aap sabne😆

But dev getting to know abt nats n ish truth was most dhamakedar.. ek hi chapter mein dino ka bhaanda phoota.. 👏 .. n dev searching for cameras.. tat was hilarious..

haan I know

par kya karta bichara

usne actually web series ki baat sach jo maan li thi

tho dev ab Sona ka Sach jaan Gaya ki wo kitni innocent hai.. n after his disgusting behavior she has become living corpse 😭 tat is soo sad.. hope jaldi se dev use phiirse normal bana de n apni saari galtiyon ka maafi maange.. waiting for next chapter... Want to know ish reaction after seeing her plan has backfired n dev has again become old bunny for his cheeku..

Dev will set everything right very soon dear'

bas use aur mujhe thoda sa time dedo

phir sab theek hoga

jaldi update do... N sorry for late comment...

please don't say sorry dear

will try to update soon