Devakshi FF - When Life Has Other Plans For You(clsd)~New Thread Crtd - Page 105

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh

Yaasss yaaasss yaaasss... Zara sa jhoom lu main arey ha re ha re ha.. Zara sa ghoom lu main arey ha re ha re ha.. Aa tujhe chum lu main.. Arey bilkul ha re baba ha... Hahaha.. Yehi gaana yaad aa rha hai... Sach samne aa gya.. Sach samne aa gya.. Yipeee... Yipeee... Aaj main upar.. Aasman neeche.. Aaj main aage... Zamana hai peeche...

bade gaane gaye jaa rahe hai Anu😆

neeche aa jaa jyaada na jhoomo

Okay fine.. Now update.. Well yeh toh koi thriller movie ka climax ho gya... Matlab dard badla sab ek saath.. Achha hai.. Dev sona argument was bang on and spot on.. And uske baad dev ne jo kiya it was bad.. He forced her.. But its good he later on realised it... That he had went over overboard...

yaar sach kahoon poori story mein agar kuch sabse difficult raha haina mere liye likhna to woh hai iss story ka yeh part...the confrontation...the heated confrontation

itna sabkuch imagine karna padta hai ki how would Sona react, what will be Dev's counter reaction...god it was difficult...and the infamous forcing scene, ise bhi badi mushkil se incorporate kiya taking care ki jyaada overboard bhi na lage par jiss cheez keliye likha jaa raha hai uss purpose ko serve kare...

thank god it was liked by all...

Finally nuts ka sach samne aya.. Bhagwan k puja karungi aab main... Hari om hari om... Jab se start hua yeh ff tabse minnatte kar rhi hu hey bhagwan.. Nuts ka sach le aao samne... Aa gya.. And bonus bhi diya aapne di.. Saath saath devil ish ka sach bhi aa gya samne.. Yayay... So happy...

Nuts ka sach to saamne aana hi tha...jhoot kitna bhi bada ho sach ko nahin chupa sakta...

maine kahan tha ki sabr karo sab theek hoga...

ab bolo kar diya na ek jhatke mein sab thik😉😉

Sona ko kya hua di??? I know uske saath dev ne bht kuch kiya hai.. Par i hope woh jaldi se thik ho jaye.. Uske dimaag pe iska asar hua hai na??? Usko jaldi thik kar dena.. And dev toh hai hi usko thik karne k liye.. Sona jaldi maaf nhi karegi.. Par u remember na i told u i want an emotional talk bet them... Woh dena pls..

Sona filhal shock mein hai jo according to me hona bhi chahiye...

anybody else doing this to her would not make such a difference

but Dev doing this has hurt her on another level...

hope to get her back soon...

Aab dev ne bhi meri baat sunli.. Finally.. Hit list taiyaar kar li.. Nuts hotel boy maata and vicky.. Vik ka sach toh mujhe bhi janna hai.. Kaha gya woh dhokebaaz...

haan haan ab to Dev sabko sabak sikhayega...

aakhir sawaal uski Cheeku ka hai...

how can he keep quite...

Bhai aab toh dev ish ka rishta gya and woh jo 15 saal puraba sach hai that will add fire to the fuel..

15 saal purana sach bhi jald saamne aayega

again I would say have patience...

Par Di once again.. U know how much we love dev.. Saza dena par itna nhi ki roona aa jaye.. I know u emote emotional scenes also well par fir bhi.. Dev sona ko jaldi ek kar dena...

ofcourse dear...sabse jyaada pyaar to main Dev se karti hoon

use kaise jyaada din udaas dekhungi...

sab kuch time se sahi ho hi jayega...

Waiting for ur next tod phod update...

Originally posted by: Sharica

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Aww Gini Dii😳

Awesome, amazing, beautiful...finally truth is out...

Apni khushi pe thoda break lagate hue aate hain chapter pe...

Thanku So Much itna appreciation😭😭

So finally tigress Sona in action..she was superb today...the way she gave back to Dev was clap worthy infact seeti maar dialogues jo seedhe Dev ke dil pe lage and Dev ke andar ka jaanwar bahar aa gaya...he was too brutal today but I think that was required for the story to move ahead...Sona was ready to forgive him before Indore trip but after Dev's cruelty this time and Sona's present condition...it makes sense as to why you have shown this part...

Thank God ki mere saare readers itne mature hai ki jaante hai ki yeh scene was necessary for the story to move ahead...

aapne bilkul theek kahan kii Sona ne aaj jo Dev ko karara jawaab diya hai usse uske andar ka jaanwar bahar aa gaya...

par Gini Dii dekha jaye to mard aise hi hote hai na...

jab koi ladki unhe sach ka aaina dikhaye to bardasht kahaan hota hai unse...

If truth have been out in front of Dev before his inhumane behaviour, he would have apologised and may be the would have divorced but now Dev has to heal Sona...she is mentally broken at the moment...The person whom you trusted madly has given you unforgettable scars..its now a tough task for Dev to bring Sona back to her lively self...I knw he will do that...I trust Dev...

Exactly...

agar Dev ko sab pehle hi pata chal jaata to jyaada se jyaada kya hota...

he would have divorced her and gone away from her...

what next.????...he would have never got her back in his life

but now he's bound to nurse her back to life and she will always remain a part of his life forever...

Ab jo line se band bajega Natasha, ish aur vo hotel boy ka...bus maja hi aa jayega...

Soch jab Dev ne Sona ke saath itna bura kiya to in sab ka kya hoga..Vo Sona jo Dev ki best friend, Dev ki jaan thi..uske saath aisa kiya to..to in teeno ka kya hoga??? I can imagine..amd by god imagine karke hi itna maja aa raha hain...

just imagine...

uski Cheeku , jo uski jaan hua karti thi...uski jindagi barbaad karne mein ek min nahin laga use

ab inn sabka kya haal karega woh yeh to hum imagine hi kar sakte hai...

Also, ab Dev apni cheeku ko kitna pamper karega...uska kitna dhyan rakhega...usko uski life vapas karwga..usko uska dost bunny vapas milega, and uska pyar bhi...

cheeku deserves all his attention now...

ab satana ho gaya...laad karna bhi to banta hai...😉

Waiting for all this to happen...

Thank you for this chapter Gayu..I am so happy...

Tumhare FF se itna emotionally attach ho gayi hu ki aisa lag raha hain ki mere saamne ye sab ho raha hain and I want to stop this..but Gayu ne kaafi kuch theek kar diya hain...

arrey aap kya main khud isse attach ho gayi hoon

somedays be there jab mera kisi cheez mein mann nahin lagta

bass likhne ka mann karta hai...

Waiting for Sona to get well soon, then Dev and Sona's heart to haert talk...and most awaited dhulai of nats and Ish...then Devakshi falling in love and then jo main bhul gayi wo sab...Gayu, tujhe to sab pata hain na..

all this will be put in place slowly slowly...

hadbadahat mein I don't want to miss out on any details...

Running to read the chapter again...is chapter pe to second comment bhi banta hain..jo main aaj raat ko dungi...guest aa rahe hain aaj..so midnight tak you will see second comment...

I will be waiting for ur second comment diii

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Arey waah!

Jhappi paao di🤗

Aaj to maza hi aa gaya😃

Sari ki sari wishes poori ho gayeen...

Bada hi mast chapter tha

I loved ur surprise 😊

jhappi paani hai...

aajao phir🤗

Indore trip ne to kamaal hi kar diya...

Ishu ne kya sochkar un dono ko bheja tha

Or kya ho gaya😆

Ishu ka plan haina

as always ulta hi padega...

Dev ne to bechari sona ke sath kitna bura kiya

And finally ye dev ka sona par last torture tha...

Ab to ishu or nats ki baari hai😉

I know yaar bura kiya

but ab use pachtawa bhi to ho raha hai...

Dekh liya! Dekh liya!

dev ne apni aankhon se nats rohan ko dekh liya..

Sona pe to believe nahi kiya tha.

Accha Hai is baar apne aap hi dekh liya..

ab sab khud se dekh liya na'

ab yakeen ho gaya use Sona pe

Ye to aur bhi accha tha ki dev ne unki baaten sun li...

Aur usey wo letter ka golmal samajh aa gaya

Ishu ka real face bhi dev ke saamne aa gaya.

Ab dev to ishu nats ka band bajaega🥳

Aur humare wishes poori hongi

Bada irritate kr liya un dono ne hume

Ab tu unki baari aayegi

yehi to plan tha

ek teer se do shikaar

aa gaya na ishu aur nuts ka sach saamne

woh bhi ek saath

Di yaad hai na nats ka kya haal karna hai?

public demand yaad hai na😉

Aur ishu ne bhi bhut tang kar liya

Uski bhi acchi dhulai karna...

Hum sabko khush kar dena

haan haan don't u worry

sab yaad hai

bada royal kuch hoga

dhulayi personified...

Ab delhi jaakar...dev in sabki naak me dum karega

I think ab 15 saal purana raaz bhi khul jaayega

Akhir hume bhi to pata chale...aise kya hua tha jo ishu sona se itni nafrat karti hai..

Aur haan ab to dev ka redemption bhi shuru hone wala hai...

That will toso interesting

naak mein dum to karega

par pehle use Sona ko theek bhi to karna hai

ab dekhte hai ki sab kaise karta hai...

I m very much excited gor the upcoming track...

Jaldi jaldi update karna is baar bhi...

To kab de eahe ho next chaptet...

Kal yaa parso?😉

iss baar na thoda time lagega...

but as usual rocking update milega...

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

this is superb ..loved it
dev was as cruel as he could be ..but he got to know the whole truth ...
ishwari to gayi ...
lets see how he heals back his sona
updaye soon
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

It was Amazing...

Sach mein, ek hi part mein sab kuch badal diya...

But how can Dev try to force himself on her...??

I am glad that he knows the truth...

But poor Sona...she turned silent...

Pls cont soon

And thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: randomramblings

waah, finally natasha and ishwari's truth is out after the much needed damage. the only way dev would feel forever remorseful is because of him trying to force himself on her. had he not gone to that extreme and got to know the truth, he would probably apologize to her and her family, divorce her and try to move out of her life. now because of his deed she is lifeless, he will be there with her forever and the guilt will consume him.

yess...dev will forever feel remorseful for ill treating Sona

but he will overcome his guilt and set things right soon

as u said if he had known the truth earlier there was no way in which Sona would be back in his life

but all we want is to see them together forever right...

as raj said, the only person who can heel dev is sona, it will be role reversal now, the only person who can heel sona will be dev, their bond will get more stronger in due course of time.

indeed their bond will only get stronger with time...

good writing, you brought in the aggressiveness in dev, damage to sona, and the death blow of truth all within a few hrs. great going.

Thanku so much dear😳

Originally posted by: moni160282

U have penned down this chapter so beautifully. I cried with sonakshi and I could imagine what she must be going through. U are an amazing writer. Plz next update jaldi karna.

Originally posted by: Rhy2015

Yayyayyay!!!
Finally the truth is out...as far as I knw Dev...Natasha n Ishwari ki khair Nahi... 😕

Felt really bad for Sona...
M biting my nails with anxiety k ab kya hoga...
Sona wapis to Nahi chali jayegi apne ghar...
Jo Bhi ho jaldi jaldi batana...
Once again a beautiful chapter n wonderfully written by u 👏
Din bright kar diya!!!! 😛

Originally posted by: alind713

Awesome update
Waiting for the next part.