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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Maaneet_Devaksh

OMG! its amazingly beautiful sonali šŸ‘


Thanks Dear😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: cancerian87

Lovely poem šŸ‘ hope they get reunite soonšŸ˜’


Thanks Bisma Di😊
Me too hope the same!šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
This is so beautiful dear
it really touched my heart
both are in so much pain yet don't want to share
keep writing
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Anjali333

Wonderful sonašŸ‘
So beautiful poem...
I could feel the pain you are trying to show..

Keep writing more😃


Thanks Anj!😳
Glad that u liked it!šŸ˜‰
Sure I will!😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Devakshilover

This is so beautiful dear
it really touched my heart
both are in so much pain yet don't want to share
keep writing



Thanks Ankita Di for ur kind words!šŸ˜‰
Glad that u liked it!😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
OH Sonali...such an apt and emotional poem...
You know what I imagined???

It was like Devakshi are standing facing each other and their hearts are talking...as audience we are hearing these lines which their hearts are reciting word by word...ā¤ļø No words coming out of mouth, its just their hearts...for the world around them, they are just looking at each other but inner feelings😭

I wanna see a scene like this..😭
ā¤ļøMAGICALā¤ļø
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Wow its just so amazing , how you portrayed both Dev and Sonakshi's inner turmoil they thoughts their emotions



Thanks Shaun!😃
Glad that I touched the right chord with my words!šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

Its amazing
U write beautiful poems sonali
thanks for pm


Thanks Sona Di for encouraging me!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sharica

OH Sonali...such an apt and emotional poem...

You know what I imagined???

It was like Devakshi are standing facing each other and their hearts are talking...as audience we are hearing these lines which their hearts are reciting word by word...ā¤ļø No words coming out of mouth, its just their hearts...for the world around them, they are just looking at each other but inner feelings😭

I wanna see a scene like this..😭
ā¤ļøMAGICALā¤ļø



Wow!! Di!
What a brilliant thought!šŸ‘
I really want this to happen!
That Devakshi talking with each other thru their eyes!.
Thanx 4 encouraging me Di with ur kind words!😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful poem sonali..keep writing such poems its amazingšŸ‘

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