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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello my dear IF friends!
I'm back with my next creation!
The poem is about Devakshi's feelings regarding their separation!
How they are hiding their feelings from each other!
So here I go ...

There is so much to talk abt
Still we only have silences to share
For all that we have achieved through love
Is left to us to reminicise in despair


I don't know why
With u I feel so connected
And for the rest of the world
I'm just a sadistic person feeling dejected


Why is it so even I don't wish to
Still I acknowledge ur presence
I hate the fact that I can't hate you
Does that make any sense?!


Why did I love u so much
That only u've the power to give me pain
Why after several attempts
All my efforts to move on go in vain?


Despite we being separated
I only maintained the relation with u of Hate
I lost my best friend within u
Is it my mistake or my cruel fate?

Why can't I see someone
Between you & me!
When there are very less chances
That you& me become "We"

Now my eyes only do the talking
For they are the mirror to my inner self
Tears & anger that is what they posses
They are only God's creation aware of my state after myself

I once was your sunshine
At which u happily gazed
But now u close ur eyes looking at me
For which I'm upset though not amazed


Why do we stand so close to each other
When in real we r miles apart
Why do I feel so imcomplete without u
As I'm detached myself from some part

I may not appeal to u
Coz u think I'm liar as u say
I don't know why my heart refuses to hear my mind
And I always end up taking ur way!

P.S - all thoughts, criticism , views are welcome!
Hope my poem connected with u all
Hope I was able to convey my thoughts to u!
Pls drop in ur views regarding this!😉



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Posted: 8 years ago
#2

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

Hello my dear IF friends!

I'm back with my next creation!
The poem is about Devakshi's feelings regarding their separation!
How they are hiding their feelings from each other!
So here I go ...

There is so much to talk abt
Still we only have silences to share
For all that we have achieved through love
Is left to us to reminicise in despair


I don't know why
With u I feel so connected
And for the rest of the world
I'm just a sadistic person feeling dejected


Why is it so even I don't wish to
Still I acknowledge ur presence
I hate the fact that I can't hate you
Does that make any sense?!


Why did I love u so much
That only u've the power to give me pain
Why after several attempts
All my efforts to move on go in vain?


Despite we being separated
I only maintained the relation with u of Hate
I lost my best friend within u
Is it my mistake or my cruel fate?

Why can't I see someone
Between you & me!
When there are very less chances
That you& me become "We"

Now my eyes only do the talking
For they are the mirror to my inner self
Tears & anger that is what they posses
They are only God's creation aware of my state after myself

I once was your sunshine
At which u happily gazed
But now u close ur eyes looking at me
For which I'm upset though not amazed


Why do we stand so close to each other
When in real we r miles apart
Why do I feel so imcomplete without u
As I'm detached myself from some part

I may not appeal to u
Coz u think I'm liar as u say
I don't know why my heart refuses to hear my mind
And I always end up taking ur way!

P.S - all thoughts, criticism , views are welcome!
Hope my poem connected with u all
Hope I was able to convey my thoughts to u!
Pls drop in ur views regarding this!😉









This is soo beautiful n emotional too.. I was teary eyed while reading it.. I was reminiscing devakshi before n now ones..
Loved it too moon n black.. Each n every line has soo much pain depth..
U nailed it again shona..
Keeping posting poems like dis..
Luv u
God bless u..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#3

Beautiful poem Sonali ⭐️
TFS
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Posted: 8 years ago
#4
OMG! its amazingly beautiful sonali 👏
cancerian87 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#5
Lovely poem 👏 hope they get reunite soon😒
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Posted: 8 years ago
#6
Wonderful sona👏
So beautiful poem...
I could feel the pain you are trying to show..

Keep writing more😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#7
Wow its just so amazing , how you portrayed both Dev and Sonakshi's inner turmoil they thoughts their emotions

sona_naksh thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#8
Its amazing
U write beautiful poems sonali
thanks for pm
Cutiepie.sona thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: Dancer.kavya




This is soo beautiful n emotional too.. I was teary eyed while reading it.. I was reminiscing devakshi before n now ones..
Loved it too moon n black.. Each n every line has soo much pain depth..
U nailed it again shona..
Keeping posting poems like dis..
Luv u
God bless u..



Thanks Dear!😳
Glad that u understood it's depth!😉
Will keep writing like this
Thanks 4 ur encouragement!😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ria_Ca


Beautiful poem Sonali ⭐️
TFS



Thanks Ria Di😃

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