Devakshi TS: The Melting Hearts! #Feb 17 *Updated Part 2 on pg 6* - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: 27JAAN

Devakshi's love!!!

You've Beautifully portrayed the turmoil they're in

Thank you so much
Waiting for the next part


Thank u so much dr! 😃
Will update looking into the response! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Sharica

Beautiful portrayal of their emotions...loved it..

Update soon...


Thank u so much! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: sona_naksh

Beautiful ...
thanksfor pm
update soon


Thanks a lot! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Both Dev and Sonakshi still so much in love yet fighting all odds to stay away from each other but can their hearts listen to their minds
that's the only fact that both are still connected on some level and yes their hearts to still melt for each other

Again beautiful part , you have portrayed their inner feelings so well

waiting for next part


Exactly! Thank u so much dr! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Cutiepie.sona

Wow!!

Fantastic dear!👏
Both are playing hide & seek with their emotions
Both know that what they are feeling for each other!.
This is really heart-melting to see them like this!😭
I hope they unite in ur story asap!😉
Waiting 4 the next part dear!😃


Haha their emotions r overshadowed by their ego. And now they've overshadowed their ego and feeling their emotions! 😉
Thank u so much :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: rahulvats12

Wow..👏

Beautiful ...
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Thank u so much! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: binuuu

Amazing chapter...beautifully penned their emotions...

Still love is buried inside them.
Totally loved it..
Plzz update next part soon



Am glad. :)
Thank u so much :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Soumya21ag

Beautifully written👏

All their emotions were reflected in their eyes😭
I could literally picturise them in front of me
Thanks for the pm
Update the next part soon


Am glad that u were able to picturise through my writing! Means a lot! :)
Thank u so much :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: cscs

Its amazing. You have given a voice to Dev and Sona's inner feelings. They have put up their masks for more than 7 years and now gradually it slips from their faces when they are alone.

Loved it. Beautifully written.
N thanks for the PM.


Yes those masks hide their real feelings!
Thank u so much :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: lucky_princess

They r so in love with each other even today..

The eyelock was intense deep and flowing with unspoken emotions.
Very Beautiful...
Thanks for the pm.

Love Sharmi.


Yes, Eyes speak the language of heart. True to that, it was penned ;)
Thank u so much! :)

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