OS: Tadap tadap ke iss Dil se UPDATED 15/02/2017

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write2neetha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Very nice n emotional os..

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Binzzz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Aapii..

I don't know what to write...my heart will blast now...

Tears formed in my eyes😭

It was like all happenings were happening infront of me...

Dev's words😭😭😭

I felt very bad for him...

All his pain penned very well aappi..

Thankuu somuchh for writing this...

Leaving office n leave me part----i loved it very muchh...

Totally loved it...m a sadistic 😆...i love sad n emotional stories very much..

This story brought tears in my eyes...thankuu somuchh aappii...

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Soumya21ag

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

im literally crying dii😭😭

itna emotional os

main kya kahun

it was just beautiful

dev at last questioned his entire life in front of sonakshi

aur song to bilkul apt tha

i hope aapka next os iska continuation ho

thanks for the pm

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vinoguna

@vinoguna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

i cried too... 😭

even though i understand less Hindi... so couldnt connect the second part of the OS fully...

really... i hope can see this type of emotion & open up in the show.

i am sure both Shaheer & Erica will nailed it.

i can actually actually picture them in your scene... its so heart breaking, and here i'm with teary eyes in office... 🤗

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TAMOGHNAD11

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Awesomeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dev's pain is excellently depicted.
Sabko devakshi me separation me Dev ki galti ziyada lagta hai,.lekin mere khayalse Sona usme equally or Dev se bhi zyada doshi hai.
And no explanation can justify her decision of hiding a daughter from her father. It is totally wrong.

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Shaun

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

I've read this OS approximately about the same time you've send the PM but I was totally speechless and didn't know what to comment

again this morning I read this OS still the same effect and now after two hours I've decided to comment so sorry about that

OS indeed was painful and very emotional

the raw pain that came out from Dev

the questions that he ask Sonakshi though he does not wait for any answers neither does he accuse her of anything yet he wants to know if he loved his mother and wanted to see her happiness does it mean he is a mumma boy would she also tag their daughter as been a mumma's girl and surely its sad that he was kept away from his daughter the fact that Sonakshi had fear he'll snatch his daughter all because he was classified as a bad husband and yes he wants to know if been a bad husband justifies the Bose family to think he is a bad father , while reading this OS I could actually visualize the scenes and the more I did I could feel Dev's pain

you excellent in depicting his emotions his every word and wow the song is totally apt for this situation