OS: Tadap tadap ke iss Dil se UPDATED 15/02/2017 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
Oh my god Di it was so heart wrenching I could feel for dev how he must be feeling when his decision of loving sona got disappointed reactions from his family members the pain he went through all those times when the situation was out of his control his only grudge is that sona didn't fight for their love with his family members but would he have supported her if she tried to save their relationship by getting separated from his family I am sure he must have scolded her These emotions are very complicated sometimes we think dev's fault was more and sometimes we find sona wrong at some places It's really hard to decide But you wrote a beautiful conversation,It really made me cry By the way you told your next OS was going to be about sona and her pregnancy
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
Aazeen 🤗
The day i knew ki u r gonna write sth like this i knew i will cry reading it ...and cry i did 😭
subah subah kitna rulaaya hai aapne meko ...
Although the pain of a breaking relationship is same for dev and sona ...but even after dat sona had a reason and hope to live but dev dint makes him all d more miserable and increases his pain wid leaps n bounds ...
I wish we get to see such breakdown some day ...
perfectly brought out emotions
thanks for writing it
thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Emotional! Very much!
Heart wrenching pain!!
Well written! Awesome!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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"I told and you left? When you knew how tormented I was?" he asked.

"Dev, I thought you had chosen your mother over me, and so I left, since you wanted me to leave." She defended.

"For the past many days, I am asking you to leave this office... Why didn't you leave it then?" he asked.

"Because this is my office too... I have bought it, I have worked so hard for it. Why should I leave? If you have a problem with me, you may leave this premise." She answered what she knew were answers to her own questions from life... His next reply was apt.

"That goes for both the times we separated... Wasn't I yours? Wasn't Ishwari Niwas your own house? Didn't you work hard on loving me, marrying me, and sustaining that marriage? Wasn't that an investment for life? If I asked you to leave, why did you?" he asked...

She gulped down the lump building in the throat...

"Do you know how it feels when your love, who claims to know you by your pulse, judging by the superficial anger and agitated emotions walks away, when all your heart is screaming for you to show me my foot and tell that she won't leave, no matter what?"



The above lines are so good...the entire chapter is beautifully articulated...had tears in my eyes...I really hope that CV gives a similar scene betwen... Dev and Sona...I want Dev to break down in front of Sona...it should be emotional one...
Edited by WeRockTheWorld - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
Bas karo yaar, I can't cry any more. It took lot of time to gather myself at the end. 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Its so emotional. 😭
Hats off to you for bringing up this. Its like Dev summarised his whole life journey in front of Sonakshi.
Beautifully written.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it is so heart touching... every word u wrote .. it seems it is coming out straight from Dev's heart... so emoltional... I don't have words to describe.. how much I love this ...

exceptionally great...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Why the hell I read it again...I don't believe..I am again crying..😭
I told you, your writing is like I am watching it happening in front of me...and imagining Shaheer with all these dialogues...You know how it feels😭

Superb writing and superb actors...I wish we could get something like this...That will be Sharica at its best
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
how u managed to write this..literally crying after reading ur os..it is too good and too emotional😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Amazing di!!!
Thank you so much for writing this OS ❤️

Tears rolled down my cheeks di.
All I could imagine was our sharica enacting this scene
Would love to see this part in our show

May God bless you di!
Keep writing
Your words carry all the required emotions di👏

P.S.- can you please continue this with sona's reactions too

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