DevAkshi OS - Unconventional way..(my 3rd story) - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jade0001

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Loved every bit of it </font>

<font face="Georgia" size="3">Now isn't that cool Vicky goes to jail </font>


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Abt Vicky IKR
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: randommusings

All three parts are very well written n touching.

Haha..never in wildest dreams I can imagine Sona using Joey's story...it was real funny.


Thanks for the comment..
Well iam bad at romantic writing so went with a funny twist so even if sucks i can say i suck at the most difficult thing-to make people laughlaugh 😉 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Lovely ...and yes I prefer the unconventional way for them till that insecure lady is there... 😉


Thanks..
Yeah it's better than ruining life..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: randomramblings

i loved this unconventional ending. they dont have to explain their relationship to anybody and as adults i totally agree to what they deem fit.


I know right..people gonna talk anyway so it's better to do what you wanna do..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: moni160282

What a nice Valentine gift u gave us. It was afantabulous os. Their desperation was shown so well. I enjoyed reading it. Sometimes it's not necessary to give a identity to a relation. Love is what all matters.


Thank you so much for lovely comment..
Yeah when there is love no need to fit in the relationship definition given by society
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nonie12345

<font color="#669966" size="3">Amazing OS😃</font>


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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
a lovely os
read all three parts
u should write more😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Brilliant
Loved the romantivc part in the end too
Do write more
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Hey goodness!
I'm a F.R.I.E.N.D.S. fan too
Good to see many other fans

Btw sona using joey's line was ultimate🤣
Thank God that you didn't change ishwari's character
That lady is far from redemption

Loved all the parts!

Keep writing,please😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I m loving each installment of your work. Do write more.

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