SS:Papa and his Pari(Dev-Soha Bonding)*COMPL* EPILOGUE pg124 26/3/2017 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Try logging in from your pc/laptop...
The last time it was the same problem for me... When I was trying to upload from my cellphone...
But then I logged in from laptop to upload, toh ek second mein ho gaya...
Try doing that for once..

Originally posted by: sa1234B

Wonderful start 👏...loved it so much

Beautifully penned down soha emotions...its really heart touching & emotional

Eagerly waiting for next part...Thanks for pm

Thank you very much Sugandhita...
Next update, I don't know when it is coming... All I will say is ASAP.

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

This was SOOO amazing! What a fantastic bonding between this adorable Pari and her papa. Just made me realize how much our dads mean to us girls. This was sooo cute. I'm not joking when I say I wholeheartedly wish for an exact execution of this meeting. I have no idea how Dev would feel to realize this angel is his own little doll. There was a clear underlying message of the fact that the heart always knows. I mean for her, who is he anyway. An uncle of a classmate who doesn't fail to drive her crazy. But yet she felt so incredibly hesitant to call him uncle because it just didn't feel the right word to name their bond yet she was so free and willing to pour herself to a complete stranger. It was enthralling to read and envision this warm escape of homeliness when someone so distant and strange and not related to you feels so familiar and so friendly. My heart has all the feels of cosy warmth and a hearty satisfaction. Truly hope you continue this and cannot wait to read more!

Your comments always come as a warm surprise to me... Are they some magical words you play with or what, I don't know, but they are intriguing...

To be honest, I wasn't a daddy's girl to be exact, yet I understand it thoroughly that dads mean a lot, no matter what...

We are getting an almost execution of this story in the show... Just that "Buddy" became "Friend" and instead of getting an emotional injury she got a physical injury in the show...
otherwise I can see the show on the same lines...

Dev will clearly come to know about his daughter, wait and watch... But this strong pull that Dev and Soha feel are evident both in the show and in my story...
And I really appreciate the fact that in both the stories, Soha never called Dev an "uncle" he was rather a friend...

I have no words to compete with your comment... So, I will wind up with a Thank you... And of course I will continue this story... Thanks a ton for such a satisfying comment...

Originally posted by: mena_k

Lovely!

Please do continue...would be waiting 😊

Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: star.21

Suchh an emotional one😭😭

First of all thankyou!!🤗I was pleasently surprised reading my name at the beginning of the SS😛☺️

And thankyou to both Anjali and Sona di for helping you with this SS.😊

Coming to the SS, how do you manage to write soo well!! Whatever be the concept , you do the full justice to it👏

Really loved how Dev talked to Soha...and Soha telling him about her father and how she wished she met him and played around with him..but at the same time did not want to make her mom feel bad...

The way you related it to Dev's situations were too good👏

Waiting for your further updates😳

Hahaha.. Tell me about this name game... I had changed this girl Ashwini's name thrice... And finally settled at your name... Exhausting I tell you.. 😆

awww Ashwini, now that's being humble from your part... I don't claim to do justice to every topic I pick up... Sometimes I write pure garbage also... 😆

Dev and Suhana are the passengers of the same boat... Exactly similar... Isn't it?

Next updates may come asap...

Originally posted by: Ria_Ca

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Beautiful OS Aazeen.luved it...thanks to u, Sona and Anjali ⭐️</font>

Thank you Ria di...

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Upar wale ka karam hai Soumya that he gave me this one talent to write anything that voices in my head... My parents who had instilled this keeda to write when they motivated me in the language subjects... Can't say anything other than that, how I write... 😆

Thank you for your comment... I am really ecstatic that they are showing in the same lines in the show too...

I am glad u liked the update...

PS: Ab mat rona that I didn't reply on your comment... Ho Gaya...

I may post another update tonight...
The comments that are left to be reverted to, kindly don't lose heart, I will do that tomorrow...

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Your comments always come as a warm surprise to me... Are they some magical words you play with or what, I don't know, but they are intriguing...

To be honest, I wasn't a daddy's girl to be exact, yet I understand it thoroughly that dads mean a lot, no matter what...

We are getting an almost execution of this story in the show... Just that "Buddy" became "Friend" and instead of getting an emotional injury she got a physical injury in the show...
otherwise I can see the show on the same lines...

Dev will clearly come to know about his daughter, wait and watch... But this strong pull that Dev and Soha feel are evident both in the show and in my story...
And I really appreciate the fact that in both the stories, Soha never called Dev an "uncle" he was rather a friend...

I have no words to compete with your comment... So, I will wind up with a Thank you... And of course I will continue this story... Thanks a ton for such a satisfying comment...

Next chapter in another half an hour.