SS - Can we talk? Part 6 pg 84 Feb 14 - Page 7

Originally posted by: vayu_prachi

Beautifully written Di
Loved it!!

Originally posted by: Itsveena

Amazing writing .. No words.. just want to take a nap and visualize eveything you wrote .. you are an excellent writer and wish CV's learnt something from you ..stopped watching season 2 and reading the updates as i feel the whole essence of season 1 was gone like in many other serials .. after I read this I will believe our Dev and ishwari learnt their lesson and sona won 👏

Originally posted by: jigsaw1234

Excellent. Thats a mature drama! Loved it!!

Originally posted by: Devakshilover

Oh I loved it loved it
please please continue soon with their mature discussion

Originally posted by: fanktlk

Thank you Thank you

Most of the times before you write an OS we do discuss but for this OS I will gladly accept the credit.

You keep threatening to quit the forum and I look for ways to pull you back in.

When I first mentioned to you the Dev- Ishwari confrontation , i knew these 3 wont introspect and if they don't they wont see their own faults and the story wont move ahead. Soha had to be the trigger and seriously I am a little annoyed with the entire gender battle.

I knew I was planting the seed in your head and wasn't surprised that you wanted to write the OS.

Let me add a couple of my thought.

These 3 are in their own bubble and till they dont introspect I don't see them getting out. Dev was willing to listen to Sona vent only because he just walked in, in front of his daughter and the first look that she gave him was of being scared. That shook him and made him take a step back and bow down.

This will hopefully burst his bubble.

Ishwari would still continue ranting it is all Sona's fault but Dev questioning her that she would have behaved the same in case of any other girl will shake her core and make her bow down. You never wanted me to get married... Hopefully this would break Ishwari's bubble.

Sona has always been a mature and a sensitive girl... Dev didn't really say sorry but he sent flowers the same way he did the first time he apologized... This will make Sona take a step back and also force her to introspect.

Though I don't want Soha to be the reason Dev and Sona are together, undoubtedly she will be the trigger.

I do hope this post is shared with the CVs

Originally posted by: fandw

Wow, its beyond excellent. Hats off to you. 👏👏

Originally posted by: gmgi

Hi Divya

Lovely review👏. So when will you write next? What about writing the next part for this or introspection of Ishu Maa since Suvi can't get under her skin. Suvi make her write na.😃

Originally posted by: Push-pull

👏 This is just beautiful..

Thank you

If only if only.. The CVs put their brains into proper use to come up with a script like this... If only they can open their own eyes to see the flaws in Dev and Ishwari.. If only they really put their thirst for drama into proper channel and bring the right kinda drama.. 😉

Exactly. There is no need for them to let go of logic for the sake of drama. Wonderful actors they've got who can emote with ease. Two strong scenes from Shaheer and we'd all be rooting for him.

If only they can read this and copy it as is.. 👏

And you know what.. I'm in the process of drafting something in the same line.. I'm surprised to see how similarly we have been aligned in certain points.. Let me edit my draft to keep something different else it will look like a copy yes mind copy.. 😆

You know what they say. Great minds think alike. 😉 😆

Originally posted by: asha2012

Hi Suvika

This OS was so so so beautiful and touching. How I wish the CVs also take this route!

You write so beautifully!

Love

Asha

Originally posted by: DevakshiCrazy

It was awesome...absolutely amazing
Please forward this to the cv's if u could
I want to.see something like this on d show
N yes thanks for the pm