SS - Can we talk? Part 6 pg 84 Feb 14 - Page 8

Originally posted by: moni160282

Thanks suvika for the brilliant os. U have not only vented out frustation of Sonakshi and dev but also of our fans. Hope CVs read it and we get something like this on screen.

Originally posted by: sarsee

This is brilliant. Is there a way to get it to the CVs

Originally posted by: mena_k

Brilliant 👏

Thousand likes for your post 😛

Originally posted by: write2neetha

Just loved it... True they both need to talk first..

Originally posted by: sia.krpkab

Amazing! So bloody good :)

Are the CVs reading this?

Originally posted by: Krpkab_superfan

This is by far the best thing I have read that address all the issues between Dev and Sona...

It is great for a write up but I think the show will not be able to take such a quick route to redeeming Dev or making Sona convey her feelings.. I am sure it will come in parts in the show, maybe over 4-5 different conversations.. if they move things so fast, they will have to close the show soon which all of us dont want😉

Thank you.

And I think the conversations shouldn't be split. These two had to get it all out in one shot. Of course, that is my personal opinion. And split into 4 or 5 or a single one, I would still be glad if they really DO talk.

As for the speed... need not. This talk is just the beginning. They have barely touched their issues. If they increase the drama quotient after this conversation and go step by step, this show would still have a long way to go.

And I would rather have a show with a tight script for a short time instead of a dragging story for a long time. Again.. this is my personal opinion. Not trying to push it on anyone.

I would seriously want CVs to read this though.. wish someone can put it up on twitter tagging Mamta/Durjoy.. it will really give them a perspective on how to keep the confrontation and further push Ishwari down in Dev's eyes..

Keep writing.. great job👏

Originally posted by: ..natasha..

Superb OS

I hope makers read it and take some ideas from here

Show is at stand still now...not moving forward just going round and round in same tracks

Originally posted by: Suvika.

<font color="#0000ff">But this is single part OS na. I continue and it will become SS. Bahut lamba hojaayega.</font>

Originally posted by: fanktlk

Thank you Thank you

Most of the times before you write an OS we do discuss but for this OS I will gladly accept the credit.

So you should.

You keep threatening to quit the forum and I look for ways to pull you back in.

Humph!! As if I don't know that!! 😆

When I first mentioned to you the Dev- Ishwari confrontation , i knew these 3 wont introspect and if they don't they wont see their own faults and the story wont move ahead. Soha had to be the trigger and seriously I am a little annoyed with the entire gender battle.

I knew I was planting the seed in your head and wasn't surprised that you wanted to write the OS.

Yes. You planted the seed, watered it and waited for two days. When I said sabr. You said not fair, how much sabr. It was like a guy saying - I planted the seed and got you pregnant and now you are saying I have to wait 9 months for the baby to pop out!! Honestly!! 😡 😆

Let me add a couple of my thought.

These 3 are in their own bubble and till they dont introspect I don't see them getting out. Dev was willing to listen to Sona vent only because he just walked in, in front of his daughter and the first look that she gave him was of being scared. That shook him and made him take a step back and bow down.

This will hopefully burst his bubble.

If it doesn't, he doesn't deserve to be called a male lead. 😡

Ishwari would still continue ranting it is all Sona's fault but Dev questioning her that she would have behaved the same in case of any other girl will shake her core and make her bow down. You never wanted me to get married... Hopefully this would break Ishwari's bubble.

I have no clue on this woman!! That is why I'd said to you that I don't want to write Ishwari introspection because I simply don't KNOW her anymore.

Sona has always been a mature and a sensitive girl... Dev didn't really say sorry but he sent flowers the same way he did the first time he apologized... This will make Sona take a step back and also force her to introspect.

Hopefully, yes. After all, she had every reason to narrate the past to Soha in such a way that the daughter would absolutely HATE her father. But she didn't do that.

Though I don't want Soha to be the reason Dev and Sona are together, undoubtedly she will be the trigger.

I think at this point, this is the only trigger that would work. Get them to think instead of giving knee-jerk reactions whenever they come face to face.

I do hope this post is shared with the CVs

And I do hope you decide and start thinking 😉 😆

Originally posted by: dbrk

Loved it! Dev's ignorance and baseless blames are giving me sleepless nights. Hope Dev soon gets some insight.