SS - Can we talk? Part 6 pg 84 Feb 14 - Page 56

Originally posted by: Dystopia

Beautiful SS. I've been reading your story ever since the first part and now that I have finally signed up to IF I figured I really need to tell you both how wonderful this is. All the conversations are so amazing and it reminds me of old KRPKAB days.

Can't wait for the next part. Please update soon

Originally posted by: komal793

Loved the update. Love how Dev and Soha are bonding 😊
Dev-Ishwari part was fantastic 👏
Do continue soon.

Originally posted by: deepsel

I am back 😎 First of all extra jhappi for pulling a midnight stunt for this update🤗

Terminator style, huh!! 😆

Sona- Boses:

How beautifully you both have written Sona handling Bijoy on the phone👏 This made so much sense for the reasons she had to stay back in Delhi and the flow is very convincing! You guys also kept Bijoy true to his character of mistrust in Dev but still his trust intact on Sona without any unnecessary screaming!! Loved how she made them stay in Kolkata instead of hurrying like we saw in original..who doesn't like some lone Devakshi moments huh😉 How cute that picture Suha drawn was !I would literally visualize it through your capable writing!!

Actually that's what I did. Searched Google images for kids drawings and picked one. Described it the best I could. Ever since Divya wrote that scene about Sonakshi clicking the picture, I wanted to write Dev getting it from Soha. 😆

Ishwari:

Very typical of her to seek kitchen to share her happiness😆 and even more typical of her to judge Sona what she might or might not doGuess what Ishwari, our writers here have already made Dev know about his daughter unlike your CVs who want to prove you right at any cost😈

And we also made sure Soha wasn't conceived during the Ishwari-planned-Shimla trip 🤣

Dev - Suha:

Oh what a beauty of writing here ❤️ I can't wait to see this happen on screen!! I visualized Dev's bright face with soft tears in the corner of his eyes when he witnessed his princess drawing, Sona's flowing emotions seeing father-daughter bonding, Soha's pride in showing her talent and her bliss seeing a happy papa..absolutely fantastic ladies 👏 I loved how Sona had maintained every memory of Suha so Dev doesn't miss those 6 years even though if not in person..I could feel Dev's flurry of emotions here , can't help but feel for this poor guy !!

It is always difficult to narrate a scene where all the characters present in the scene are to remain in the centre of attention and all their emotions and feelings have to be covered. Glad this scene came out the way I wanted you all to visualise it.

Dev - Golu:

I loved that Dev is still the same old Bigcha for Golu even after knowing about his daughter..such a cute bond they share and I literally LMAO imagining Golu and Soha together putting Dev in the spot😆

Devakshi - Kids:

Awww the mere words in single sentence is such a bliss to read, I wonder what will be my condition if i happen to see this on screen😆 Loved how Sona bared her heart about her fear (Yo Jatin take a hike buddy..you are not needed here😆) and Dev's comforting words are even more bang on..definitely lot has changed Sonakshi, which you have no idea about!! Loved how Dev managed both kids taking turns and making them special👏 It was really bliss..which was missed for six long years , only if they had the brains to sit and introspect years back

I will let Divya comment on this one since she is the one who brought it to life. 😃

Devakshi - ishwari:

Oh the mere words in single sentence is sending scare waves 😆 As expected she barges to his office to question about her rights and I love Dev's words here " My daughter didn't have father for 6 years because of you, now I won't separate her from her mother again because of you" 👏 whoever wrote this take a bow ladies !! And the surprise of all Sona hears this

I wrote but it actually came out during our brainstorming session. Initially I thought of writing this scene taking place in Dixit Mansion but then how would Sona come to know? She wouldn't go there and he wouldn't tell her. So we brought Ishwari to the office.

Should I say more how much am looking forward to next part 😳 Thank you for this reading delight ladies !!

And thank YOU for this feedback!!

Originally posted by: fanktlk

Hi Girls...

Finally I am back from hibernation... 😆😆

I was travelling on account of work , So home front took a hit . Just settling things now. Though managed to dole out the last part. Didn't really get a chance to log in and read the reviews. Imagine you write a post and don't even get a chance to read a review... I felt like I was chained down.

Oh well...

Will definitely log in today and reply to all the wonderful comments...

Thanks for all the appreciation...

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

Finally read this! What a breath of fresh air! I cannot thank you guys enough for yet another meticulously stunning and venturous write up. First of all, Ishwari. Miss Delusional. I'm so happy to envision Dev in this completely honest closure where he has completely shredded that blindfold into pieces. He has seen her in utmost clarity and he can completely feel Sonakshi's pain and concern regarding their little angel - Suhana Bose. His own world of bliss when he hears Soha address her as Papa, that completely sold me. Made me remember how much our dads mean to us and how protective they are of us girls. This was absolutely fantastic with each scene marking its own beauty in my memory and giving me a mesmerizing experience. Thank you again! Can't wait for the next update. This is one hell of a masterpiece!

Originally posted by: gmgi

Originally posted by: write2neetha

Very beautiful update... Please continue soon... 👏